A/N: I edited this chapter and chapter 2 because it was pretty bad. I finally stopped being a lazy bum, so I hope u enjoy!!!!

(my side or side comments)

'character thinking in mind'

- narration

Chapter 1

"Die, Naraku!!!!!!" Inu-yasha yells out, as he uses his Tetsushiga's special attack to hit Naraku. Then Naraku is cut into pecies, but he starts to laugh (as usual). Then a big blast of miasma comes out, and the whole inu-gang jumps for cover. After a couple minutes, the miasma clears and Naraku is no where to be seen.

Inu-yasha: "Where the hell is that bastard!!!!!!!!"

Miroku: "Always running away, what a coward."

Inu-yasha: "I swore to Kikyo, that I would kill him!!!!!"

Kagome: 'Why does he always have to think about her?!'

Sango: "You pervert!!!!" -She slaps Miroku in the face

Miroku: 'I should do this more quietly, then I could…. (in his own lil perverted world)

-Then all of a sudden, a big wind tornado comes.

Inu-yasha : "Just what I needed"

Kouga: "Kagome, how I missed u!!!!!!!"

Kagome: "Hey Kouga!"

 Kouga: "Come with me, far away from this dog turd and we'll be together forever!!!"

Inu-yasha: "Why you lil piece of shit" (and as usual he charges at Kouga with is sword ready to slice the crap out of him)

Kagome (looking pissed) "SIT!!!"

Shippou: "That's what u get, dog crap!!!"

BONK!!!!- 5 bumps appear on his head

Shippou: "wa wa wa" (crying)

Sango: "I guess Shippou's learning his language from Kouga."

Miroku: "Indeed, I think Kouga is a better influence to him than Inu-yasha."

Inu-yasha : "Your supposed to be on my side!"

Miroku: "I am"

Kagome: "Kouga, I can't leave with you, I…

Kouga: "So, you're still goin to stay with dog breath?!"

Kagome: "His name is Inu-yasha (looking annoyed)

Kouga: "Ewwl-waka?"

Kagome: 'this is hopeless'

-Kouga and Kagome are now having a lil chat, on where the other jewel might be

Inu-yasha : "Wolf boy prepare to die!!!!" -Inu-yasha charges at Kouga, again

Kouga: "That's my line!!!"

Kagome: "I think it's time for you to go Kouga, bye, Inu-yasha SIT!"

Inu-yasha : Noooooooooo!!!! - he slams to the ground 3 times.

Kouga: "Bye Kagome, I'll see you soon" -Then he leaves

Inu-yasha : "Nooo!!! Come back here!!!" -but no one could hear him since his face was in the dirt

 

 

 

End of Chapter 1