This is my first story that I had written down, but please just tell me what you think about it. I want to know what other people think. I know that the first one's short, but I will try to make the other chapters longer.
A Weird Story
Chapter 1: SIS
Anyone know what SOS stands for? It means "save our (someone's name that begins with a s)". But none of that stuff. Now we are talking about SIS. Basically, it means "(someone's name that begins with a s) is suiciding". Or in this story, "Shadow is suiciding". Now, you might wonder, how can a shadow suicide? The reason being is that it isn't a shadow; it's a name. For those people who don't have a heck of an idea of who he is, let me give you a brief description: He is a super fast robotic hedgehog (he skates with boosters from his robotic shoes) that moves, hears, speaks and stands like a human created by a grandfather of someone with an I.Q. of 300, Dr. Gerald Robotnik. He is the exact counterpart of Sonic the Hedgehog. If you don't who he is, then I'll explain. He is a blue hedgehog that's super fast (he runs). Simple enough.
Anyways, Sonic and Shadow just happened (and don't ask why!) to be racing against each other across a very very very very long pathway to obviously see which hedgehog is faster. Oh, I forgot to mention this but there's no rail. Shadow, who was just a foot behind Sonic, didn't think he was going to win, so he took out a bazooka, fired at Sonic and then jumped off the platform (to avoid the explosion, I guess). Sonic, on the other hand, wasn't as lucky. The explosion had blown him off the platform while he was still running. He then shouted, "Cheater!" as he fell towards Earth (again, don't ask me how Shadow got the bazooka. He just happened to have one, okay?)
Luckily, after 10 hours of sleeping, Sonic woke up to find himself on top of an airplane about, oh let's say about 4,500 ft. above the ground. He was also lucky enough to have landed on the airplane; he would have been baked and ready for eating because of the friction upon entering Earth from outer space. Meanwhile, he still has to find a way to get down. He could bust in the airplane, ask the conductor to land and... be miles away from the place that he knew so well. Telling himself to remind himself to say sorry to the passengers in the plane, he took off a piece of the outer layer of the plane (yes, he took off a piece, but don't ask how) and jumped off, using the piece as a snowboard, landed on the city that he knew so well, by using the piece from the airplane to absorb impact, and started street boarding down the city, aka Westopolis.
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