Disclaim: Kuroko no Basket/ it's character, is not mine.
Claim: The story is mine
Warning: OCC, Yaoi, Limited Vocabulary, Un-beta-ed, Errors( anything you think is bad )
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Anyway nice to meet you! Ugh.. I don't know what to say but its my very first fanfict( and story) so I hope you'll help me out with it. Criticism and Reviews would be great! Don't go easy on me! I need to learn! :) Anyway I hope you guys enjoy the fanfic!
Ensured Chapter 1:
Drops of tears fly in midair. A horror look, a frighten grasp, and a pair of eyes that show pained.
Crash.
Tears trickle down the too pale skin, making it way down onto the same pale cheek and linger on to the soft messy looking teal locks, that's currently dye red. Slowly, the tears mixed with the red liquid. Becoming too heavy, its drop silently onto the ground.
The noisy and busy street swiftly become quiet. Then, screams was heard. Mutters and chattering grew. The crash vehicle's owner shaking and cower in fears, unable to move from his spot.
People began to crowd around the pools of red liquid, looking, staring, grasping, some even unnerves enough to take pictures and videos. All the attention was to a bluenette. Who's lying at the center of the bloody pool, with a whimpering child in between his arms. His eyes were half lit, barely conscious.
Moving his cyan colored eyes, he looks down at the child in his arm, choosing to ignore or unconscious of his trampled body, clothing, and the crowd, he –using his sore and broken voice –asked for a reassure from the child, "A..re you a..l..right?"
The pity lavender hair colored child, only could look at the bluenette in the eyes and whimpered, his eyes were filled with unshed tears. Noticing the child in his arm widen and teary eyes, and the horror look, the bluenette lips turn upward a little –into a small smile –"Y-you will..b..be alright," he try to reassure him. Before the lavender boy could give any responses, the teal hair boy's eyes closed. His consciousness, drift off.
The crowds become more noisy by the minutes, but no one dare to move closer than where they already are. No one dares to remove the frighten lavender hair boy from the teal's arms.
As a familiar sound was heard, heads turn to the sources. The ambulance. Rescued have came. The paramedics hurried off the vehicle and hurried to the boys' sides. The smaller boy, finally free from the unconscious taller one's grasp, cried. One of the paramedics held him, and calming him down, reassuring what might be impossible –"He will be alright,".
The bluenette was transported into the vehicle. As the paramedics about to shut the back door, a voiced yell out. "Tetsuya!" Eyes shift to the sources. A teen, seeming not very older than the teal, with soft green colored hair rushes and ran toward the ambulance –ignoring the blood that he share with the teal getting on to his pants and shoes. "He's my brother!" he answers the unable-to-asked-question and without waiting for a response he jumps onto the vehicle and held onto Kuroko's cold hand.
Kazuki's POV
Kazuki's eyes scanned from the white sheet that sat on top of the Kuroko's body, to the teal's face. His younger brother did not look great. Kuroko's blood was now, sickly, stain the teal hair. His brother was unhealthy pales, much more than before. The pale lips from the cold weather aren't helping. What scare him the most was Kuroko seem to be as if he is sleeping.
Kazuki's held onto the bluenette's hand tighter, biting onto his lips not removing his hard gaze from Kuroko. He listens carefully to the weak paces of Kuroko's hearts beats, and reassures himself with it.
He thought he was imaging things when he heard, "..Akashi-kun.." from the bluenette in front of him.
Traces of tears was visible to be seen on Kuroko face.
Short. That's probably your guys thought right now. xP. And yes, it is. I have trouble of staying on track so I post it before I could look back and change anything. xD
My English aren't great, I knows, I make errors, I knows, I misused words, I knows, the past and presence tense probably a mess... yes I know. But I don't know which one is it. So please pointed it out for me! :) Tell me what you think! If I am seriously horrible, tell me , I'll delete this fanfic and give up in writing fanfiction lol :P I won't feel offense or anything. Just please, opinions? x3