Ok you smexy peeps! hopefully this will be a multi-chapter beauty but I need to work out where I'm going and when I'm going there. In the meantime see how you like this first chapter.
Please feel free to review, as per my other multi-chapter story it won't affect whether I carry on with this or not but I'd love to hear peoples thoughts and opinions of the story.
I don't think this will compare to my other story, without trying to sound to big headed I fucking love reading it still, so I know I'm going to struggle to think this one is good too
South Park not owned by me, Matt and Trey yaddah yaddah derp
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"Come on Stan, this is ridiculous!"
"Just a little further… trust me on this!"
"Seriously dude, this best be worth giving up my night with Bebe."
"Well, I can't guarantee you'll blow your load everywhere but…"
"DUDE!"
Stan burst out laughing at Kyle's innocent yet mischievous tone but kept his hands clasped firmly across the redhead's face. He tried his best to guide Kyle around the loose footings and uneven edges, but still Kyle found himself stumbling along – completely void of sight and very unsure of what was going on. All he had to go on was a warm light breeze that rustled through his t-shirt and hair, and whistled past his ears with every passing step
"Just a little further dude, I promise"
A few more steps and Stan brought him to a halt. Stan brought himself in closer so that his chest nestled into Kyle's back and his lips came closer to Kyle's ear, still with his hands restricting the view.
"You ready?"
"I've been ready since we stopped outside the woods. Come on Stan!"
Stan dropped his hands slowly until they were resting on Kyle's shoulders, but Kyle still had his eyes fastened shut. Not knowing what lay in front of him, Kyle was very wary of what might greet him, and his thoughts were justified as he pried an eye open. He took a sharp intake of breath and his body went stiff as he realised he was on the edge of a rather large drop. Before he could call out or move back, a gust of wind rushed past and forced him backward into Stan. It nearly took his hat off too, but Kyle managed to raise his right hand quick enough to keep it planted. Stan quickly wrapped his arms around the redhead's neck and held him close and tight while Kyle used his left hand to cling onto Stan's arm for support.
"I know you hate heights Kyle, but look at this view! You can see the whole of South Park from up here. I know it might sound really weird but Wendy and I found this place a while back and all I could think of was how I wanted you to see this, how I wanted this place to be another memory for us."
Stan's grin grew ear to ear as Kyle relaxed a bit and took in the view, being extra careful not to look down. He had to agree as well, the view was spectacular! He'd never seen South Park look so peaceful. The soft autumn sunset was just starting to disappear behind the mountains in the distance but it cast such an inviting glow over the buildings. It didn't look like their mountain town. It looked like something out of a brochure, some kind of idyllic North American suburb where every day is a fairytale. Kyle let out a sigh as he turned his head slightly to meet Stan's gaze. They held it for a moment before things got a bit too awkward and they both coughed while averting their eyes to other locations. Stan unravelled himself from his best friend and ventured closer to the edge, sitting down and hanging his legs freely over the side. Kyle followed suit and pulled a half empty packet of cigarettes out of his pocket, offering one to Stan who joined him. They both sank back slightly onto their elbows, simultaneously dragging back on their cigarettes and slowly blowing the used smoke skywards. They sat in silence for what seemed like hours.
The pair reached the bottom of the mountain trek a little after 10, and the harsh Colorado air had picked up a bitter undertone that shot through them both within minutes. Wrapping their coats in tight they walked as close together as possible, trying to retain the small amount of body heat they were both still radiating. Both boys hung the silence they'd shared since the top of the mountain until a slightly unfamiliar smell started to break through the crisp snowy clouds.
"Dude, what is that?"
Kyle took a moment to take a breath before answering
"Smells like bonfire dude, or like, fireworks night kind of?"
"Bit weird though isn't it? I mean, what a random day and time to have a bonfire?"
Their thoughts were interrupted as they passed Bebe's house and were greeted with her running out in her pyjamas with a look of slight terror on her face. Even with the confusion and fear radiating from her, Kyle couldn't help but let his eyes drift down her midsection to her pelvis, which was perfectly outlined in those tight fabric pants. If anything they were certainly showing him what he missed out on tonight! His thoughts were interrupted as Bebe's out of breath cries snapped him back to a somewhat scary reality.
