Ok So lately I've been noticing I've been getting negative reviews. FYI people I wrote this in 2007 and yes now that I look back at it I do realize some of it is poorly written. But it was my first work of fan fiction and I was inspired so Please give me a break. I do value and appreciate your reviews/opinions and glad you are honest, but just remember I was young and didn't know too much about writing fan fiction. As this was going to be a fan fic, but I decided to make it into a one-shot instead.
1:
Jake can you come over?
THE OTHER SIDE OF MILEY
Jake And Miley have been dating for a Year now. It is Summer And they are both going into 10th grade.
Friday Night
Miley calling Jake on the phone: "Hey Jake can you come over?"
Jake: "Sure, you want me to comeover now?"
Miley: "Yeah"
Jake: "Ok see ya in a few"
Miley: "K Bye"
Jake: "Bye Miles"
3 minutes later
Ding-Dong
Miley: That must be Jake
Jake at the door: Hey Baby
Miley: Hey Jakey Come on in
Jake: Where's your dad and Jackson?
Miley: Oh They went on a liitle Trip They just left tonight and won't be back until Tuesday
Jake: Ok So what are we gonna do?
Miley: Come on Jake I'll show you
Jake follows Miley upstairs to her room
Jake: Ok why are we here?
Miley: Just sit down on the bed, I'll be out here in a few minutes
Miley Goes in her Hannah closet
