Here is my first poem I hope you guys like it!

For: Neji Huyga

The Caged Bird

I am like a caged bird,

Only being let outside,

Outside to entertain.

Always trying to escape,

But there is always,

Always something,

Something in,

In my way.

But there is one difference,

A bird is caged by bars,

But I am caged by fate.

I am like a caged bird,

And a Caged bird is like me.

Accepting fate and destiny,

Destiny and fate.

That fate is predetermined by destiny,

And destiny is predetermined by fate.

There is no "other way" or,

Changing directions.

No way to change,

And no changing the way.

But there is another difference,

A caged bird never gives up,

While I lost all hope,

all hope to,

to be free,

and escape,

escape my fate.

A caged bird is like me,

And I am like a caged bird.

I am ignored when I need attention,

And surrounded when i want to be,

alone.

The world moves too fast for me,

or do I move too fast for the world?

Am I surrounded by a predetermined fate,

or am I,

In control of it myself?

Am I like a caged bird,

Or,

Am I my own?

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