Notes:

This is one of my first attempts at a fanfiction after years of reading on this website...

-Helpful criticism is read and acknowledged. Ignorant flamers who say something is bad but doesn't back it up with any reasons at all is the way I do all proofreading and editing myself so yeah...sorry about the lack of quality in that area...

I don't own percy Jackson if I did then it wouldn't be as well known as it is today.I suck at writing...

This is set during Percy jackson:Sea of monsters when they set off to find the Golden Fleece to restore Thalia's tree's health (The magic tree which guards the camp),when they find the princess andromeda,which is Kronos and Luke's ship.

I'm borrowing a extract from P124.


Percy's POV:

"Luke", I cut in. "Listen to me. Your father sent us." His face turned the color of pepperoni."Don't - even - mention him."

"He told us to take this boat.I thought it was just for a ride, but he sent us here to find told me he won't give up on you, no matter how angry you are."

Luke said nothing and - for a few minutes I thought he was thinking about his father. I continued.

"Luke he said the reason why he lef-" I was cut off as he punched me in the gut, great now I know how those guys who get beaten up in action movies feel...

I groaned in pain and tried to get into a defensive position.

"Percy are you okay?!" I heard Annabeth cry out.

"I'm fin-" Luke punched me quick, furiously."Now you're not." He smirked at me. Damn him.

Then he pulled out a police radio (A/N Can't remember what it's called) "Tell Kronos change of plans, let's keep the son of Poseidon and daughter here."


Tell me what you think! Have I kept the characters in personality still? Have I made any grammar mistakes etc.

And damn I never knew keeping characters in personality is so hard...

Do you think I should continue? Please answer in reviews.

Thank you for reading! (Darn it sucks to high heaven but hey at least you suffered only a little because it was so short...)