A/N: Hey a guy here's my first story review please! It's after Breaking Dawn, when Renesmee is all grown up. Spoilers for those of you who haven't read the book and are really slow readers XD.
BELLA POV
I heard footsteps approaching the door, and I sniffed delicately. It was Jacob. I didn't know what he wanted, per se, but I had a pretty good idea. Nessie was about Jacob's age, and I knew what he must have been feeling. They were the best of friends, and it was hard for Jacob. Harder still that Nessie had a boyfriend of about 2 weeks.
When I consulted Nessie about him, she told me she really liked him. I asked her (doubtfully) if she loved her boyfriend, and her exact answer was,
"God, no! It's Chris!" She scoffed me, even though at times, it really seemed like she did. Even though I hadn't told Jacob, I knew he knew. He probably eavesdropped on any conversation with Nessie. Chris was a good guy, and the family did like him, especially Rosalie, who continually encouraged Nessie to date him. She just wanted her to stay away from Jake. Chris was a hockey player and, amazingly, was almost as tall as Jacob. Definitely not as good looking, but I knew Nessie was not shallow. They went out maybe twice a week (they were out now), and Jacob was a wreck whenever she was gone. Chris was a sweet kid, and I knew if there was no Jacob, he would have been the perfect man for her. They would have been happy, and I could see him becoming my son-in-law. He would handle the vampire thing well. He was tough. But, Jake was a force greater then humanity, and I knew that Nessie really should be his.
Jake had moved into a house that he had built across the street. He was looking to build houses as his job. He still spent 95 of his time at our house, but he knew when the time to leave was. Leah and her brother lived with him, and I knew that Leah and Jake were almost friends, in a way. Nessie, innocent in how much Jake loved her, was determined to get him to go out with Leah.
I walked gracefully over to the door, and opened it before he knocked. He smiled, and I, playing dumb, said,
"Hey Jake, what's up?" He looked a little worried, and he rubbed the back of his neck, looking at the floor.
"Would you go on a walk with me? It'll be fast, I promise." I laughed.
"Don't worry, I have all the time in the world." I led him down the stairs and out the door. When we got outside, and out of vampire earshot of the house, he began talking.
"Well, Bella, you know how I feel about Nessie," he paused, and I nodded. I had grown to accept this, and in a way, I was happy about it. But it did slightly worry me about the fact that one day I might have to confess something to Nessie. That, well, her only love Jacob and I had made out. That would be a fun conversation...
"Well, now we are basically 1 year apart, and it is getting so much harder. I mean she's so beautiful..." he swallowed nervously, and I realized how worried he was. I should take pity on him, but I decided to let him sweat it out. After all, he did imprint on my baby... my baby who was extremely close in age to me.
"And I really want to start working our relationship to be a little more... appropriate to how I feel about her." I looked up alarmed. I opened my mouth to yell at him, but he saw my face and fixed what he had just said. How he felt about her was beyond sex, so obviously, that would be the 'appropriate'. Uhm, how about no?
"Well obviously not exactly how I feel about her, no Bella I would never do that to her. Maybe when we're older..." A wistful expression crept across his face, and I slapped him.
"May I remind you this is my baby, my daughter! Don't you ever talk about her that way! And don't even think it, because I will find out." I threatened in a deadly voice. He was rubbing his cheek, and then I slapped him, even harder on the other one. My motherly instincts were in overdrive. I remembered when I first found out about his imprinting, how angry I was. This was ten, no twenty, times worse.
"Ow, Jesus Bella!' He had a handprint bruise on both sides of his face.
"Oh shut up, it will be gone in 2 hours!" I stormed away from him. About 2 minutes later, I felt bad, so I turned around and apologized. He grimaced, attempting a smile. I assumed all was forgiven, and went back into the house with him.
I left him downstairs as he sat and nervously waited for Nessie to come home. I knew I needed to go over this with Edward. I relayed everything to him, in my mind so the rest of the family wouldn't hear. We were getting a lot better with the whole letting him read my mind thing. At the end of my story, at the part where I flipped out, he stood up.
