Alright, this is my first ever fan fiction, and it's mostly a test for myself to see if I can actually write this stuff. Please tell me what you think, as much detail as you can so that I know if I should continue with this kind of thing, and if there is anything I can improve on.
"YOU'RE our jonin!?"
"Yes... do you have a problem with that?"
The other two genin tried to hush their companion, but he wouldn't have it. He had reason to be angry, both would have to admit. The boy was shorter and likely younger then they were.
"How old are you...?"
"Seven, are you three ready to go?"
The boy scoffed and ruffled the boy's hair.
"You're not really a jonin, run along with your classma-"
He was cut short when the boy disappeared, reappearing behind him.
"Are you done now? Good... Come with me..."
The boy walked out the door, leaving the three to follow at their leasure. The first boy looked to his companions.
"This can't be right... you saw the other jonins! They were all adults!"
"I had heard of a boy... wh-"
"I don't care what you heard! Let's go..."
The other two sighed, and joined their companion in following the jonin. They soon arrived above the village. They were seated together, sitting opposite the jonin.
"Now that we are out in the open, we can talk freely... Tell me each your names, what you like or dislike, and what your goal in life is, starting with you."
He pointed to the only girl of the group, turning his full attention to her. The girl wore a black battle kimono tinted with red. Her hair was mid length and black, reaching down to her shoulders. She spoke quietly.
"My name is Kiara... I have no family, so that is all I am known as... I like animals, and dislike people who are noisy... My goal in life is to make friends with one of every kind of animal..."
The jonin nodded and then pointed to the next genin. He was smaller then the other two, and wore a pair of thick glasses. His hair was longer then Kiara's, reaching down to the small of his back. He wore a simple black shirt and cargo pants. His voice was smooth and rich with knowledge.
"My name is Orion, I also have no family... I like books... I am not fond of people acting on prejudice... My goal in life is to learn everything that is practically useful..."
The jonin looked sideways at Orion, and then looked to the final of the genin, the obnoxious one. He was taller then both his companions, and kept his red hair short. Unlike the others, he preferred a full body red ninja suit, which was much the same color as his hair. His voice was rough and strong, showing that he used it often, and did so loudly.
"Name's Kai! I like food and fighting and hate kids like YOU. I'm gonna become Anbu captain!"
The jonin sighed and then looked at the three. He was about the right size for a seven year old, and wore a black vest, tinted with gold. His hair was pure white and reached just beyond his shoulders. His voice was light, but commanding.
"Now it's my turn... My name is Rico. Just like you three, I have no family. What I like or dislike is unimportant... and my goal is for me alone to know. I am glad that we have finished this now, because it means I have more time to myself and less time with the three of you for this day."
Rico stood up now.
"We will meet tomorrow, and I will decide whether or not it is worth it to allow the three of you to continue being Genins."
"WHAT!? We worked hard to become Genin's damnit!"
"I know... but what you must understand, Kai, is that there is only so much a little knowledge test can reveal... meet me at the dojo tomorrow morning at sunrise."
