Pokemon x sekirei
I am new to writing stories so it might not be up to pare with others. So what I'd like to ask of you my reader is advice on how I can improve myself as a writer.
I do not own Pokémon or Sekirei but I do own this story
Character ages
Sunny Ketchem: 10
Ash Ketchum: 10
Miya: 11
Matsu: 11
Musubi: 10
Kusuno: 5
Gary oak: 10
Misty: 10
Brook: 14
Delia Ketchum: 29
Professor Oak: 55 (because I can't find his actual age)
" pokemon" normal talking
" pokemon" yelling or miya's demonic voice
" Sunny wake up you need to get up or you'll be late for your meeting with professor oak" a young girl with purple hair that goes up to her lower back in hime style and is wearing a shrine maiden outfit with the top half being white and the lower half being purple.
" Alright I'll get up, are the others already downstairs" said a young man with slid back long black hair that goes all the way down to his shoulders he was wearing a blue t shirt and white boxers currently.
" Matsu, Kusono and ash went to professor oaks lab with your Ryhron" Miya said with a purple aura surrounding her and a hanya mask forming behind her.
" U U Understood Miya I'll get ready right now. " Sunny said running straight into the bathroom fearing for his life.
15 min later
Sunny is walking down the stairs of his bedroom and is suddenly tackled to the ground by an orange furred dog like creature. " Grow Growleth Grow" Growleth says as he is licks sunny on his cheek. " HA ha it's good to see you to buddy, you ready to start our journey". Growleth answered by doing an exited black flip and gets of sunny to finish his pokemon food.
" Sunny dear you should hurry up and eat your breakfast or else you'll be late" said Delia Ketchum the mother of the twins Sunny Ketchum and Ash Ketchum.
" Alright mom " he said taking a seat to eat his breakfast with Growleth sitting near his leg eating his pokemon food.
" Good morning Sunny san" a bubbly girl with raven colored hair in hime style, who is also wearing a shrine maidens outfit said with a happy expression. She was also wearing a large bag on her back twice the size of a normal Growleth.
" Good morning to you to Musubi are you ready to go on the journey" ' even after the past year I'm still not use to her being so strong' sunny said and thought.
" of course as long as Musubi gets to go with Sunny san she will be happy" Musubi said with a smile.
Sunny just smiled back at her.
" Aw how cute" Delia said making sunny blush.
"Sunny are you done we should really get going, it's rude of us to keep the Professor waiting" Miya said hoping sunny would finish his breakfast soon.
" Give me a minute and I'll be done" sunny said inhaling his food in fear off miya bringing out her hanya mask. " Alright lets go burp excuse me" he said with a small blush.
" Your excused and before you go here's you bag, I've made sure to pack all of your essentials such as your underw" Delia didn't get to finish because sunny flew straight out of the house with Growleth following before his mother could finish her sentence.
" Good by mother, I'll make sure sunny calls you every chance he gets" Miya said with a courteous bow.
" Bye mommy" Musubi said with a huge smile.
" See you soon girls and make sure to keep yourselves out of trouble" Delia said
" We'll try" Miya and Musubi said in union as they ran after sunny.
A few minutes later
" Ha ha ha hey Musubi, Miya slow down I can't run as fast as you guys and my stomach hurts a lot" sunny said running behind Miya and Musubi with his Growleth right beside him.
" That's what you get for not waking up on time and eating like a pig" miya said.
" I only did that because you wouldn't stop nagging me to hurry up" sunny said.
" What was that" Miya said with her purple aurua and hanya mask showing again.
" n no nothing Miya" sunny said afraid of what she would do to him.
As they got closer to the lab a familiar smug faced boy showed up and walked up to sunny who at this point looked like he was going to puck his guts out and his Growleth looked. Like he was ready to rip the boy a new hole.
" hey loser going to start your journey early huh, well I can't really blame you though your goanna need the head start to even stand a chance against me. Though I bet you still couldn't beat me." The boy said with a cocky tone of voice.
" ha ha ha get lost Gary I'm late to meet you grandfather and don't have the time to waste with you" Sunny said looking like he was about to collapse form stomach pain.
" ha look at you, you haven't even started your journey and you already look like you going to die what a loser, I don't even know what the girls see in you, though I guess loser's will be attracted to other loser's " g=Gary said laughing at sunny.
" why you little oh oh bluurgh" sunny said and then puked all over Gary Oak. " oh I feel much better and just to tell you gary they chose me because first I'm not gay like you gay-ry and second I don't act like an ass and third hahahahaha that was priceless" Sunny said to Gary as he laughed at him with growleth laughing and rolling around beside him.
" that's not funny you dork" Gary said enraged.
" Gary get lost and sunny hurry up 'now'" Miya said form behind Gary making both boys scream like little girl as he ran for his life.
