This is my second attemp at a Fan Fic, the first went disastrously so sorry, i hope this one will be better. Please R&R with any ideas you have..x


Max's POV

"Maaaaaaaaaaaaxxxx"

I woke instantly, ready for battle. To my surprise nothing was unusual, we were safe, well as safe as 6 mutant bird kids and one mutant bird dog ever are. Late last night we rolled into our 3rd house in as many days after being chased from our previous by the group of erasers that are currently tracking us.

"If we aren't being attacked someone will pay for waking me up", i growled at my flock which were standing round the door of the room id chose to sleep in, Nudge was the first to sheepishly look away so i chose her to rush at and tackle before starting the ultimate torture, tickling.

"Why?" I demanded.

"We were hungry and Iggy had nothing to cook"

I stopped at this point and decided that maybe we should go and get some food, but seeing as i was rudely awaken, and the fact that Fang obviously hadn't been disturbed by the noise, the rest of the flock should go to the nearest store and get whatever food the liked, leaving me to wake Mr Happy.

Once the rest of the flock had left i decided to have a shower before even thinking about waking Fang up. I started the shower giving the water a chance to run hot, once the water was warm enough for me to shower in i turned the radio on and started singing while thoroughly washing the grime from last nights fight out of my hair. I repeated this several times and tried to make my shower last as long as possible. Finally I stepped out the shower and wrapped a towel round me and stepped out the en-suite. Yes, we do break into the houses we think are nice. I shut the door behind me so that the steam wouldn't get into my bedroom and i almost dropped my towel in surprise because sitting on my bed was Fang.

Fang, the boy who i grew up in the dog crate next to, the boy who i practised fighting with once Jeb had rescued us, the boy who i recently decided i loved, the boy who sends me so many confusing signs, the boy who was currently sitting on my bed staring at me in a towel while holding the only lacy item of clothing i own.

In shock i sat down on the edge of my bed and reached for my lacies, Fang managed to pull them out my reach just in time. My momentum made me topple over and in my attempt to hold onto my towel i fell backwards onto the bed. To my surprise Fang flicked my lacies away and lay back beside me. My heart started thumping and i was sure he could hear it, i tried to sit up but Fang pulled me back down but instead of where i had been lying i ended up on top of him. Since when has Fang been Mr Romantic? I was glad everyone else was away otherwise this would be embarrassing, i was going to have a hard time keeping myself from thinking about this otherwise Angel would tell everyone.

I tried to squirm away but Fang held me tight, if it was anyone else i would have kicked the ((insert word of choice)) out of them, but as it was Fang i didn't mind. I was about to demand he let me go but he kissed me, it caught me by surprise so i kissed back, this seemed to surprise him but he moved one arm to behind my head so he could angle both of us better, our kiss deepened. I was the first to pull away as id noticed that my towel was slipping down, we both lay back gasping for breath.

After a minute or so i decided it was time to resume normality. Kicking Fang out of my room was my top priority but as i sat up he left without saying a word, seriously that boy confuses me, he has got to be the only person in the history of the earth that can walk in and kiss someone and leave without saying a word.

I decided that i would have to have a serious talk with him tonight, after gettin dressed i went downstairs and got out the things that Iggy would need to make breakfast, you might be wondering why the blind mutant makes the food, well i dont know why really, he just does.

"We're Back" shouted Angel and Nudge in unison with Gazzy only a split second later. Iggy didn't bother shouting, he walked straight into the kitchen and started making pancakes while the kinds started their cereal. I joined them with fang appearing a minute or so later.

Breakfast was how i imagined it would be like with a real family, all sitting talking and not worrying about where our next meal was coming from, this bliss continued for the rest of the day and as i tucked Nudge and Angel in i realised we all could get used to this, not running, feeling safe. In that moment i decided that we would go and see my mom soon, i would ask her to help us. She never lets us down.


Please R&R...how can improve?..what should happen next?...x