Hey, Kaage here, this is my first fanfiction so please understand. BUT! with that being said, don't hold ANY punches when reviewing. So enjoy!


So before we start, there is something that needs explaining. In this story, Mana exists. You know, the stuff that makes magic. So I won't go into detail on how it fits in the world of RWBY too much right now, but the main part is that it is something that exists in everyone, but many have forgotten how to manifest and use it.

Secondly, Background info on my OC:


Name

Rain Gleave


Race

Faunus (Wolf)


Age

14(Sanctum Arc)

16(Beacon Arc)


Blood type

AB+


Academy attending

Sanctum Academy (Sanctum Arc)

Beacon Academy (Beacon Arc)


Team member(s)

Cinder Fall (Sanctum Academy, Beacon Academy)

Mercury Black (Sanctum Academy, Beacon Academy)

Emerald Sustrai (Sanctum Academy, Beacon Academy)


Semblance

God's Eye (Allows Rain to accurately predict a person's actions through minor muscle movements. Due to constant training, he can currently predict a person's movements in the next 30 seconds. Eyes turn from bright Rose Red to Arctic Blue)


Weapon(s)

Excalibur (A relic from the Grand Order's House of Knights. Rain can make Excalibur take on different forms. E.g. Longsword, Greatsword, Dual Blades, Dagger, etc.)

Gaia (A suit designed and built by Rain and his close colleague from the Grand Order, Arturia, as a gift for successfully entering Sanctum Academy. Takes the form of a simple black glove with white embroidery and a blue mana crystal. When deployed, It is a black hooded trenchcoat with white embroidery, woven from silk infused with Arturia's mana, with silver lightweight plate armor underneath, as well as boots, gauntlets and a helmet, which can be disabled, all with blue designs, all of which is made out of lightweight metal infused with Rain's mana and pure blue mana crystals. When Gaia is deployed, Rain's control of mana is at it's peak, making his spells and Sword Arts much more powerful. When paired with Excalibur, the Relic's power is increased twofold. Gaia also features a belt that allows Rain to channel Dust into his armor, enhancing his elemental spells)


Affiliation(s)

Grand Order (House of Knights)

Sanctum Academy

Beacon Academy


Appearance

Charcoal black hair with a streak of white and a slight tint of red a the ends of his hair. His face is effeminate, with some male features, and with his bright Rose Red eyes, give him a bishounen, baby-faced look. He stands at 1.79m and has tones muscles.


Usual outfit(s)

The ordinary Beacon uniform with Gaia's compact form on his left hand and Excalibur's dagger form sheathed on his forearm (Uniform).

White cloak, black pants and shoes, with Gaia's compact form on his left hand and Excalibur's dagger form sheathed on his forearm (Casual).

Gaia fully deployed, with hood and helmet on, with Excalibur in it's varying forms Sheathed (Combat).

Gaia fully deployed, without helmet, with Excalibur's dagger form sheathed on his waist, hidden under his cloak (Normal)


Personality

Kind and honest but is very blunt and is never afraid to voice his thoughts. He cannot stand bullies and likes to shoulder burdens on his own, which frustrates his friends. He is a very calm person, preferring to keep a level head in combat and observing his opponents moves. His kind and helpful persona makes him very popular and is often called 'Prince' by his friends and schoolmates.


Trivia

1) Rain, ironically, hates rain. He prefers clear, starry nights.

2) Arturia is Rain's surrogate sister.

3)Rain loves to cook.

4) Rain's favorite dish is a Filet Mignon and favorite desert is Tiramisu Soufflé.


Hope this helps. As for mana, it will be further explained as the story progresses.