Alright so this my first Fanfic so be cruel if you have to I need all the criticism I can get especially if I veer off to mary sue land and that would be bad. So yes harsh criticism is welcome with wide arms.
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"No. Oh god no!"
I woke up with a scream and with a cold sweat. The dream I had felt so real. Too real for even me to handle. I guess my scream was loud because my Nanny, whom I called Nana, came in with a worried look on her face. The crease on her forehead seemed almost etched into her forehead from all the worry about the dream I have been having for about a straight week.
She looked at me and asked "That nightmare again Alice?"
I nodded. I was still in shock. Once the shock of it had overcome me I said in a low yet audible voice,
"Though it was different this time. I wasn't seeing Harry getting cut by the weird looking man or seeing the man cutting off his own hand. This time I was finally able to recognize the other boys face. He had handsome features, and he was killed with one of the unforgivable spells. And….and…" the last part took me awhile to stutter out
"Voldemort is going to come back Nana."
She looked at me as if I was crazy and if I were her I would think I was crazy too. I was everything but a seer. But lately I was seeing visions almost premonitions but only when I slept never when I was awake.
She shook her head and said "That's crazy talk he is never going to come back if he were planning something we would have known by now. There would have been signs in the wizard world by now."
I looked at her and sighed as I knew she was right. Maybe I was just simply going mad. But my gut said otherwise. That's when it hit me. I had to stop Voldemort from rising once again. Who knew what kind of damage he would cause. I had to stop that innocent boy from getting killed. At the very least I had to figure out how they get there and stop them. And I knew that meant leaving the safety that the muggle world gave me and go to the wizard world. And I knew Nana wouldn't like it. So without a word from my part I stood up and grabbed a bag from my closet and began to pack.
Nana stood up and that crease in her head came back as she asked "What are you doing Alice?"
I answered "Going to Hogwarts Nana I have to stop my vision from coming true."
I kept on packing she then said
"These could have simply come from your own imagination, how do you even know if they are real?" I stopped what I was doing and pondered that question I shook my head and said
"Because I could have never made up that boy that gets killed. And why would my imagination make up Voldemort's rising? Im going and there is no stopping me Nana."
Nana sighed as she knew that was true. I went to my mirror and got the brush that lay on a small little table beside it and began to brush, no more like try and tame, my wild black hair. As I looked in the mirror I saw bags under my light brown eyes from lack of sleep. Nana then said
"What if they figure out who you are Alice?"
I then said in a harsh tone
"Nobody knows who I am or who my family is. Nobody will ever know. As far as I am concerned Alice Sara Riddle doesn't exist. And my brother has long been dead to me ever since he became Voldemort."
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Alright so there is the first chapter. Hope you enjoyed it and comment please. I could use all the comments I can get to make this story better.
~Spunk Ransom 23