Chapter 1 Not like the movie
Hold on Kate I'm coming I yelled. Kate began to slip and fall into the mudslide and I racked my brain trying to think of how to save her. I said, "Lemme think lemme think." I looked up and saw that there was a vine over the mudslide below us. I jumped and felt weightless for a brief moment and then sank my jaws into the vine and I heard Kate yell, "HUMPHREY!"
I swung on the vine and through my gritted teeth yelled, "Don't worry Kate, its all part of the plan." She looked at me and said, "I can see that." I swung closer to her and shouted, "Kate, grab my tail." Kate started to slip and looked at me confused and said, "Grab your what?" I yelled, "Take those alpha jaws and grab my…" I didn't get any further, She sank her jaws into my tail and I yelled, "OW, my tail my tail!"
I felt like my tail was going to fall off and I yelled for Kate to wiggle around. I called, "come on Kate wiggle!" She started swinging us closer to the ledge and her tail brushed up against my nose and I said jokingly, "Who knew I was ticklish there?"
Then the searing pain in my tail returned and I yelled, "Oh I can't take it anymore!" I swung Kate towards the ledge and saw that I had let go of the vine. I felt weightless and saw the mud and dirt race to meet me. I hit the river of mud and sank into its clutches.
I saw only darkness and I clawed my way to the surface and emerged gasping for air. I was relieved to see that the mud was thick enough to stay afloat on and I saw a glimpse of tan on the top of the cliff looking down on where I had disappeared.
The river of mud sucked me under and I struggled to stay afloat. Then a log came out of nowhere and I grabbed a hold of it and it smacked me in the head. I felt like the world was spinning and I saw nothing but flashes of red and black. I shook my head and looked back to where I had seen Kate last. I yelled, "Kate, I WILL FIND YOU!" With that the river took me and I was pulled away from the one I loved.
(Extremely short but this is my new idea, if you want me to continue then I will. If not, then I'll discontinue it. But I hope you enjoyed my new idea and don't hesitate to review or leave some advice!)
