New changes for Eragon and Harry Potter
By Robert kingett
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Warning
This story does have some racial conflict but it is brief. I have to confirm two things. One: make your emails screen reader accessible because I AM blind. In addition, I have black friends so nobody think I am racist, I clearly state in this story that color dose not matter to me But the person.
Authors note; I had to split this chapter up into two parts because it was too long
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Part 1
Chapter 1 is that a dragon?
The ropes bounded me so tightly I squirmed hard, but still could not break free. A gun hit my face
"Keep still you brat!"
"You know Jason," I said, "you can't hit me."
"Why not?"
"Because." I said, "You will make marks."
"So!"
"Therefore," I sneered, "The cops and john will know I was mistreated "
Beside me, Connie mounts, a short plump girl with curly black hair wobbled as she tried to move.
Jason saw and whipped her with the butt of his gun. See this is not weird to my two friends and me Connie and Amanda because we are amateur detectives. No, I am serious WE BUST CRIMINALS AND IT'S MORE Dangerous THAN TV, and as I sat in my chair bound by four different knots. To top it all off I had, a total maniac in front of me. Not to mention a rich snob curia kyat… such a weird name. However, you just cannot stand slapping her across the face. Her mouth is a bomb! In addition, she is them kind of preps that will speak her mind. Like she was doing now.
"You are like so mean! My father will totally like catch you. You are so mean-"
"Shut up!" we all said
"NO!" she wined. "Where's gorge? (Her dog he had killed) I want my baby! Ugh."
She wined some more.
"Can I just have some like makeup? I look like Steve wonder."
She started panting. The person crept up behind her and dealt a massive blow to the head. She slumped forward unconscious. He laughed at her
I was ticked off, but I had a plan. I decided to put it into action.
"Hey!" I said you're a coward doing that when she was not looking!"
"Hey." He said "come on let's let you be the hostage. I was going to use her but your more valuable to that friend of yours. You know that cop you hang around with a lot. Maybe he will see reason if I have his white slave held at gunpoint!"
That is exactly what I wanted.
He untied me. Than tied me to a wall so I could not move. Then, he turned to Connie and told her to be a good girl and not to run off. Unfortunately, his back pocket was within my grasp and his gun was in the pocket. In addition, I could move my hands so I reached into his pocket, and then took out the gun. I took out the bullets, and then put it back. Fortunately, he did not notice
PART 2 of chapter 1
He led me to a small window on the second floor. Looking down I saw john, a black man (and also me and my mom's best friend) staring up at us. Carrying an oozy sub machine gun with double barrels, he was purple. A danger sign in him. His voice shook the windows as he roared
"LET HIM GO!"
"No!" Jason said grabbing my neck and holding the butt of his gun to my temple
"If any of your men come in here, he dies!"
I mouthed no bullets to john, and he got the message. He raised a radio and men started breaking down the front door
"Stay back!" Jason shrieked shooting me. Finally, he realized I was alive and tried to choke me
I backhanded him hard.
I heard his nose crack.
Before he could react, I spun around swept my legs behind his legs, tripped him than I found the pressure points in the neck, and squeezed. He passed out in three seconds. Just then, two SWAT people came in the room
"Hands up" one cop ordered pointing a handgun at me
The other was john. He pushed the gun away.
"It's all right. He is on our side."
The other cop turned red
"Oh…" He said "sorry."
"That's ok," I said sarcastically. "Everybody thinks we are bad until we tell our story"
"Speaking of stories" john said, "Tell us why Jason kidnapped his own daughter and you two for that matter."
"He wanted money," I said simply. "He could not get it through his wife."
"Why not?" the cop asked
"Because the will left him out."
"What are you talking about?" The cop beside john said again.
I pulled out the paper and began to read
I will be gone soon. Therefore, I want my King to look after my three jacks. kings are powerful but a jack is not. One is missing. He must stay lost and not return to the pot of gold…
"The rest is ripped," I said but "that is ok because there is enough evidence here to prove I am right."
"Show us" john said
I pulled out a playing card from my pocket
"Look at the will." I said, "The second King has a small K, so she must have meant the card. And so I looked at it, and realized that it has no mustache."
The nameless cop snickered
"Wow! Good job! Anyone can see that. What are you? Blind?"
"I can't see out of my right eye," I said calmly
"Go on" john said
"Jason is a triplet. Did you know that?" I sneered
"No." the cop said
"Ok." I said, "His brothers all have a mustache except for him. Also, there's another part of the will that points directly to him. The will mentions a pot of gold."
"So!" the nameless cop said again.
"Therefore," I said, "Connie and me did some snooping"
"Like always." john said with a smile.
"Yes," I said, "and we found out that he was in jail for trying to steel some gold, and his mother wanted us to know that, so she put in that little clue".
I pulled out the prison records and handed them to john
"Why were YOU and Connie Kidnapped?"
"Because," I said, "we figured out the will, and he knew it. When I tried to get more dirt on him, he became aware that he was being watched. Therefore, he kidnapped us to shut us up because he knew we would go strait to you with info."
"Therefore," he does not get the money just a house that is worth $100. Therefore, the only way he could get some cash fast was to kill his daughter.
"Hey! I thought you were just a kid trying to cause trouble when you hacked into the states security systems, but I can see you were trying to help john. Sorry I tried to bust you that day." The cop said
Later Connie, john and I all stepped outside
"Way to go" Connie said "we do it again!" she slapped me on the back.
"Hey," john said, "I have an idea."
"What?" both of us asked.
"How about a new Xbox 360 you two deserve it. I will take you sometime this week. OK?"
He led us to his squad car.
I opened the passenger door
Eragon flew over this small town in the dead of night, looking for that kid he had been sent after. Not to capture, but to protect. He did not see what was so interesting about two kids that were not riders, had no magic, and worst of all had brains. Just then, he heard Saphira speak in his head.
"I know what you are thinking, but there's more to them than they know. Just have patients little one, and let's take honor on this quest."
"Yeah," said Eragon. "But there just kids, how can they help destroy the Galbatorix?"
Then he saw a figure moving in the house.
"we have to burn the place down!" Saphira said.
"Why?"
"Because, he is after both of us, me and you, and those kids, this is for our and their own good."
"OK." Eragon said. "Do it."
Just then, I heard a WHOOSH sound, then I smelled smoke my first thought was that a person was dropping a bomb on us. Then I turned and saw the apartment in flames! Then I looked up the only thing I saw, even with the glow of the fire was a big bird thing with huge wings that could cover a whole house. It just flapped there for a few seconds, then took off