"WHAT!!" he bellowed, and the walls shook. I stood up and put my hands on his chest.
"Shhh!' I whisper, shouted. HE looked at me, and growled."Why? I'll rip him to pieces!" Rumbles ripped from his chest. "Why not? I'll go now-" I cut him off by throwing myself at him, and wrapped my legs around his waist and kissed him with all my passion. His growls stopped, and I pushed him on the couch so he was lying down and sat on his back.
"Bella, I won't go down, but at least let me get up." I shook my head, and giggled at his expression. He looked at me, evilly.
"Hmm... how bout if I tickle you." He began to tickle me, and I laughed hysterically. I was always ticklish, and it got worse when I became a vampire. He locked me in his arms, much like the time when I was human. I didn't remember all the details from that day, just that part.
"I love you," he whispered, and my face broke out in a larger smile then before.
"And I, you. "
Later that night, Renesmee returned home, a happy glow in her cheeks, and a twinkle in her eyes. The spring night was beautiful. She smiled cheerfully at everyone in the room, and her beauty once again captured me. Her brown eyes, so plain on me as a human, were magnificent. You could drown in them. Her bronze hair was in gorgeous ringlets cascading down her back. Her hair still grew fast, even though her aging had slowed down so she didn't look so different day to day. We had to cut it every 2 days to keep it looking normal.
"How was it?" asked Esme sweetly. She always asked the question, but it was really everyone's question. Jake sat up eagerly the second she came in.
"It was good." She turned and started to walk upstairs.
"WHAT?!" screamed pretty much everyone. She giggled and reappeared.
"You guys need lives," she said lovingly, and came to sit in between Edward and me. She picked up our intertwined hands, and separated them, so we were a chain. She didn't do it in a bad way; it was gentle and sweet, as she always was. It was almost impossible not to love her. She had this thing that she always wanted to be in contact with those she loved. She was a passionate, gorgeous person, and she had a huge heart.
"Well, it was our best date ever. First, he took me to this beautiful park, and there were flowers everywhere, and so romantic, the sun was setting in the background." She sighed. "Then, he took me to this place that was overlooking the ocean, and it had the best food ever." She turned to Jake. "Seriously, we have to go there for dinner." His face brightened, and I knew he was thinking he would make it like a date. "I could bring Chris, and I know who you could bring." She winked. He forced a smile, but I knew he was hurt and disappointed. I also knew my daughter was blind and oblivious. "After that, we went and walked on the beach. The water was freezing so obviously, we didn't go in, but we sat on the sand and it was so beautiful and sweet. He's amazing." She sighed. "Was that enough?"
Alice spoke excitedly, and I knew she had been holding in. "Tell us what happened in the car, and then right after that." Nessie smiled sheepishly. Alice had been able to see Nessie better as she grew older, and as they got closer. They were the best of friends. The three of us went out all the time, and it was bliss. I loved them both so much.
"Well, in the car, he told me he really, really liked me. As we walked up the pathway, he whispered right in my ear he wanted to try something. Then, he kissed me." My eyes went to Jacob's face. His face was scrunched in pain. He had always said he wanted her first kiss. I felt horrible. This boy Chris was not supposed to be in the picture with Jake and Nessie. I needed to talk to Nessie about this.
I stood up, and looked at the time. It was almost nine, and I really wanted to talk to Nessie. I wasn't exactly sure what I wanted to say, but I knew that this conversation would be pretty important. Nessie apparently had other plans.
"Jake, c'mon, let's go get some coffee, I want to go into town for something." Jake stood, a happy facade over his obvious (to everyone but Nessie) pain. After Nessie walked over to the door I tapped Jake. I gave a brief nod. The facade was gone, replaced by real happiness. He hugged me, and ran to catch up with Nessie.
A/N: well there's chapter one :D and I have enough inspiration for number 2 so hopefully it will be up tomorrow or the next day :D or maybe even today, depending on how fast I type :D
