AN: This might not be a very good story,but it will hopefully get better.


Daxter was drunk (again) and started rambling on about how he had defeated a whole horde of Metal Heads and apparently the only person who believed his story was Tess. Jak however was not in the Naughty Ottsel, but he was out in the forest lying on his back next to a cat like creature named, Ratchet. "That star will go super nova. But it is a fairly old star, 3.2 billion years old to be exact." Ratchet's robotic companion, Clank said as he pointed at a red star up in the sky. " Nerd." Jak punted at the small robot.

"That was a cheap shot, long ears." Ratchet snapped at Jak just before the elf gave out a yawn. Jak simply shrugged his shoulders and replied, "Cat breath." The next thing Clank knew, Jak and Ratchet were calling each other names by their appearances. "Rat worshiper." "Yarn hugger." "Eco junkie." "Laser chaser." "Perhaps maybe you two should stop before this becomes a fist fight." Clank suggested to the two heroes.

Jak made a noise that sounded like an agreement to Clank and Ratchet pointed to a orange colored star and said, "Why do I have a fealing that that's a planet and not a star?" Clank realized what that orange star was as soon as Ratchet pointed it out and he said, "That is Veldin."


Cliff hanger! So, good, bad, childish, lame? Flamer's will still be used to make marshmallows. All I ask is for at least one review and I'll post the next chapter no matter if it's a - or +.

Jak Cooper the Lombax