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Okay so this is an update its a little different from my first write mainly cause my lovely Beta made a couple fixes.

Disclaimer: I do not own naruto if I did Kashi would should his face to the world at least once

dialog:

'asdfghjkl' inner thoughts

'asdfghjkl' thinking

"asdfghjkl" voice on the phone

"asdfghjkl" talking

Chapter 1

A young girl dress neatly in a blue and white uniform was walking quickly down a hall. Even though the girl was in an abandon part of the school she couldn't help but to constantly looked over her shoulder, as she walk pass many empty classrooms. The young girl knew that if she was catch her reputation would be defiled, her relationship would be ruined, and her future would crumble before her very eyes. Yet, here she was standing in front of the door that led to the cause of her troubles.

Her heart beat quicken as she readied herself for what she was going to do. Over and over in her mind she chanted 'You can do this there is nothing that this person can say or do that will change your mind. You'll go in say what you have to say and leave.' but even then she was not sure of herself. With a sigh of frustration the young girl open the door and was greeted with a sight that place a scowl on her face. "You do know that smoking on school property is against the rules ," the girl said to the young man sitting on an old teacher's desk smoking a cigarette.

"Are you planning to tell on me sweet Sakura " the young man mocked knowing full well she wasn't. Sakura face became enraged not being one to enjoyed mockery. " Don't play Sasuke, I mean it" The man smirked as he put out his cigarette. He hop off the desk and stalked over to Sakura . Sakura watch as Sasuke took in Sakura's appearance with eyes that of a predator looking at his prey. The very same look that has sent chills running up and down Sakura's spine. He walk behind her and wrapped his arms around her waist. "God have I told you how sexy you are when you're angry," he said into her neck.

"Sasuke-san we need to talk" Sakura said trying to sound confident and assertive but instead her voice came out breathy.

"Sakura didn't I tell you that when we are alone" Sasuke-san whisper into Sakura's ear "that you are to call me Sasuke kun."

"We can't do this anymore if I'm seen with you my life is ruin I could loses everything I've worked for."

"You say that all the time my sweet blossom " Sasuke said as he began to kiss his way back down to Sakura's neck. Sakura could feel Sasuke's hands explore her upper torso, her will power decreasing as her arousal grew by the seconds .

"Sasuke-san I'm serious I can't continue this any long..ahhh" Sakura groan as she felt her left nipple being pitched over her clothing.

"Sakura didn't I tell you to call me Sasuke kun when we are alone" Sasuke said as he tug Sakura's nipples hard " now I'm going to have to punish you for being a naughty pet"

Next thing Sakura knew she was being pushed onto a nearby desk and her shirt ripped open. Sakura look up and stare into Sasuke's deep onyx eyes that held a power over her. Sasuke began to kiss Sakura's collarbone leaving dark marks in his wake. Sakura moan in protest but didn't do anything to stop Sasuke. He made his way down to Sakura's harden left nipple and start circling the pink flesh with his tongue. His other hand began to massage Sakura's other breast.

"Sasuke please we have to stop this " Sakura said in a lustful whisper. Sakura mind was clouded with a thick fog of lust. She began to moan loudly as he began to suck on her nipple. The sensation of Sasuke skillful tongue and feel of his magical hand toying with her breast made Sakura grow very wet. Her panties were soaked by the time Sasuke's hand travel its way down there.

"Sakura it's hard for me to believe that you don't want this when your panties are soaked. Your mouth may lie but your body will always tell me the truth" Sasuke said into her ear as his fingers began to stroke the outside of her panties. Sakura threw her head back and moan Sasuke name loudly.

" Thats right Sakura say my name and my name only" Sasuke growled into her ear. He was just about to slide her panties off when Sakura phone rang loudly throughout the room. This brought Sakura out of her fog she push Sasuke away and turning her back to Sasuke as she answered her phone.

"Hello" Sakura answered trying to button her shirt back up.

"Hey my little cherry blossom where are you. We were suppose to meet at our lockers 5 minute ago" a voice came from it .

"Gyōgi" Sakura said happy to hear his voice. She could hear Sasuke growling in anger behind her. She turned around and glared at him " sorry is it past 4:30 already I'm sorry I was just finishing some things but I'll be there in a minute"

" Okay but hurry up you know how much I hate to wait" the boy on the other end said.

" Okay bye babe"

"bye," when Sakura hang up she could see Sasuke glaring at the phone in her hand.

