this is my first fanfic on here so please comment and be honest like bad creepypata because screw constructive criticism
"Are you sure this is the right thing to do?" said a young male sayian with spiki hair. "this has to work my friend." an older sayian with a beard said, by this point freiza was just about ready to blow up planet vageta and everyone on it but there was a one couple who wanted to keep there baby safe and with the help of there friend they were able to send the child to some random planet to protect him. but what they dident know was that two more pods fallowed it. one holding a young 5 year old girl with short black hair with two small spikes at the top she was not to keen on going but it was to protect her brother and there family friend. the other had a baby boy barly 1 year old the baby had short black poofy hair and black eyes. the babys were sound asleep and the girl watched as her home was dystroyed.
MANY HOURS LATER
after two hours all three pods where coming close the planet they should land on, but there was one problem since all three pods had random qawordentes on them all three pods would land on the same planet but in compleatly diffrent locations on said planet. the first pod laned on a mouten. the secand on a beach. and the third on a random island.
"ho my!" said a woman with pink hair "what is it rose!" said a pale woman with a spear "did something happen!" said a red one with gontlents "hay that land on my faveret spot!" said a short purple one with a wip...
OKAY THAT HAPPEND TUNE IN FOR CHAPTER ONE WHEN ITS READY SINCE I'M HAVEING A HARD TIME USING THIS FANFICTION DOT NET THING ALSO HERES A CHALLENGE TRY TO GUESS THE NAME OF THE SISTER OF MY OC CHARECTER IT'S SOMEONE WHO WILL SURPISE YOU