A/N: This is my first fanfic and I would really appreciate some reviews.
I would like to request only constructive criticism from my reviews. Thankyou!
ENJOY!
"MWPP"
"Eh, I can't get this charms spell right!" sighed James
James was sitting in the corner, of the Gryffindor Common room. He looked at Sirius,
expectantly, for help on his charms homework. Remus ambled his way through the door
to greet his friends.
"What prank are you planning on ol' Snape this time?" wondering Remus.
"Oh, Just the usual, a few dungbombs under the bed, underpants as the school flag, you
know, the usual." Replied Sirius.
A beautiful girl, who had just approached the entrance of the Common Room, was named Lily.
She had obviously tried to fit about ten books in her small carrying bag, but ended up
carrying almost all of them. Her hair was like the color of the sun, she had freckles
across her nose and high cheek bones. But today her hair was tosled every which
way from spending all day at the library.
James approached her anxiously, wanting help on his (very hard) charms homework.
James knew that Lily's best subject was charms so he thought that she could tutor him.
"Lily, Could you tutor me in charms?" asked James.
"Sure, Just meet me at the Great Hall in an hour." she said very embarassingly, with the
looks that Sirius kept giving her.
When they met up an hour later, Lily walked in and dumped all her things on the table to
tutor James with. James did not like admitting that he needed help but, he desperatly
needed it.
After a half an hour or so the lights flickered and some strange noises came from a
distance...
I would like to request only constructive criticism from my reviews. Thankyou!
ENJOY!
"MWPP"
"Eh, I can't get this charms spell right!" sighed James
James was sitting in the corner, of the Gryffindor Common room. He looked at Sirius,
expectantly, for help on his charms homework. Remus ambled his way through the door
to greet his friends.
"What prank are you planning on ol' Snape this time?" wondering Remus.
"Oh, Just the usual, a few dungbombs under the bed, underpants as the school flag, you
know, the usual." Replied Sirius.
A beautiful girl, who had just approached the entrance of the Common Room, was named Lily.
She had obviously tried to fit about ten books in her small carrying bag, but ended up
carrying almost all of them. Her hair was like the color of the sun, she had freckles
across her nose and high cheek bones. But today her hair was tosled every which
way from spending all day at the library.
James approached her anxiously, wanting help on his (very hard) charms homework.
James knew that Lily's best subject was charms so he thought that she could tutor him.
"Lily, Could you tutor me in charms?" asked James.
"Sure, Just meet me at the Great Hall in an hour." she said very embarassingly, with the
looks that Sirius kept giving her.
When they met up an hour later, Lily walked in and dumped all her things on the table to
tutor James with. James did not like admitting that he needed help but, he desperatly
needed it.
After a half an hour or so the lights flickered and some strange noises came from a
distance...
