Yeah... so this is my first FF... so please be nice in the review :3
i need feedback to tell me if i should keep writing... PLEASE Read and Review because you'll get a yummy warm soft choclate chip cookie if you do :P (lol that ryhmed!)
Yay! so... on with the story!
(I dont own Naruto... Kishi does...)
The Day Everything Changed
Chapter One
Chat Room B.
HinaLuvsYou has just logged on;
ThatBoyInYourDreams has just logged on;
HinaLuvsYou "hey"
ThatBoyInYourDreams "oh... hey"
HinaLuvsYou "how's your day going?"
ThatBoyInYourDreams "ok, i guess... y do u ask?"
HinaLuvsYou "oh idk"
ThatBoyInYourDreams "ok..."
HinaLuvsYou "can I ask you a question?"
ThatBoyInYourDreams "hah you just did..."
HinaLuvsYou "oh heh... yeah, can i ask a real question tho?"
ThatBoyInYourDreams "ok..."
HinaLuvsYou "who do you like? because there's been rumurs and i just want to get things straight..."
ThatBoyInYourDreams "oh... well i like a girl..."
HinaLuvsYou "fine. if your not going to tell me then at least describe her for me."
ThatBoyInYourDreams "ok, well her eyes... they're a stunning color. chilled yet, sweet... they can read anyone like an open is... one of the happiest ppl that i know. and im soooo lucky to have know her for what feels like FOREVER! She has beautiful shiny hair yet she always attempts t hide her beauty. And to tell you something, Hinata, is that... i think im in love with her..."
HinaLuvsYou *to self* "NO! he's totally talking about TenTen, i have seen them together a lot lately..." *to self*
HinaLuvsYou "oh... cool..."
ThatBoyInYourDreams "yeah..."
ThatBoyInYourDreams "so who do you like?"
HinaLuvsYou "ME?"
ThatBoyInYourDreams "yeah... are you ok?"
HinaLuvsYou "heheheheheh yep. hahah never better..."
HinaLuvsYou "uh..."
HinaLuvsYou "well..."
HinaLuvsYou "the thing is..."
HinaLuvsYou "That i like and..."
HinaLuvsYou "im possibly in love with..."
ThatBoyInYourDreams "im sorry hina-chan..."
HinaLuvsYou "oh... what is it naruto?"
ThatBoyInYourDreams "im sorry... but i have tp leave... ino's shop is about to close up and i need some flowers for that girl... bye"
HinaLuvsYou "oh ok... bye"
ThatBoyInYourDreams has logged off;
HinaLuvsYou "the thing is... Naruto... is that... i... i Love you..."
HinaLuvsYou has logged off;
~Later that night~
*the doorbell rings*
"I'll get it" Hinata called
*opens door*
"Hey, I brought you those flowers ;)" Naruto said while holding out the flowers.
*GASP*
*faint*
Oh my goodness! Hinata! *picks her up and takes her up to her room*
Hinata felt around and looked up and sees Naruto looking down at her in her room. She jumps out of him lap blushing deeply and starring her feet.* "Naruto! I'm terribly sorry! For whatever happened! But what did happen?"
Naruto gets up, walks over to Hinata and takes her hands "well first I came over with some flowers and you fainted so I took you up to your room when you mum wasn't looking. Then u were mumbling things. Then you woke up."
'shit! What did i say! He seems to be looking at my lips a lot! An he's even holding my hands!'
"Naruto Iー"
Hinata was interrupted by lips crashing down on hers. At first she didn't know what had happened. Then she realized that Naruto was kissing her! She almost fainted but instead she surprised herself by kissing him back. Quite passionately might I add. Naruto let go of her hands to rap his around her waist and pull her closer. Hinata ruffled her fingers through the beautiful blonde's hair while resting her elbows on his shoulders lightly. They both broke their lips apart simultaneously. Hinata just starred into his eyes.
'I-I. Just. Kissed. Naruto. And… and he k-kissed me… FIRST?' Hinata thought
Hinata was frozen and Naruto was worried.
'Oh no! Does she hate me? Was I bad at kissing? Why won't she say anything? GASP does she even like me?' Naruto thought worriedly.
Hinata notice the panic in his eyes and quickly smiled. Naruto saw her smile and immediately let's his feelings if worry go. Her smile could always fix everything.
Suddenly he felt her pull him close and press her warm lips against his. He felt her soft skin against his cheek and felt her gentle fingers stroke the back of his neck. He calmed down and kissed her back again. Time froze. He felt like the happiest guy in the world. He wondered if Hinata knew that he, Naruto, had loved her since he had first saw her.
Hinata wondered the same thing. They slowly made their way to Hinata's bed and sat down.
Still kissing Naruto felt something wet fall into his cheek. He opened his eyes to see Hinata was crying. He let go and looked at her with confusion.
Hinata opened her eyes and notice everything was blurry. Was she crying? She felt her cheek. Yeah she was! At this realization she turned to face away from Naruto. She wouldn't let her longtime love see her cry for no reason. And she remembered something! Something she had to tell Naruto. Then she heard a soft voice say her name.
Naruto saw Hinata turn away from him. Had he done something wrong? Why was she crying? And why wouldn't she look at him?
OOOOO CLIFTHANGER!
Yep... Thats the first Chapter! :) please Rewiew! it'll make me happy and i'll motivate me to make the next chappie! :P
-Poma G, out!-
