Come back, Wake up: Ch 1: Coma

"Naruto...Naruto wake up please...Naruto I need you...please wake up." Sasuke bent over his best friend's currently limp body, not knowing what to do in order for him to wake his so called friend up. He stayed by his side and cried until he too was asleep next to the unconscious boy.

/ SasuxNaru is love/

Sakura came into the hospital, checked in, and went straight to Naruto's room. She wasn't too surprised to find Sasuke curled up to Naruto on the small hospital bed, breathing lightly, fast asleep. She chuckled silently to herself as she walked out of the room remembering the first time she found him like that - let's just say Sasuke got a long lecture on hurting Naruto and she had also got a nice signature Uchiha glare.

She finished her rounds, quickly checking on everyone, and walked off to the front desk to sit down only to look back and forth between the clock every now and then. Sakura was the only one there at the present time - seeing as it was 5 am it may be normal for ninjas, to wake up at this ungodly hour, but for the villagers it wasn't. The young kunochi sitting bored for a minute or two, picked a manga out of her bag; she had nothing better to do anyway.

/ SasuxNaru is love/

Sasuke woke up to find himself curled up against Naruto's warm body. "Mm…Good morning Naruto.""Sasuke-teme I'll beat you no problem! You just watch dattebayo!" Sasuke sighed hoping that the blonde haired ninja would hear him, and suddenly wake up. "Naruto wake up sometime soon please? ...I'm going to take a shower." Sasuke shook his head as if he were trying to rack his brains for some sort of cure for Naruto's coma.

I walked down to the front desk to tell Sakura. I knew she was down there anyway. I cleared my throat and she looked up "Ohiyo Sasuke how was your sleep?" I gave a small nod. "Fine thanks, and yours?" She just smiled broadly. She wasn't the annoying fan girl any more just a good friend. I extended my hand and she gave me a towel, we've been here so long we've fallen into routine. "Thanks see you later." I stated before turning on my heel and began to make my way to the shower. "Bye I'll stop by with some food ok?" I heard Sakura call out, just as I was about to turn the narrow corridor, "Fine." I called back, not really caring about the errand that much.

/SasuxNaru is love/

I keep falling, falling through my memories watching as they unfolded right in front of me, sometimes I get caught up in them and scream out at Sasuke or Sakura. I think I'm in my subconscious I have already talked to Kyuubi-sama. He told me that I am in a coma I don't really remember exactly what happened… but I'm trying to remember from as far back as I can.

So far I've found out that Sasuke and I were friends even before the academy and I have met Sasuke's parents and his brother remembering how much nicer he was though I am sure he was kind of scared me. He flicked my forehead, and it hurt! Sasuke's mom was really pretty and is dad was really mean! I didn't know he had a younger sister named Crystal? She was really pretty just like her mother.

Anyway I saw when I met Sakura, Sasuke and Kakashi, Iruka, Kiba, Hinata, and the rest of every one saw my first mission saw Sasuke die – well I thought he did… I saw Sakura cry and Haku, Zabuza, Gato and his men die, I watched as the snow fell and think it was the most beautiful thing I had ever seen.

I saw me learn the Rasengan and beat Tsunade – I even got her to become Hokage and I trained with Jiraiya to try to get Sasuke. Jiraiya and I then went to train for three whole years and still I wanted to get Sasuke back but when I saw Sasuke standing there at the top of that ledge….

I froze I didn't know what to do I couldn't think just like back then- I saw him perfectly, he pulled his sword and was about to stab me in the back then a huge amount of sound Nin appeared and started fighting Sai and Sakura. Meanwhile Sasuke and I fought; we were fighting for a while until I had hit him in the back of his head with the blunt end of his sword knocking him down to the ground I saw him pass out. Not two seconds later everything went black that's all I really can remember… that's all I've seen.

Sasuke must be back I can hear him shuffling around and noises of clothes rustling, maybe someone was trying to put their own clothes on there was a knock on the door and a, "Hold on." Come from Sasuke the person just opened the door and walked in, I heard him hiss in response. "Sakura!"

"Sasuke it's not like I haven't seen you without your shirt on before! Anyway here's your food, give Naruto his ramen ok?" Sasuke sighed and quickly took the bag from Sakura. "Fine whatever just get out."

"Fine, fine you lucky bastard." She whispered the last part under her breath no doubt Sasuke was glaring at her, I laughed at the picture Sasuke glaring at Sakura in his black shorts while she held a platter, on it three different types of food. It was defiantly a memorable image. "Na-naruto?" I heard Sakura ask carefully, her voice a little surprised and somewhat…confused. "Hai Sakura-chan?" I tried to say but didn't hear my own voice this time. "Naruto!" Sasuke yelled I heard something, like someone hitting someone – I knew someone hadn't hit me… because I hadn't felt anything.

Sakura slapped her hand over Sasuke's mouth, giving him her own cold glare, if Naruto was stressed it wouldn't be a good idea to have someone yelling. "Naruto?" Sakura said sweetly, "Can you open you eyes?" I could feel that my eyes were being weighed down, even before I tried to open them. "Are you standing over me?" I tried once again to get a response. "No - Sasuke is." I tried to open my eyes they were really heavy and it hurt my head so much, then my whole body started to shake with the pain, "N-n-no." I whispered then blacked out again.

/ SasuxNaru is love/

"Naruto can you hear me Naruto?" I frowned as I got no answer from the blonde, though Sakura seemed much more clam than I was – she had probably seen this happen a lot more than me. Then again she probably didn't feel the mass of guilt that I was. I heard her sighing.

"He passed out again." Sakura shook her head, she had hoped that Naruto would have been able to do something other than just be conscious, maybe move a foot or as she had asked, open his eyes. All of those things seemed much too straining for him for the moment. "I'll go get Tsunade-sama."

"Yeah you do that." I lay back down next to him playing with his flaxen hair wondering if he would be able to open his eyes again, knowing that I had been the one to make one of the liveliest ninjas be so quiet. "Naruto…" I frowned, knowing fine well that by me just saying his name would not bring him out of this coma.

"I'm sorry this is all of my fault…" My frown deepened, I wasn't frowning at Naruto, I had suddenly thought about how stupid I had acted. "I'm sorry…" I buried my face in his bright blond hair and let the tears run just like the first night I had came here. I tried not to make any sound…Not as if I would let anyone else see me in this…weak state. "I'm so sorry Naruto." I whispered before falling asleep again.

Ok I'm done what do you think? Please tell me if I'm bad at this or not so I know when to give up-oh and + if you guys like it, it will be longer++