OK guys i decided to do my story's over again well this is the only one i'll be doing over again sorry
But this is Kairi's Thoughts revised and edited
I hope you enjoy...I do not own Kingdom Hearts or any of the characters...
A long time ago you made me a promise, a promise you said you would never forget. But now a year has come and gone and I fear you have forgotten. You said "I'll come back for you" I believed you but I'm starting to worry, you should have come back by now. Riku too. I wonder if that day at Kingdom Hearts, when Riku and the King got trapped, I wonder if the light they had inside of them was consumed by the darkness. I heard what He said to you he told you to take care of me, but I have yet to see you do so. I had to ask Selphie what your name was the other day I had actually forgotten, it seems the worlds are still connected. She couldn't remember either it seems someone tempered with our memories. Today is different though something strange happened, a voice in my head he said his name was Roxas, then I heard you. I don't know how or why but I think Roxas is a part of you somehow. It all came back to me then you, Riku, the Heartless, everything. I have everything I need packed up in my boat there was just one thing left to do, I wrote you a note and I hope you get it, no I know you'll get it.
It won't be an easy trip, it'll be long and treacherous but I'm up to the challenge. I have this long and reoccurring dream and your there and Riku. I have to run towards the end of a tunnel to get to you, but I never seem to be able to. I now know that if I want you to be here with me I can't keep looking at the horizon waiting for you to save me.Maybe…Waiting isn't good enough, I can promise you one thing I won't stop until I find you and Riku and your both home with me.
Sora…This time I'll fight.
So what did you think? better or worst then my first version...Comments Appreciated.