First fanfiction ever, so if there is some funky stuff going on, deal with it.
Riley's POV
It's all Amy's fault.
I just want to get that clear. I guess this is kinda like my testimony
Even though there are all of these factors, variables, ect.
When you boil it all down, it's still Amy's fault.
It all started kinda began like this:
Together, with all my friends. A total of seven kids got wraped in Amy's mess.
Amy had the bright idea of forcing all of her friends this summer to go on a camping trip.
Amy Leigh King is my best friend, we are like joined at the hip. She is 18, legally an adult.
She has straight blond hair with hazel eyes.
We had just gotten our tent set up when someone said, "I'm bored."
That someone was Derrick Mercedes, our village idiot and Abbey Belle's sort-of boyfriend.
"My feet are wet," Abbey whimpered. Abbey had curly black hair with blond streaks in it, and was also Sam's step-sister. She was kind of short, and to make up for it she caged her feet in high-heeled shoes.
She had thought that going hiking with us around the vast wilderness was an excellent occasion for wearing high-heeled shoes. We hadn't even gotten halfway to the camp site when her heels broke, much to Derrick's amusement.
Derrick Mercedes was a fairly short boy, with a tangle of blond hair and hazel eyes. Though he and Abbey were dating, I suspected it was only because Sam had set them up in an attempt to get both off of her back. "Hey, you're both annoying! You should go out!" That sort of thing.
I yawned, already bored, and settled for leaning agasint the tree. I watched what my friends and Abbey were doing.
Amy was busy chasing Freddy Masen around the tent with a pointy stick. Freddy Masen had auburn hair and green eyes.
"Dan," he screamed. "Save me!" he accidently tripped on a root and fell at Dan's feet.
Dan Malvagio peered down at him, his piercing blue eyes standing out from all of his black hair.
He was tall and lanky, and older than Amy by a few months.
"Amy, if you kill him we have to do all the work of hiding the body," Dan pointed out coldly, sensible as always, and walked away.
"My feet are cold, Sam," Abbey whined to her step-sister. "Give me your shoes." Samantha Abbott glared, her straight black hair framing her sharp face and green eyes.
Seeing that she was going to get no sympathy, Abbey's attitude completely changed.
She narrowed her eyes and clenched her fist before she smirked.
"Give me your shoes now, or I'll tell Daddy." Sam froze, and her chocolate brown then narrowed in anger. Grudgingly, she threw off her shoes and stalked away.
Sam's step-dad completely favored Abbey. Sam was like a shadow in his eyes, and he quickly told her that (Good parents deny that kind of thing). Nobody knew what happened to Sam once her mother married Mr. Belle, but she dramatically changed. Sam used to be tough, but now she harbors the last name Abbott all alone.
Now pay attention to this part:
Amy suddenly perked up, seemingly to have an idea.
"Hey guys, I have an idea."
"Oh gawd, blondie's got an idea! Call the media!" Derrick gasped from behind me.
"Whatever, and you're blond too. Anyways, lets play a game!" She clapped her hands.
"Lets not," I muttered.
"Lets play hide-'n-seek! It will be fun!" She grabbed Freddy's arm, glancing up at him from under her eyelashes with Bambi eyes.
"Freddy will play, won't you Freddy?"
Freddy resisted her eyes for about a fraction of a second before he jizzed.
"Alright," he muttered.
She giggled and clapped excitedly, and Freddy rolled his eyes, looking suspiciously amused.
Freddy grabbed Derrick, who was trying to sneak away. "I have to go through this, so you do too!"
Derrick gulped, then glared at Dan. "Hey, play with us."
He glanced around lazily, then said, "I guess there isn't really anything else to do."
Abbey smiled. "If Dan is playing, I am too." She licked her lips, in a creepy way.
"I'll play too," Sam mumbled, not looking happy about it.
Then everyone looked at me.
"Fine, I'm in."
Amy suddenly tagged the person closest to her, which was Freddy.
