"sonicfan24 here to tell you I have just come up with a new Fan Fiction story"

Jak:"For those of you who don't know her, she always types Sonic stories"

sonicfan24:"Jak!"

Torn:"Jak stop making fun of her"

Jak:"..."

sonicfan24:"Well let's get started here, I do not own any of the characters in this Fic. Naughty Dog does so I hope you Read and Review!

Jak's fall

"Faster Jak faster!"

"Daxter shut up!"

"Jak listen you have to slow down your going too fast"

"Torn I can make it"

"Jak stop your going to-"

CRASH!

"Jak!"

"Somebody call an ambulance, call Torn, call somebody! Jak please wake up! Don't walk towards the light! Jak? Jak?"

Blackout:

"Unnn"

'Light, so much light. Am I in heaven?'

"Torn look he's walking up"

"Daxter shhh! Be quiet"

Jak slowly opens his eyes and the first thing he sees is Torn with a look of concern on his face.

"Unnn Torn? Torn were am I?"

"Your at my house"

"Torn brought you here"

"Daxter shut up!"

"What you did bring him here did you not"

"Daxter you say one more thing"

Daxter runs up onto a bookshelf.

"Torn did bring you here. Carried you all the way even refused a ride from Ashelin"

"DAXTER!"

"Oh what are you going to do you can't reach me"

"Unn Daxter just shut up"

Torn looks back at Jak.

(Sigh) shakes head

Torn sits down in a chair next to Jak and picks up bowl of water and rag.

"Jak you should have listened to me"

Torn pulles back the sheets a little and wets a rag.

"Torn?"

"Hm?"

Torn looks at Jak.

"When did you take my shirt?"

"Well I had to if I wanted to bandage up that wound of yours"

"I got hurt?"

"(chuckles) well what do you expect I'm. . .I mean we are all lucky that you didn't end up like that other guy"

"What happened?"

Daxter hopped down from the bookshelf and and went next to Jak.

"Well let's just say that there planning his funeral"

"Daxter!"

"What? He had to find out sometime!"

Torn grabs Daxter and walks over to door.

"Jak you can't let him do this to me! Jak? Jak?"

Torn throws Daxter out the door and slams it shut.

"(Hump) good riddance"

Looks over at Jak.
"Jak you all right?"

Walks over and sits down in chair.

"Jak?"

"(Sniff) I can't believe it I killed someone. I killed someone when I promised I wouldn't"

"Jak it's allright you didn't do it purposely"

"I don't care, I promised"

Jak started crying and Torn didn't know what to do. So he picked up the rag from the water and rung it out. He undid the bandages and started to clean the wound while he waited for Jak to stop crying.

Jak started to calm down and watched as Torn cleaned the cut on his stomach. Torn dipped the rag into the water and rung it out again. when he placed the wet rag on the cut Jak winced.

"Sorry"

"No it's not your fault"

"Jak I know you're upset but it's not your fault"

"Torn I wasn't listening if I was then none of this would have happened"

"Jak"

Jak had turned his head from Torn and closed his eyes.

"I just want to be left alone"

Torn finished cleaning the cut and re-bandaged it. Then he stood up and left. Before he walked out the door he looked back at Jak.

"Jak if you need me just call O.K?"

"..."

"Jak?"

"Yah O.K"

Torn stood in the doorway for a minute more before leaving.

[Well I hope you like. NO FLAMES! So plz R&R!]