Sunny just ran past Miya as fast as he could fearing Miya for what she would do to him if he took anymore time.
In a few minutes they made it to professor oaks lab and went inside to find professor oak holding six pokeballs in his hand.
Sunny was then tackled down into onto the floor " hi onii chan, you took to long". Sunny then looked down to see a little five year old girl with blond hair that goes to her lower back and a white sundress sizzling her face onto his chest.
" Ry Ryhorn" Sunny's other best friend Ryhorn said as he walked up to like his face affectionately licked it as sunny sat up while holding Kuu.
" Its good to see you both Ruu, Ryhorn sorry for taking so long I overslept, oh and by the way where Matsu" he asked wondering where she was.
" Matsu nee chance took the device professor make, she said she was going to make improvements on it" Kuu said getting out of the hug.
" Don't worry sunny she'll be back in a little bit and here are your pokeballs, you should probably put Growleth and Ryhorn in their pokeballs to make them your official starters" Professor Samual Oak.
" Thanks professor" sunny said as he tapped Growleth and Ryhorn capturing them with no struggle officially making them his pokemon.
" Oh ya where's Ash I thought he came here with the others" Sunny asked.
" Ash went with Matsu to get a look at the device I made, he just couldn't wait to get his own" professor oak said with his usual smile.
" Ssunny tan your finally here I was making the upgrades to the pokedex that the professor asked me to make" a girl with long red hair tied in a braid and a white Chinese dress said.
" Hey bro took you long enough" said a boy that looked slightly like sunny but his hair was more wild.
" Ya sorry about that Matsu , ash, so is that dark blue device in your hand is a pokedex" sunny greeted and asked.
" Yes my boy it will allow you to gather information any pokemon you record with it and thanks to matsu's help you can now also check the level of the pokemon regardless of it being wild or captured and it will also allow you to keep tabs on how your pokemon are doing at my lab" the professor said.
For sunny to be just impressed at this point would be an understatement. He ran at Matsu and gave her a full on bear hug making everyone in the room sweet drop. " Thank you Matsu you're the best this will help me train my pokemon to their full potential" sunny said as he hugged her.
" You're welcome sunny tan but can you put me down, unless you want to do some experiments fufufu" Matsu said making sunny go bright red out of embarrassment and making him drop her.
" Matsu lewed acts are not allowed remember" Miya said to Matsu in a dark voice
" understood Miya tan" Matsu said scared of Miya.
" Alright now since you have everything you need you should go and start your journey though I'm still surprised you wanted to go two weeks earlier than the others" Professor Oak said.
"What can I say I like to have an advantage and I couldn't wait to start" sunny said with a huge smile on his face. He and then said bye to his brother and the town folks and went straight into route one with Miya and the others tailing behind him, during their first day their sunny checked his Growlths and Ryhorns current levels and was satisfied with what he saw Growleth was level 13 and Ryhron was level 9. He also checked their move set and learned that Growleth was currently able to use are bite, roar, ember and odorslith. Ryhorn's current move set was horn attack tail whip and stomp.
As they were walking down the rode sunny spotted a Poliwag and though ti would be perfect to use against the pewter city gym.
" Nii chan what type of pokemon is that" Kuu asked looking up at her brother figure.
" it's a Poliwag a water type kuu and t's the perfect pokemon to capture for my battle against the pewter city gym" Sunny said with a grim on his face.
" Go Ryhorn" sunny said as he released his Ryhorn.
" Ryhorn start off by using horn attack on Poliwag" sunny said. Ryhorn charged at Poliwag hitting it with its horn making it cry out in pain.
" Alright now quickly hit it with a stomp before it gets back up" sunny said. Ryhorn did as sunny said and quickly stomped on the Poliwag as hard as it could almost knocking it out. Sunny then proceeded to through a pokeball at it. The pokeball hit the Poliwag and covered it in a red light absorbing it. The pokeball shook a little but stopped after a few seconds capturing the Poliwag.
Everyone else was looking at the battle in aw and were all overjoyed that sunny caught his first pokemon, especially Kuu and Matsu. Kuu because she wanted to play with the little Poliwag and Matsu because she wanted to study it and learn everything she possibly could about it.
" Sweet my first capture I wonder what level it is" sunny said. He brought out his pokdex to scan the Poliwag inside the pokeball to check its level. Poliwag was level 5 and knew the moves watersport and bubble.
" Well looks like I got to train this little guy extra hard when we get to viridian. I'd also like to get another water type so. Miya is it alright if I go the river nearby and fish for some water pokemon" sunny said as he turned around to look at the others.