"Freddy's it!" she squealed, than bounded away.
"What the hell!" Freddy wailed.
"Later!" called Derrick as he raced away.
I sighed, then quietly walked away.
I slid through the forest, looking for a good tree to climb. I learned a long time ago that nobody ever looks in the trees. I glanced up a sturdy-looking oak tree, and grabbed the lowest branch.
I wrapped my legs around it, and pulled myself up.
When I was high up enough that Freddy or Amy or whoever would never find me, I closed my eyes and listened to the forest. It seems to me that it's alive sometimes.
Of course, someone had to ruin my peace.
"RILLEEEYYYY!" Amy screamed from behind me. "FREEEDDDDYYYYY!"
I dropped down, and followed the sound of her screaming: "SOOMEEEONNEE!"
I looked around, and nearly fell down in surprise.
"A-A-Amy what are you doing?"
There was Amy, in all of her blonde glory, her lower half missing into the ground. She tried pushing herself up with her arms, but her rear was firmly stuck.
"I'm stuck! I tripped and fell down this rabbit hole!" Amy sniffed.
I sighed, and crouched down.
"One big rabbit hole," I muttered, poking at the ground.
She nodded tearfully.
"Hold still," I grunted, pulling on her arms.
"Ow-ow-ow-ow that hurts! Stop it! Dan! Freddy! Riley is hurting me!" she wailed.
There was crashing behind me, and I looked over to see the boys and Sam.
"Whoa, Riley stop hurting Amy," Derrick sniggered. I rolled my eyes and moved, showing Amy's dilemma.
"Holy shit! Did the ground just eat Amy's legs?" Sam tried pulling on her arms.
"Oww! You're no better than Riley!" Amy mumbled. Then she started screaming again. "Something touched my legs! Something touched my legs!" she wailed.
"Pull harder!" Dan ordered.
We eached grabbed both of her arms, and pulled.
"My god you need to go on a diet," Derrick gasped out with effort.
"Hey? What's going on?" At that moment, Abbey decided to show up.
"Amy is stuck down some hole," Freddy explained.
"Well whatever, look at my capris!" she moaned, pointing to a smudge on her pants.
And then suddenly Amy began moving further and further down.
"Ahh! WHAT THE HELL! IM GETTING SUCKED IN!" Amy wailed, thrashing her body around.
We all had to let go at the last second to avoid getting dragged in with her.
Freddy slid down in shock. "She's gone...," he mumbled.
We all stared at the rabbit hole for a moment - even Abbey looked mildly shocked - and then Freddy glanced up at Dan.
"We have to go in after her."
Five pairs of eyes stopped staring at the rabbit hole and started staring at him.
Surprisingly, Dan nodded. His eyes sparked with the intensity of the situation. "Freddy, grab my feet, and Derrick grab his, then Sam, Abbey, and Riley."
We did what he said, and I suddenly felt really stupid.
Dan put his head in the hole, looking down. "Amy? You there? Hello? Ah!" And Dan got sucked in.
This caused a chain reaction, all of getting pulled the the hole. And before I knew it, Sam's feet were gone.
"Ahh! Sam your feet stink!" and Abbey, being the lovable person she is, let go.
I wheezed, my shoulders shaking.
Abbey stood up, brushing off her pants.
"Look at them! They're all gone!" she whined, sliding to the ground.
I felt an uncontrollable rage rise up within me, clouding my mind.
I hardly ever get really pissed off, not like this.
"Y-you bitch!" I charged, grabbing her and stuffing her head down the hole.
Of course, I got sucked in.
I couldn't see anything, because surprise-surprise, the underground is dark. Very dark.
After a while, I could see a light. Like the light at the end of the tunnel.
Did I die?
I sure hope not, I'm only sixteen.
And then the white light surrounded me, like a clear blanket. I looked down, and saw an endless bottom.
I looked around, squinting my eyes painfully. It was bright.
"Amy?" I saw her spinning around, waving her arms wildly.
