This is my First story. Or finished story, it is a one-shot cause I am not sure if I am able to write a full story. Ok if it is bad, I already know. If it is good, then woohoo. I am open to any kind of reviews, good or bad. I would love to know what ya'll think.
Here is "You're Gonna Be Mine"
Jude and Tommy are sitting in the studio at 11:00 at night. Jude tells Tommy that she has a song to record. But when he asks why it had to be recorded so late; "You'll See," is the only reply he gets.
"Are you ready to record yet, girl?" He asks impatiently.
"Give me a minute." Jude tells him yet again.
"Why, I thought you said that you had it done?"
"I do, I just need a minute because this is important." She needs to get her courage together before she goes in there.
"Jude, if you don't hurry we will be here all night." Tommy exasperates.
"Quincy, Just give me a minute, Cause when I am done all you'll want to do is leave, if you don't walk out before I even finish the song," she mutters the last part to herself.
"Okay well get in there, I need my beauty sleep." He says jokingly.
"Okay I am going." Jude tells him as she makes her way into the recording booth. "This is a little different from my normal stuff, so bear with me."
"Okay. Untitled, Take one, on four."
Tommy counts down and Jude starts singing.
Let's go!
Don't want cha for the weekend, don't want cha for a night
I'm only interested if I can have you for life, yeah
Uh, I know I sound serious and baby I am
You're a fine piece of real estate, and I'm gonna get me some land
Oh, yeah
So, don't try to run honey, love can be fun
Theres no need to be alone when you find that someone
(I'm gonna get cha)
I'm gonna get cha while I got cha in sight
(I'm gonna get cha)
I'm gonna get cha if it takes all night
(yeah, you can bet cha)
You can bet cha by the time I say go, you'll never say no
(I'm gonna get cha)
I'm gonna get cha, its a matter of fact
(I'm gonna get cha)
I'm gonna get cha, don't cha worry bout that
(yeah, you can bet cha)
You can bet your bottom dollar, in time you're gonna be mine
Just like I should - Ill get cha good
While Jude is in the recording booth, Tommy sits in the sound booth scared out of his mind. Because he knows, yeah he knows. There is no need for anybody to tell him whom the song is about. Jude has been 18 for a couple of weeks now and he still couldn't get up the nerve to ask her out. He knows she wants to be with him, but he doesn't if he is worthy of her love.
Yeah, uh, uh
I've already planned it - here's how its gonna be
I'm gonna love you and - you're gonna fall in love with me
Yeah, yeah
Oh, yeah
So, don't try to run honey, love can be fun
Theres no need to be alone when you find that someone
(I'm gonna get cha)
I'm gonna get cha while I got cha in sight
(I'm gonna get cha)
I'm gonna get cha if it takes all night
(yeah, you can bet cha)
You can bet cha by the time I say go, you'll never say no
(I'm gonna get cha)
I'm gonna get cha, its a matter of fact
(I'm gonna get cha)
I'm gonna get cha, don't cha worry bout that
(yeah, you can bet cha)
You can bet your bottom dollar, in time you're gonna be mine
Just like I should - Ill get cha good
Jude is surprised he hasn't left yet. She knows that the song would probably freak him out, because of his commitment issues. She doesn't get why he hasn't told her that he loved her and told her that he wanted to be with her. So now she is taking it in to her own hands.
Yeah, I'm gonna get cha baby I'm gonna knock on wood
I'm gonna get cha somehow honey yeah, I'm gonna make it good
Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah
Oh, yeah
So, don't try to run honey, love can be fun
Theres no need to be alone when you find that someone
(I'm gonna get cha)
I'm gonna get cha while I got cha in sight
(I'm gonna get cha)
I'm gonna get cha if it takes all night
(yeah, you can bet cha)
You can bet cha by the time I say go, you'll never say no
(I'm gonna get cha)
I'm gonna get cha, its a matter of fact
(I'm gonna get cha)
I'm gonna get cha, don't cha worry bout that
(yeah, you can bet cha)
You can bet your bottom dollar, in time you're gonna be mine
Just like I should - Ill get cha good
Oh, I'm gonna get cha, I'm gonna get cha real good
Yeah, you can bet cha, oh, I'm gonna get cha
(I'm gonna get cha) just like I should, Ill get cha good
Oh, I'm gonna get cha good!
Jude's POV
As I sing the last words I look up to see Tommy staring straight at me. Eyes showing emotion, I have never seen before. I walk out of the recording booth and sit by Tommy who is still staring straight through the glass into the recording booth.
"Tommy," no answer. "TOMMY," I yell his name, still no answer.
I start to take his silence as rejection and before tonight I had told myself I would stop trying after this one last time. So I get up from my chair and pick up my bag and head for the door. When I reach it, I turn to look back at Tommy, he still hasn't moved. So, I walk out the door.
Tommy's POV
I sit here staring at her. I couldn't take my eyes off of her. She is no longer the 15-year-old girl I fell in love with. Her song was telling me she was going to get me. But what she doesn't know is that she already has me. I hear her say my name when she comes into the sound booth, but I don't move, I feel like I can't. Like I am stuck, frozen in place. Then she yells it. Do I move? Nope I sit here, like an idiot. I hear her getting up to leave but I still don't fully realize what is going on until I hear the door click. I turn my head and She is gone. It is then that I jump out of my chair and chase right after her.
"JUDE!" I yell, she stops dead in her tracks, but doesn't turn around. I walk up behind her and put my hands on her shoulders.
"What" she squeaks out.
I know by the way she asks that she is crying. I freeze I don't know what to do. After a minute or two she starts walking again letting my hands fall from her shoulders.
"I need to go Tommy. Since you aren't gonna say anything to me, I am gonna go and forget that this night ever happened, and you'll be happy to know that after tonight I am going to stop chasing after you." She reaches the door before any words leave my mouth.
"You Have Me" I finally get out.
"What," she whispers but I still hear her.
"You have me. You have always had me; there is no need for you to get me. I am yours girl." I confess what I have known forever.
She turns from the door, tears rolling down her face. "Really?"
"Really!" She runs over to me and throws her arms around me.
"I love you, Jude." I whisper in her ear while inhaling her the smell if her hair.
"I love you, too."
"Sorry it took so long for me to tell you."
"Shh, just kiss me." I pull her to me and obey her request.
The End
