This is a translation of fic I'm writing, so please be kind to me, because english is not my language and I'm starting I would love to receive constructive criticism. thanks in advance.
none of the characters of Naruto belong to me only in my dreams.

The silence was broken by the soft footsteps of a young woman walking down the uninhabited street while his eyes watched with some fear the shadows that seemed to move due to the incessant flashing lights.

The young man said over and over again that there was nothing to be afraid, really was that they were it was nearly twelve o'clock, truth was that the night was dark because there was a new moon and the street lighting was bad , truth was that this was not exactly a safe neighborhood, truth was that there was not a soul on the street that could help if she were in trouble because nobody in their right mind would come out at this hour for this neighborh, but then only was four streets to reach the site of the old building where her apartment, where she could feel somewhat safe (after the lock and put the four extra locks she herself put in addition to the chair that supported the door , as if it were to stop someone who forced their entry).

Now regretted having agreed to replace her colleague in the caff, but the truth was that she had had no opportunity even to refuse, since her partner had been limited to "inform" tha she have a date and would not go to work at she would have to cover that shift, as if she had not enough to fulfill her duty, would also have to comply with the order of her "companion", and this was not the first time that happened, nor the second, she will be happy if the third but it was the tenth in two months.

Why? because she endured all that is asked over and over again is not that complex of martyr or anything like that (at least that was said to herself), but it lacked a strong character (for she was weak) by what others abused, in the sense that they knew she would not refuse to do favors and lend a hand (but then them take no one arm but both.)

But well, that was her way of been, too nice, kind and naive for her own good. and not only that but it also to work an extra shift had had to wait almost an hour at the bus stop "a bus that did not come" to the end when it came puncture a tire was missing three stops before hers.

What happened is that perhaps fate was conspiring against her, or is that today was the day of bad luck of "that month" (the other "unlucky days from other months" had been equal to or worse than this month's).

Memorable was the day when she was returning from their classes when it began to rain and she was waiting for the signal to cross the street when she saw coming a sweet-looking old woman who was not carrying an umbrella, to which she made room for the old lady took shelter under her umbrella, which was not expected was that the old lady reactec screaming by saying that as how he dared, she was a young lady who did not get under an umbrella with any kind of guy to be found on the street, what the poor girl did not know how to react, and that not only had found an old crackpot who thought it was a lady, but that he had mistaken for a guy, a man, is not seen that she belonged to a genere of the females, it is true that her outfit was not very feminine to say but there to be confuse with a guy? and to top it off with a pervert who goes there to haunt the elderly. The few pedestrians who were near killing of laughter, looked so nasty, like she was a pervert but clearly, as if she really would have made some kind of indecent proposal to the sweet old lady ("old crazy), do not know what to do, she felt her face burning with shame, she try to hide her face under the cloack she was wearing, while the traffic light turned green and the other pedestrians and the "sweet old lady" passed the street while she stayed motionless with head bowed and a red face when she realized that the signal was green and could tip was red, had just stepped out of nowhere when a red sports car (I was beginning to dislike the red) pass at full speed and nearly killed her, but if was not enough be wet from head to toe, as was expected as the sport went through a puddle accordingly as the young woman was near term wet with dirty water.

When she arrived at her apartment dirty and wet to the skin to her door it was to discover she had lost her keys, so she had to intet open the lock with a bobby pins, when suddenly the winged neighbor (another old lady of fresh appearance turned out to be one of those old gossips who want to know everything about everyone) mistook a robber and beat her with a umbrella, (I was beginning to dislike the umbrellas) which left her seeing stars (literally). She recovered after tube hold at least a half hour sermon of the neighbor as today's youth was irresponsible, how could have lost the keys, that the corridor was dirty and that only thieves and individuals knew unsavory objects open doors that were not their keys, and so continued for at least half an hour and had continued for hours if it were not for the sounds of upstairs neighbors discucion , the neighbor was to find out the reason and everything related to the discussion, so she could finally open the door to close it was grateful that at last she was in her department and the day was finally ending.

Suddenly the sound of a cry that made that practically jump in the air, a voice in her head said run all tha her legs could take in the direction of her department, while a little voice of her conscience told her that was to find the source of the scream and could see someone thats could need aid, and she obeyed her misfortune an stupid voice, she was approaching a dark alley where she thought the scream had come when she was approaching the alley, heard banging on a conversation as that appeared to be two men, went closer and closer wiht silent steps to hide behind some garbage cans that were right next to the entrance of the alley, she saw two men standing in the middle of the alley, freezes when noticed a third man who was writhing on the floor, one of those men approached and began to deal it a series of brutal punches were the thrown was, the other man standing had a sinister laughed as if watching what degas so full of joy, the laughter began to make fun of him who has been taking a beating and did not seem able to defend it appeared not to be strong and just threw groans of pain, the floor man trying to crawl toward the entrance of the alley, toward the direction in which she was, the figure looked up and saw her. For a moment he the eyes crossed, making a cold will run throughout the body to the girl raised he lifth a hand as indicating that she has to be hidden. She was paralyzed by fear, I could clearly hear the beating of her heart in her ears but also what the other two men were talking, her body was filled with terror by what she had heard, did not even have the opportunity to close eyes when the man (the sinister laughter), it was approaching (the man on the floor that looked at it) with what looked like a Katana, with which you literally cut the head man of the soil, light A car passes by the street lights the alley, just a few seconds, but enough so that the faces of two men standing near the inert figure, it is recorded forever.

The girl remained paralyzed, completely terrified, then observed the two men were headed across the alley an then disappear. She felt like her body was began trembling alarmingly, controlled treatment but without any results, walking near the inert body, could see beyond the blood stains that had allowed this to crawl. Wake up so it was said, this has to be a nightmare, when she saw the head of that poor man, who had been cut, she felt that at any moment was going to faint. She could already feel the dizziness was increasing, but she forced himself to breathe deeply now checked and there was no time for ridiculous things like fainting. So did the stupidest thing she had done until then and would do in her life (and most likely would cost her life), took out her cellphone and frame.
-Police, what is your problem - ask the voice of a woman across the line
the young man had her mouth but no sound was heard, after swallowing saliva a weak voice said - I.I see a aa murde..der

-Take a deep breath, are you well, have you seen what happened, "asked the operator quickly
-I..I am fi..fine, he he ..cut his - responded in a whisper
-he still ther- ask the woman, hastily
-No-
"I have and its location, the patrols are on the way, stay where you are, tell me what your name - ask operator
Hyuuga-Hi-nata.. She could coo her name before her vision was completely black and fall collapsed.
Across the line operator concerned voice asked himself over and over again that if she was OK, while we realized we could hear the sirens of approaching police.

Elsewhere in the city detective Uchiha Sasuke awoke, he was a to have nightmares, but this time his nightmare had they been different had all night, this time he had added a new character in his nightmare a character which could not discern his face, where the character nightmare dragged on the ground, leaving bloodstains as she waved to telling him that to be hidden , he was paralyzed for more efforts to do I could not move a muscle, could not help and saw died, when he was always in his dreams appeared out of nowhere and cut off his head with a katana, all the while he was still paralyzed and unable to move, felt like terror took possession of the and then vacuum. was then woke up, his brow is wet, and his breathing, but returned to bed saying he had only been a nightmare over, and tomorrow would have to go to work. minutes takes him back to sleep. It was necessary that slept that day, that day would change forever the rest of his life for best o for bad.

No se si estara bien he tratado de corregirlo pero he estoy comenzando asi que si alguien pudiese ayudarme seria genial.