So hey there this will be my first fanfiction it takes place in a strongly alternated version of the Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Universe. What changes I made, you will be able to see whiles reading in the story. So I don´t own most of the world this story is being made a part of.
Hey my name is Leo and before I tell you the story you might want to read I want to tell you some stuff about me. I heard that´s what you do in front of your story to make the reader able to empathize with the people in the story so they appear to be more like real Individuals witch the people in this story are.
So to not annoy you anymore, I will start telling you about me. The story of a Riolu called Leo.
I grew up in a very wealthy family with all family members becoming well known. My mom, Laura, was a Shiny Lucario known all over for making massive improvements in the orb technology. My father is a Shiny Lucario Nolan is a famous Explorer. My 2 brothers and sister also are shiny Lucarios and Riolus studying under the best. By now you might see a pattern. And then there am I a normal Riolu still faster than the average Riolu thanks to the good genes I got by my parents. The thing is "good" isn´t enough in my family. They saw my "imperfectness" as a disgrace. Myself being "just average" made my mother go nuts. She laid down work and made me her new "Project". She locked me up in the basement running experiments on me. "I will fix you" that is what she always said. The thing that annoyed her most about me was that I didn´t look like them. Well could have just colored my fur but that wasn´t enough for her. She wanted me to be like them. She wanted me to grow yellow and black fur instead of my black and blue. That would have all been fine even if she might have been focused too much on the outside. If she wouldn´t have tortured me trying to change me against my own will. But in the end she succeeded. Well she kind of did. She changed my outwards appearance but not to yellow and black but to black and red. She was so upset at this, not knowing what failing feels like I guess. She started shouting at me "Why did you have to be born a failure? " she ran out of the basement and I tried to walk out with her but she just threw the door shut and locked me up in the basement. After that happened, I had to work for my family. Well "work", you might rather call it slavery. My mother didn´t want people to meet me so I had to be the family slave not allowed to leave the house or the basement without permission. This went on for four years till I tried to stand up for me. I asked my mother to let me take part in the guild entrance exam. I told her that if I can join a guild she will not have to deal with me anymore. She seemed to like that idea but added two conditions. "First even if you don´t get accepted to a guild you are not allowed to come back here ever. Second you are not allowed to tell anyone that you belong to our family!" .I so wanted to answer "Wait, I was part of this family" but I didn´t I just wanted to get away from them so I agreed. And now I am there in a huge hall with a giant fighting stage. This was it the hall where the guild entrance exam would take place...
Hey I hope you enjoyed the first Chapter of my little story. I do have to tell you that I will not be able to say when I will upload the next one it might be today it might be in month but I will try to get more done if you got Ideas to improve the story or find any spelling mistakes (which is likely) go ahead and tell me I love to work with others. So basically I would like to hear any HELPFUL comments. Well hopefully see you on the next Chapter and have a great day.