"Hey Riley! Look at me! Is this Limbo? It sure is fun!"
I tried tospin towards her. Eventually I ended up doing swimming motions to move towards her.
I grabbed her hands saying: "I'm not sure what this is, but where are the others?"
She shrugged, sending herself and me spinning around. "I dunno"
I sighed, and looked around. "Freddy? Dan? Derrick?" I called out.
"Here we are!" I heard Freddy shout above us.
I glanced up, and saw all the boys holding hands in a semi-circle. Amy giggled and muttered, "So manly."
Amy and I struggled up, spinning and twirling like in gymnastics.
"Hey guys" I said, grabbing Dans wrist and swinging Amy around to grab Freddy's.
"This...is weird," Sam mumbled, coming into view as she squirmed towards us.
I let go of Dan's wrist to allow her room in our little circle of friends.
"Where's Abbey?" Amy questioned, looking around.
I glanced down so no one could see my expression.
"She...let go of Sam."
A collection of gasps and "The bitch!" from Derrick.
I just nodded. And then my anger fired up again.
"She let go of Sam so she wouldn't get sucked in herself, so...I- pushed her in!" The events slowly sunk in, and my mind reeled with fear and anger.
Everything seemed to be slowly spiralling out of control. And what is worse, I feel like I can't do a thing.
"She...let go!" I mumbled angrily.
I felt something new.
I let all of my fear surface from the locked door deep, deep down from my mind.
My mind reeled, and I closed my eyes.
And then, the white world we were in at the moment ripped apart, patches of black ripped apart the whiteness like jagged claws.
It felt like wind was blowing us back into the black tears.
I whirled around, losing my grip on Sam.
Freddy, Derrick, and Dan all managed to hold on while Sam was flying out of view.
"Sam!" Freddy screamed.
It was pure, utter chaos. More jagged tears of black appeared, almost rippng me from Amy.
"Amy!" I yelled, wrapping a hand around her waist, as we began to eratically spin around.
I could absolutely not lose Amy.
"What's going on!" she wailed. Tears streamed down her face.
"I don't know," I muttered, and we spun into oblivion.
I am a firm believer that things should always be said at the bottom of the chapter, so people are forced to look at it while they are changing chapters.
Credit goes to the guy who made Naruto, and I do not own all of that chiz.
I wish I could say I owned all of the OC'S, but they are based off of real people in rl. So they kind of own themselves.
And I have to give some credit to my co-author [ or editor ] Fox, who is Amy is based off of. (YEAHHHHHHH)
This is my first fanfic, so I will do a bunch of different POV'S [as in first person, third person] and my writing will bounce up and down. (Because I'm insane and this is totally Lillie and not Fox)
My OC's won't be Mary-Sues, and I don't plan on OCXOC (Fox be cring.Y u be makin' Fox cring Lillie?) I swear, the person Derrick is based off of [You know who you are] will die of an ego overload. LOLOLOL RILEYXDERRICK LOLOLOL
Riley is sorta the main character [cuz I based her off of me] and I'm not sure what pairing I will do with her.
Fox and I write this on a public doc, so we literally write it together at the same time. Sometimes we invite other people and have this big awesome party that usually ends with alot of words getting replaced with... more 'colorful' references. So if you see a word like that, know it is Fox's/Derrick's doing. Dan is getting on me about using bigger words and things like that.
This story will make a drastic...and more hilarious turn in the later chapters. If u don't want to hear about them walking around just wait till I upload the rest.
And Madara won't be a big part because he's an evil jerk that steals eyes. I mean seriously, eyes? Get ur own rinnengan!
And I won't overuse Tobi's third person, infact I will switch it around.
If ur someone like me who hates to read really long foot notes, The things I have bolded are most important.
Fox's Corner:
LOLOLOL I R FOX LOLOLOL I R SPESHUL
lolno.
[Twilit: Sad thing is, she can write better than I can.]
Oh my god, when i posted this i didn't edit over some of what my friend's did...so . Don't laugh. And FML.