This is just a demo version of my own Mass Effect story, very early stage right now, but please I am open to any feedback you may have, good or bad, I hope you enjoy it.
Asari Blue
It was a sunny winters day in the lakes of Athame one of Thessia's most holy locations, birds were cheeping, small woodland mammals could be seen hurrying their young into the nearest unclaimed hollow tree, lily pads were starting to shake of the cold frost of the night before as the warm sun spread across the lake.
Tisha had been waiting for some time now... but she didn't mind, she was content in the warmth of the sun and with the beautiful sight that stretched before her, it had been a long time since she had been to Thessia, her home world, but recent events... violent events had forced her to retreat back from the Skyllian Verge where she and her small team of mainly Asari and Turian researchers had been working. But here in Council space she could finally relax... or so she thought.
Ever since the brutal attack on GeTec research station her mind would keep on scrolling back through the events that had happened back in those devastating hours, questions would race though her mind, why?.. why was she the lucky one? why did she make it out when so many others didn't? what made her so special?... and then she'd start to feel it, anger and hatred emerging, filling up inside her, every nerve in her body was crying out in agro, at this point thin blue wisps of what looked like smoke could be seen wrapping it's self around her body in whirlwind effect as she struggled to keep her biotics it check.
All Asari were powerful biotics but Tisha was different, at a young age she was exposed to a large amount of Element Zero due a Ezo freighter going up in flames outside her small town of Acria, this made Tisha's biotics extremely powerful much more than your average Asari, but unstable too, her biotics were starting to rustle the local flora next to her when... at that moment Tisha's thoughts were suddenly interrupted by a sharp, cold drop of winter water from the near by trees splashing on her soft blue cheeks.
In effect this sent her attention back to the calm, tranquil view of the sapphire lakes in front of her, the sky gave the lake it's stunning sapphire colour, combined with the soft pink of the lily pad flowers and green hills rolling in the background with it's tributaries joining lake Gadamere, it was a sight worth crossing any distance to admire ''A feast for the eyes'' as the Human first contact diplomats described it, directly in the middle of the lake was the reflection of Parnitha, Thessia's star, burning with all her majesty.
G.R.