Okay let's try this again. I don't own anything. Sorry when I first made this it was a piece of crap. Give me other chance. Here is the first chapter.
Chapter 1: New city, new gang, new school
The Protagonist is taking his little sister, who just is sixteen years old and her name is Michelle, to school. Michelle is sitting in the passenger seat whining like a bitch. Michelle complained, "Big brother why you got to be such an asshole? I mean instead of letting me go shoot up the Syndicate. I have to go to fucking high school. To make it worse it's a damn Steelport school." The Protagonist reply, "Michelle, I'm saying this because I love you. Go fuck yourself." The Protagonist pulled up in front of the school. Michelle said, "I'm not going to school. My ass is staying in this car." The Protagonist furiously said, "Bitch you forced me to do this." The Protagonist got out the car, walked to the passenger side, opened the door, unfastened Michelle's seat beat, dragged her out the car, ran back in the car, drove off and yelled, "Have a nice day at school!" Michelle said to herself, "Shaundi was right my brother is a fucking asshole." Michelle walks to first block class.
Michelle walks into her first block class. As soon as she walked in everybody stared at her. Michelle thought to her, why everybody stares when there is a new kid. The teacher, said to class, "Class we have a new student. Tell us what your name is?" Michelle answer, "My name is Michelle Moore." said, "Ms. Moore please take a seat behind Cindy." Michelle took her seat behind the preppy girl and in front of Goth girl. Michelle didn't pay attention in class. She was too focused on what she is going to do after school. At the last minutes of class the teacher let us talk to each other. The preppy girl is named Cindy and Goth girl's name is Sara. They are sisters. They are pretty nice and cool to hang out with. So far Michelle's day is going okay.
The bell was going to ring in 5 minutes. A boy wearing red clothes came to the front of the classroom. (Boy name is Brad) He shouted, "Everybody shut the fuck up." Everybody stops talking. Michelle thought to herself, who he does think he is. Brad continued, "I see we got a new bitch at my school. I think this is a perfect to remind everybody how things work here." He looked at Michelle. Michelle was getting pissed because he was talking like he runs the school and no one was saying anything about it. He continued, "They're 2 types in this school. The people who are part of the Syndicate. The people who work for the Syndicate." He pointed at Michelle and said, "Obviously this purple bitch isn't a Syndicate member." Michelle couldn't take anymore. She had to say something. Michelle stood up and said, "I don't know the fuck you are talking to, but sure as hell ain't talking me." He replied, "Do you know who you are fucking talking to?" Michelle walked right front of Brad and said, "Yeah I know exactly who I'm talking. Some bastard who thinks he can control this school and everyone in it. I'm not part of the Syndicate. I'll be never part of the Syndicate. And I am not the Syndicate's bitch. So you can kiss my rich ass." Brad didn't take that so well. He grabbed Michelle by the neck and started choking her. To make the situation even more fucked up this happen in front of the whole class and nobody did anything. Michelle almost blacked out when he let go of her. Michelle coughed and said, "If you think that is going to intimate me. You are a real fucking idiot." Brad laughed and said, "I really like, but I am not going to have some bitch attacking my power." Brad started to pull out a gun that was hidden under his coat, but the bell rang. Michelle quickly got up, picked up her stuff, and ran out the door. Michelle thought to herself, this school is so fucked up.
I hope this remake is better. Please let me know if something is wrong with my stories. Just don't be an ass about it. Please review and try to compare this school to your school. I don't own anything.