" Sure we could use a short break while your fishing but the longest you get to stay is one hour no longer understood" Miya said with a smile
" That sounds fair alright lets get to the lake so I can get my self another water type" sunny said. When they got to the lake sunny took out his good rod that he asked for his birthday while Miya sat down on a blanket she set with Matsu sitting next to her scanning sunny's Poliwag's pokeball so that she could gather information on how it's species function. Kuu and Musubi were playing near the lake.
After a few minutes of fishing sunny got a bite and he was really surprised to see a Horsea biting on his line. " Sweet go Growleth" sunny said as he brought out his growleth in order to battle the little horse who looked liked it also wanted to fight. It quickly shot a bubble attack at Growleth damaging him.
" Growleth hit Horsea with a bite attack quickly" sunny said. Growleth quickly charged at the horse and hit him with a bite attack that seemed to do quite a bit of damage. Horsea quickly retaliated by using smokescreen to lower Growleth vision.
" Be patient and use ember on Horsea the second you get a chance" he said. Growleth did as sunny said and waited patiently. After a few seconds a bubble attack flew at Growleth from his left side so he moved out of the way quickly and charged at the direction the bubble came from. Growleth saw horsea as he ran and shot it's ember at horsea nocking it on it's back. Sunny quickly took out a pokeball and tossed it at horse. The pokeball struggled a little but sunny was able to capture Horsea. He then preceded to check it's level and move set. Horsea was level 8 and knew the moves bubble, leer and smokescreen.
" not bad sunny tan" Matsu said from behind sunny's shoulder. Matsu's action scared sunny causing him to unintentionally jump into the river. Everyone giggled at his expense and his Growleht went into full-blown laughter at his trainer.
" Ha ha very funny now I need to change my cloths, Musubi pass me a spare set of sloths form my bag and Matsu if you so much as even peek at me ill let Growleht use you as his chew toy understand" sunny said very mincingly as he got out of the water.
" U Understood Sunny tan Matsu will behave" Matsu said not wanting to be on the receiving end of Growlths bite attack.
" Here you go sunny san" Musubi said as she handed him his cloths. Sunny then went behind a tree so that he could get out of his wet cloths into dry ones, once he was in dry cloths he hung his wet cloths for about forty minutes and then they went on their way to viridian city which only took them half a day to get to. Afterwards they headed tot eh pokemon center so sunny could get his pokemon checked and register for the pokemon league after that was done he called professor oak and his mom to tell them about his journey so far.
" Oh sunny my boy, I see you've made it to viridian" professor oak said.
" Yes professor I'm planning on staying here for a week to prepare for my gym battle against the pewter gym" sunny said
" that's good to here my boy, oh by the way I made a bet with gary. He said he would give me a million pokedollars if you were able to catch at least one pokemon" professor oak told sunny.
" Well it's your lucky day professor I caught two a Poliwag and a Horsea" sunny said with a grin happy that he got to ruin Gary's day.
" That's good to here looks like I'm a million pokedollars richer, well I should say goodbye I have to get back to work" the Profesoor said.
" Alright good bye professor I'll call you when we get to pewter city" sunny said as he hung up the phone and called his mothers number.
" Hello, oh hi sweaty how is your journey so far" Delia said.
Before Sunny could answer he felt a tug on his leg and saw Kuu looking at the screen. He figured she wanted to say his to his mother so eh picked her up so she was face to face with his mother.
" Hi mommy the journey is great so far Kuu is having a lot of fun with Onii chan and Musubi nee chan" Kuu said with a smile.
" Oh I'm glad to hear that, oh ya sunny your ash said he wanted to talk to you when you called so I'll go get him alright" Delia said as she left to quickly get Sunny's brother.
" Hey bro how's your journey so far, what pokemon have you caught so far" ash asked his brother without a moment of hesitation.
" It's good so far, I've caught a Poliwag and a Horsea so far I'm plan on training them for a little bit before I battle my first gym" sunny replied.
" That's awesome you Gotta let me battle later" ahs said with a huge smile on his face.
" Sure I'll wait for you at cerulean city well battle their well make it a three on three so make sure to catch at least two pokemon when you get their" Sunny replied.
" Deal, I can't wait I'm definitely going to win" ash said
" well see little brother" sunny said.
" Onii chan can we go eat I'm hungry" Kuu said as she was in Sunny's arms.
" Alright Kuu, I'll meet you at cerulean, see you later bro" sunny said as he cut the phone and put Kuu down to meet with the others and get some food. After they ate dinner sunny got his pokemon from nurse joy and then went to bed with Kuu sleeping with sunny since she would complain if she wasn't allowed to. For the next week sunny trained all off his pokemon with one hours of physical workout an hour of practicing their moves and then another hour of sparring and he did this two time a day for the entire week.
I apologies if the story isn't that good but I'm new to this so just bear with me for now.
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Growth lv 13 -16
Ryhorn lv 9-13
Poliwag lv 5 – 10
Horssea lv 8- 12
