hello guys, sorry about my hiatus, i didn't know what to write so i decided to take a break.
now that my break is over and my exams are done, i can continue to write more story's.
anyway this story is a "experimental" as i like to call it. basically it is a story that i will be trying new ideas out for you guys to read.
anyway, on with the fanfic!
"hey" speech
{hey} different language
-hey- microphone\loudspeaker
time: 1200 pm
location: unknown
planet: garrix
"-criticle failur, systems are down-" an automated voice called out as the star-ship bastion went down under the continued barrage of the rebel fleet.
the reason for the rebel fleet to attack the bastion was that it was carrying vital cargo, a single strain of DNA, why was this strain of DNA so important?. this DNA is the only known unit of the legendary warrior known as Darth reven, a sith lord from the time of the old republic.
if the rebels could get there hands on this vial of DNA they would have the ability to create super soldiers unlike the galaxy has ever seen.
on the rebel command ship
"we have brought the bastion down commander sato" a comms officer called out to the leader of the rebel fleet. sato smiled "and what of the DNA vial" the comms officer looked at the ruins of the imperial ship and made a quick scan, "found it" he called out to the commander. sato smiled again but it had a more grim tone to it, "good, bring it in". the officer nodded in affirmative and gave the order for a scavenger ship to go and collect the DNA. "oh and tell the crew to be extra careful when bringing it in, the contents are fragile" sato ordered the officer, "OK" was the simple reply as the officer relayed the instructions to the scavenger ship.
lothal
"OK kanan, what is going on!" a green skinned twillek shouted at a man with a pauldren and ponytail, "nothing my dear captain hera" kanan smirked at the fuming twillek. "nothing huh, then can you come and explain why there is a tooka cat on my bunk!" kanan laughed nervously, and for good reason, no one wants to get on heras bad side, "urrrm, it was sabine and ezras idea!" he shouted as the now livid captian came closer.
a blue haired boy in his mid teens was running with a multi colored haired girl, also in her mid teens, when they heard "EZRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" the boy now known as ezra turned to his companion and grinned "looks like hera got our present" he chuckled, the girl known as sabine also grinned "poor kanan, he is probably getting butchered right now" she said. "do you want to go and face the monster or keep running" ezra called out, sabine pondered the question for a moment before saying "lets keep running" they both grinned and set of again, unaware that events in the galaxy are about to unfold that no one will be prepared for.
so what do you guys think?. should i continue this story? just leave a review and i'll read them all, all types of criticism it approved.
thank for reading and seeya later.
