This is my first story. Please reveiw! Should I keep going?

This whole story is in Renessmee's POV

"Renessmee!" I heard my mother call from down stairs. She hated my nick-name every since it was given to me so many years ago by Jacob. Jacob. I wouldn't admit it to anybody except maybe Seth who I had grown close to over the years, but I was in love with Jake.

"What?" I said rushing down the stairs.

"Seth's here!" I smiled to myself. We where going to first-beach today. We where going to meet Jacob and Seth's sister Leah.

"Hey!" Seth bellowed as I reached the front door. He embraced me with a warm hug. A 108 degree hug.

"Let's go!" I blushed. I owed that trait to my mother. He took my hand and led me out to his car. We rode with the windows down to La Push. It was one of the rare sunny days. We pulled into the parking lot of the beach, and saw something nobody expected. At all.

Jacob and Leah kissing.