OMGSH, when I wrote this, I had just finished reading Whte house down and it was EPIC! I luved it, and there was this scene i made up and I cant wait to put it in. Not exactly like story, just basic parts.

Max's POV

"WAKE UP! You need to go to Fang's house today!" My mum shouted from the kitchen.

"BUT ITS ONLY 10:00!" I shouted back, yes you must be thinking, 10:00! that's nearly noon!

Well, im not a morning person, so just deal with it.

Anyways, when I finally dressed and went downstairs, I said goodbye to my mum and ran towards my baby. Yes, my beautiful baby, the motorbike. My beautiful baby had red running streaks across it to create a flaming effect that looked like fire when riding quickly.

As I said before, my beautiful baby.

Hi, my name is Maximum Ride but call me Max and i am currently 16. I have dirty blonde hair with brown eyes and an athletic body.

As I drove down to Fang's house, I knocked on the door loudly while shouting.

"hey Fang, you still up for the white house tour?!"

"Just wait! I'll come down in a sec." He shouted back.

As he rushed downstairs, his miss Martinez opened the door and greeted me.

"Hi Max, how's your mum? You excited for the tour?" she asked kindly

"Mum! Can we just go?" Fang whined.

"sure, sure you remembered everything? Your drink bottle and you-" She started

"MUM, WE GET IT!" Fang whined.

As we walked towards my bike, Fang hopped on and we drove off towards the White House of America.

When we finally reached there, I hoped off along with Fang and quickly ran off towards the white house, mega excited because of all the heavy weaponry the white house kept.

And just to let you know, yes, I love anything violent, got it?

As I was saying, as we hurried towards the door, security guards asked us to empty our bags and anything metal and step through the full body scanner.

I gawked at the machinery while Fang smirked in my direction. When they finally finished checking us, we skipped towards the tour guide.

"Hello, this her is the east wing-" he started off

"Yeah we understand all that shit, now tell me where the PEOD is." I interrupted.

"i'm afraid that no one knows where that is." he answered with a fake smile.

"But wikileaks says it's under the east wing." I stated innocently.

He looked at me with a glare. I just widened my eyes innocently. As we were touring the area, we came across the presidential lounge area.

I quickly asked the tour guide where the toilet was.

After I had located the toilet, a loud noise trembled the white house and screams were heard.

Fang's POV

When the explosion erupted, lights immediately went off and screams and shouts could be heard everywhere. I ducked my head and clamped my head between my arms.

Only seconds later, foreign men rushed into the room and ordered everyone to sit. They had armed gear and rifles on their arms. There were 5 men who were aiming guns at everyone.

As this was happening, everyone ducked and many started crying. I immediately crawled over to the tour guide and whispered,

"Where did you send Max?"

"Downstairs, turn left and then right." he whispered back.

As I quickly dialed Max's phone, she didn't pick up.

please review, Im new to this so I really need some ideas