Ok, no, I didn't start over, I'm just fixing the structure of the story.
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Chapter 1
"Faith, what your doing is very dangerous. We don't want you to make the same mistakes that me and your father did." A woman in her early 40's said.
"Celia, it's her choice. I just think that she should wait till she's at least 16 and has her drivers licence." A man in his late 40's suggested.
"Dad, don't you think that I'm old enough to make my own decisions?" A 10 year old girl said.
"Faith, your 10! Who knows what kind of decisions you'll make! Ross, say something!" Celia argued, slightly raising her voice.
"Don't you guys trust me?! I know how to make and choose good decisions! I just want to help out!" Faith yelled.
"Of course we trust you. It' just that...your a little too young. You can't even drive yet." Ross reasoned.
"I can learn! If I know how to fix a car, then I can learn to drive one, can't I?!" Faith argued.
Ross sighed deeply. He stopped at the red light and looked at the rear view mirror to sneak a peek at Faith.
'She's so young. I don't want her to make wrong decisions.' Ross thought deeply.
Ross looked at his wife to see that she was looking at her hands in deep thought. He placed his hand on top of her's in reassurance. Celia looked up at Ross and gave a small smile and slightly nodded. Ross looked back at the road and started to drive when the light turned green. Suddenly, a huge 18-wheeler truck came down the other side of the road quickly.
"Dad, look out!" Faith cried out.
It was too late. The truck caused a head on collision with the Toyota 4Runner. About two bystanders who witnessed the car crash started to dial 9-1-1. 10 minutes later, 4 cop cars and an ambulance came to see if their were any survivors left in the wreckage. One of the officers saw Faith. He gently pulled her out of the wreckage and placed her on the ground. When he checked her pulse, he was both relieved and worried to find that she had a weak pulse.
"Medic! I need medical attention on this girl A.S.A.P.!! Now!!" the officer yelled.
Faith squinted her eyes to see what was going on. She slightly groaned when she felt pain all around her body as she tried to move.
"Don't try to move. We have medics coming right now." the officer said.
"My parents." Faith mumbled weakly.
"I'm sorry, but...your parents are dead." the officer told her before she blacked out.
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Ok! I fixed the structure, and I hope it looks better!