"What's wrong hun?"
"Kyle, Stan… there's a fire! Over in the… old town section! Passed the train tracks!"
The boys took a quick worried glance at each other and were about to turn to face the direction of the wooden shacks on the edge of town when a scream pierced the air…
"KAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRREEEE EEEEEEEEEEENNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!"
Without missing a beat, both boys took off at full speed towards the train tracks, followed closely by Bebe. Several other townsfolk had come to the doors to see what the commotion was about, and before long the two boys were also joined by Clyde, Tweek, Ike, Wendy, Butters and even Cartman! They all rounded the corner at full speed and finally saw the source of the screaming. The pack was now being led by an extremely fast, determined and scared boy. He fought back tears as he continued to scream as he ran. He ignored the cries and rushed footfalls behind him, only looking forward – towards his destination.
As the group sped up to try and catch him, they rounded the corner and saw the source of tonight's commotion. The shack was completely engulfed in flames, the roof was still intact but the doors and windows had caved in and were starting to sag under the weight.
Stan and Kyle's eyes both grew in size, but neither boy broke their stride or looked at each other. They both knew what they had to do though. They had to catch him before he got to that house!
They made good headway, but the boy didn't let up when he got to the front of the house, he instead smashed his way through what was left of the front entrance, forcing rubble to fall behind him and block his exit. The boys were faced to wait agonising minutes while sirens could be heard in the distance.
"Jesus what the fuck do we do dude!"
Stan's eyes were shifting between the house and Kyle, but Kyle remained stunned in disbelief. He did the only thing he could – he reached out to Bebe and pulled her close. Stan took the cue and gestured to Wendy while approaching Kyle's left and wrapping his arm around the boy's waist. Wendy joined on Stan's left and the four stood in front of the burning house waiting.
The fire department and ambulance both turned up moments later, but still there was no sign of him anywhere. Just as the fire truck linked up to the hydrant, a noticeable cry was heard from inside. A panicked, child-like scream that definitely wasn't his. Stan and Kyle edged closer in anticipation as a figure emerged from a side window. In his arms was a little girl barely recognisable from the soot and dust that coated her face and clothes. As he finally exited the window he pushed her forward and away from him as he collapsed into the snow, revealing his back that was engulfed in flames. He made no effort to move once he was down on the ground and instead remained still as the flames continued to creep slowly over him.
Both boys darted forward as the emergency services noticed what was going on. Stan reached him first and dove into the snow next to him, while Kyle quickly reached for Karen and brought her back to where Ike was standing before returning to Stan's side. They both rolled him over into the snow to put the fire out on his back, then the EMTs rolled him back over to start working on ensuring the wounds were clean and wouldn't become aggravated by clothing or the snow's icy temperature. They loaded him onto a stretcher and started towards the ambulance. Stan and Kyle both approached it before it was loaded.
Both were openly sobbing.
"Please… please don't leave yet. You've gotta hang on dude! Please, listen to us and you hang on dammit! You're not going anywhere!"
"Please guys, we've got to get going now! Are you coming?!"
Randy made his way over to answer
"We'll drive them down straight away. Please do everything you can."
The ambulance doors slammed shut and in a flash he was gone. The two boys fell to their knees in each other's arms as Bebe and Wendy approached and joined them. Ike stepped forward slowly with her in front of him, keeping his hands rested on her shoulders for reassurance.
Stan looked up into her eyes. Her painfully sad eyes that were full with tears but were reluctant to let go of them. She was crushing her teddy in her arms.
"He's going to be ok isn't he?!"
She sniffed back sobs as Stan reached out and pulled her between himself and Kyle. They both held her tightly.
"He's going to be fine Karen, I promise"
Kyle smiled warmly at her and stroked her hair gently. Stan looked up and down the road in the direction of the ambulance.
"Stay with us Kenny… please stay with us…"
