A/N: I edited this chapter and chapter 2 because it was pretty bad. I finally stopped being a lazy bum, so I hope u enjoy!!!!
(my side or side comments)
'character thinking in mind'
- narration
Chapter 1
"Die, Naraku!!!!!!" Inu-yasha yells out, as he uses his Tetsushiga's special attack to hit Naraku. Then Naraku is cut into pecies, but he starts to laugh (as usual). Then a big blast of miasma comes out, and the whole inu-gang jumps for cover. After a couple minutes, the miasma clears and Naraku is no where to be seen.
Inu-yasha: "Where the hell is that bastard!!!!!!!!"
Miroku: "Always running away, what a coward."
Inu-yasha: "I swore to Kikyo, that I would kill him!!!!!"
Kagome: 'Why does he always have to think about her?!'
Sango: "You pervert!!!!" -She slaps Miroku in the face
Miroku: 'I should do this more quietly, then I could…. (in his own lil perverted world)
-Then all of a sudden, a big wind tornado comes.
Inu-yasha : "Just what I needed"
Kouga: "Kagome, how I missed u!!!!!!!"
Kagome: "Hey Kouga!"
Kouga: "Come with me, far away from this dog turd and we'll be together forever!!!"
Inu-yasha: "Why you lil piece of shit" (and as usual he charges at Kouga with is sword ready to slice the crap out of him)
Kagome (looking pissed) "SIT!!!"
Shippou: "That's what u get, dog crap!!!"
BONK!!!!- 5 bumps appear on his head
Shippou: "wa wa wa" (crying)
Sango: "I guess Shippou's learning his language from Kouga."
Miroku: "Indeed, I think Kouga is a better influence to him than Inu-yasha."
Inu-yasha : "Your supposed to be on my side!"
Miroku: "I am"
Kagome: "Kouga, I can't leave with you, I…
Kouga: "So, you're still goin to stay with dog breath?!"
Kagome: "His name is Inu-yasha (looking annoyed)
Kouga: "Ewwl-waka?"
Kagome: 'this is hopeless'
-Kouga and Kagome are now having a lil chat, on where the other jewel might be
Inu-yasha : "Wolf boy prepare to die!!!!" -Inu-yasha charges at Kouga, again
Kouga: "That's my line!!!"
Kagome: "I think it's time for you to go Kouga, bye, Inu-yasha SIT!"
Inu-yasha : Noooooooooo!!!! - he slams to the ground 3 times.
Kouga: "Bye Kagome, I'll see you soon" -Then he leaves
Inu-yasha : "Nooo!!! Come back here!!!" -but no one could hear him since his face was in the dirt
End of Chapter 1
(my side or side comments)
'character thinking in mind'
- narration
Chapter 1
"Die, Naraku!!!!!!" Inu-yasha yells out, as he uses his Tetsushiga's special attack to hit Naraku. Then Naraku is cut into pecies, but he starts to laugh (as usual). Then a big blast of miasma comes out, and the whole inu-gang jumps for cover. After a couple minutes, the miasma clears and Naraku is no where to be seen.
Inu-yasha: "Where the hell is that bastard!!!!!!!!"
Miroku: "Always running away, what a coward."
Inu-yasha: "I swore to Kikyo, that I would kill him!!!!!"
Kagome: 'Why does he always have to think about her?!'
Sango: "You pervert!!!!" -She slaps Miroku in the face
Miroku: 'I should do this more quietly, then I could…. (in his own lil perverted world)
-Then all of a sudden, a big wind tornado comes.
Inu-yasha : "Just what I needed"
Kouga: "Kagome, how I missed u!!!!!!!"
Kagome: "Hey Kouga!"
Kouga: "Come with me, far away from this dog turd and we'll be together forever!!!"
Inu-yasha: "Why you lil piece of shit" (and as usual he charges at Kouga with is sword ready to slice the crap out of him)
Kagome (looking pissed) "SIT!!!"
Shippou: "That's what u get, dog crap!!!"
BONK!!!!- 5 bumps appear on his head
Shippou: "wa wa wa" (crying)
Sango: "I guess Shippou's learning his language from Kouga."
Miroku: "Indeed, I think Kouga is a better influence to him than Inu-yasha."
Inu-yasha : "Your supposed to be on my side!"
Miroku: "I am"
Kagome: "Kouga, I can't leave with you, I…
Kouga: "So, you're still goin to stay with dog breath?!"
Kagome: "His name is Inu-yasha (looking annoyed)
Kouga: "Ewwl-waka?"
Kagome: 'this is hopeless'
-Kouga and Kagome are now having a lil chat, on where the other jewel might be
Inu-yasha : "Wolf boy prepare to die!!!!" -Inu-yasha charges at Kouga, again
Kouga: "That's my line!!!"
Kagome: "I think it's time for you to go Kouga, bye, Inu-yasha SIT!"
Inu-yasha : Noooooooooo!!!! - he slams to the ground 3 times.
Kouga: "Bye Kagome, I'll see you soon" -Then he leaves
Inu-yasha : "Nooo!!! Come back here!!!" -but no one could hear him since his face was in the dirt
End of Chapter 1
