ok, this is my first alvin and the chipmunk story, so please, as small flames as you can. helpful critisism is welcomed.
I do not own alvin and the chipmunks.
Alvin POV:
I caught myself looking at brittney again. She was talking to Roxanne, her friend. She looked cuter today, then she did yesterday. She put her hair down today. Even after I caught myself looking at her, couldn't look away.
"Alvin! ALVIN!" Simon yelled my name.
"What?" I asked.
"You asked me to tutor you, but your not paying attention one bit!"
"Because your...boring." I said.
I heard a little snickering from behind me after I said that. I looked at Brittney and she was stopping herself from laughing.
I took this as a chance and decided to go and take a chance. I heard Simon say, "Hey! where are you going?" I completely ignored him.
I walked staright up behind her and Roxanne walked away smirking.
"Hey brittney." I said kind of nervously.
She turned. " Oh! H-hi, Alvin." she said.
"I was kind of wondering..." I started.
"Yea?..." she said her face lighting up and her cheeks turning a light pink.
"If..." I couldn't. "You had todays' homework for math! yeah, missed out on that."
"Oh, yeah, I do." she said her face falling. She reached in her book bag and took it out and went back over to roxanne after giving it to me.
I went back to simon as he blabbered about who cares.
I caught myself looking and still didn't look away. She looked so pretty.
Sorry for the short chap everyone. If i get encouraged, i'll write better, longer stories! but critsim (helpful) is still welcomed.