" I fucking hate that guy" Sasuke said

" Why because he isn't a delinquent like you. Because he is a good student who hasn't gotten in trouble like you." Sakura snapped at him

Sasuke snorted, " No , its because he's a pompous ass wipe who thinks that just because his parent are rich and that he's going to be going to a fancy ass college that he can get whatever he wants and that people should kiss the ground he walks on"

Sakura tsk at Sasuke and continued to button up her shirt. When she finished she felt a pair of strong arms around her and lips attach themselve to her neck. She began to moan again as she felt Sasuke hands roam her body. She rolled her head back giving Sasuke more access to her neck .

" You don't have to go to that loser Sakura " Sasuke said between kisses " you can stay here and we can finish what we started."

Sakura was about to give in when she felt Sasuke began to nibble on her neck bringing her out of her cloud of lust again. She pushed herself away from him and quickly straighten her clothes.

" Sasuke this has to stop I'm in a relationship you know it , I know it hell, the whole school knows it. Whatever this is, it has to stop." Sakura said

" I dont care that your in a relationship Sakura especially one with that loser. I take what I want and what I want is you. And when I get the chance I'm going to take you over and over and over again" Sasuke said staring directly into Sakura emerald green eyes.

Sakura began to tremble. She knew that if she didn't get out of there now she wasn't going to get out of there anytime soon. She made her way to the door never breaking eye contact with the young man. When she finally got to the door she spoke .

"Sasuke I'm serious about my relationship with Gyōgi and I'm going to start being faithful to him. I can't keep doing this to him Sasuke." Sakura began to leave out of the door. Right before she closed the door after Sasuke spoke words that will follow her for the rest of the day.

" You may be serious about your silly relationship with that ass but I'm also serious when I tell you this Sakura . You're mine Sakura whether you know it or not. And when you realize that Gyōgi isn't the guy you think he is then I'll be around."

Sakura quickly close the door and quickly walk down the hallway. Sasuke words echoing throughout her head.

' That didn't go as good as I wanted to'

'As good you accomplish nothing well nothing except getting into a hot and heavy sex session with school bad boy sasuke uchiha'

' It was not a sex session okay there was no penetration involved whatsoever'

' There was going to be a whole lot of penetration and you know it. If Gyōgi hadn't called, you would be naked and bent over a desk with a sweaty sasuke thrusting deeply in-'

' Stop I get it you're right ' sakura interrupt she was ashamed to admit but the image her inner was painting was drastically turning her on 'but that isn't happen again okay that will be the last time I'm in that situation'

'Yeah right'

Sakura silence her inner voice when she finally got outside the abandon part of the school. She snuck into the back part of the main building so that she would not be sence. She walk quickly to her locker where Gyōgi would be. She rounded the corner and there he was talking to ugh Ami. She was basically all over him and much to Sakura annoyance he certainly wasn't pushing her off. Although she hated seeing Ami basically hang on her boyfriend she could see why. Because even though he wasn't as handsome as sasuke, Gyōgi still was a handsome. With his black hair, rich, deep blue eyes and way he carries himself it's not surprising why girls were attracted to him.

'That and the fact that his family was very rich and has close connection with japan's elite is an added bonus' Sakura inner said.

She walked up to him with a smile on her face. Ami saw Sakura walking before Gyōgi did. She glared at Sakura and turned back to Gyōgi.

" I'm going to go Gyōgi but" she place to hand on Gyōgi arm, "I hope to see you soon"

"See you later Ami" he said . When he saw me his smile dropped and started texting on his phone.

"I'm sorry I'm late Gyōgi did you wait long" Sakura ask wrapping her arms around his waist.

" I had to wait for 10 minutes good thing Ami was here to keep me company" he said blantly not even looking up.

" I'm really sorry babe would a kiss make up for it" she said leaning up to him, Gyōgi look away from his phone and down at Sakura.

'That got his attention now'

' yeah now to show him why he shouldn't want that skank Ami company but ours'

Sakura wrap her arms around Gyōgi neck and pulled his lips to hers. As she kiss Gyōgi soon began to kiss her back. He lick her lips asking for entrance which Sakura granted. Their tongue were entwine for a good while before they separated for air.

" So am I forgiven Gyōgi " Sakura said look up at him

" Yeah I guess come on let's go" Gyōgi said slinging an arm over Sakura's shoulder.

As they were walking to the student parking lot Sakura overheard some girls talking.

" Did you see Sasuke today"

"No I didn't I think he skipped to go smoke or something"

" God he is so sexy. ".

"I know right what I wouldn't give to have that boy in bed with me" Hearing these girls talk about Sasuke annoyed her.

' Why am I getting annoyed I'm not with Sasuke nor do I want to be. I have a good guy and I need to stop seeing Sasuke. Next time I see him I will stay steadfast to my resolve' with that Sakura and Gyōgi went to the parking lot.

okay here the revised chapter 1, ah it kind of nice to go over thing and just reread over you old stuff.