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He brought the strategies and reputation; I brought the talented and the chaos. It was a stupid plan from the start.
Take down Maria.
But bad odds were my favourite and believe me they were bad.
Very bad.
I was basically leading my men to a slaughter, why? You may ask, well that was because of someone I like to call the Major. Major Jasper Whitlock, originally turned by Maria, and let's just says, he is a little pissed at her, after years of obedience she cast him aside for another, someone that was supposedly a better newborn trainer, that didn't go down to well at all, Jasper took all those faithful to him –most of her army- leaving her and her new toy to train the waking monsters, that were sure to destroy the camp without his help. Unfortunately, the newbie managed to keep most of the newborns under control, not trained but controlled.
That is when the Major sent for me, and my army. Of course I responded by gathering the army and following the messenger back. Who am I you may ask, well, my name is Isabella Marie Swan, Changed August 1888, I'm from a small island off Canada, My father owned a large fishery at the time of my change. (Points for anyone that can guess it!) After my change, my sire, none other than the Major Jasper Whitlock, told me that he didn't mean to change me, but my blood called to strongly to him, he apologized and said he would take me back to his army, to train me and keep me safe until my newborn year was over.
He stuck to his word and I quickly became his best student, though throughout my newborn year my emotions got the better of me, well just one emotion. Lust. The major was there for that too and to say he minded taking care of me then, well he loved it when I was in those moods, now that I'm older I get that he probably fuelled half of the times we fucked but I wasn't going to complain, though he was quite insistent that I stay away from many of the newborn males when I was in a lust driven haze, I saw no problem and slept with many of them-alright all of them-, Jasper was never happy afterwards, he'd rant at me and tell me he was disappointed and he wanted better for me, I saw a softer side of the Major when we were alone, whether he meant to or not, but as soon as we were back in front of the whole army I was just one of the troops.
19 months after I was turned Jasper was commissioned to destroy me, I saw the devastation on his face when I walked through the gate I saw him and Peter, he pulled me close, kissed me once and told me to run and never look back, it was the one piece of compassion I was ever shown in front of anyone but it was an order and orders from Jasper I obeyed.
I never left the south, I moved to the north, and over took a vampires army, wasn't hard you destroy the leader and it's yours, I kept a total of 12 soldiers from that army, I still have every single one of them a century later. Over a decade later, I came up against Jaspers' army once. I destroyed over half of his army of 50, before he saw me, and we both called off the armies, no point in losing soldiers when leaders understand each other.
We talked that day, I told him of what my army had accomplished, our territory, and that I would be willing to have an alliance. He was impressed to say the least, and agreed, he would leave me alone and if he needed me I would help. 80 years on when that messenger arrived and said he came bearing news from the Major, all my plans were dropped and I sent out my general to gather the army, while the messenger relayed the message to me.

Four hours of flat out running later, we arrived at the camp. It was a fairly good replica of where I was trained, main tents to the centre back as you entered the camp, then newborn 'housing' tents that run along both sides leaving a fair sized training arena in the middle, then to the sides of the housing tents you could see the places where fires were lit. When my men and I walked into the camp newborns filtered out from the tents, growling and snarling, my men automatically formed a tight circle around me, rolled my eyes and continued walking towards the tent I knew Jasper would be in. When we were three quarters of the way across the arena Jasper himself emerged from his tent, followed closely by his general Peter and a Blonde female. My soldiers fell into line behind me now, knowing what they had been taught, I looked weak if I need guards, Weakness lead to more attacks, which however easy for us led to more enemies and it snowballed from there.
I was about 5 feet in front of jasper before I bowed, showing the back of my neck – a display of submission to the greater power- My men followed suit, when I straightened up again my men followed suit in perfect synchronisation approx 2 seconds after me. Jasper bowed back in a clear display he also beared his neck to me, telling his army that I was his equal, and I was to be respected as were my men.
When he straightened up he smirked at me. "Isabella, it's been too long, how have you been? How many armies have you destroyed now?" I rolled my eyes; his act of pleasantries was wearing.
"Now, now, Jasper what have I told you? It's Bella and you've known it over almost a century now. I have been well, and my army has destroyed many, but we don't go in search of battles as we used to my territory encompasses most of the North." I glanced around the camp, some of the newborns were rumbling, probably because I didn't call Jasper Major. "You know of this already, may I suggest we take this somewhere more private, and less open?" I raised an eyebrow at him. He nodded
"Of course Bella, we may talk in private, have no fear your men will not be harmed." He glared around at his newborns whilst saying this. "They may practise with the newborns as they go through their training." I nodded. He turned to his general "Okay then, Peter, Charlotte if you don't mind, Bella's' men will join, practise as normal. Bella this way please."
I turned and looked at my men. "Behave." Was all I said before turning and following jasper to where he was holding open a tent.

When I walked in I could see it was clearly Jaspers personal tent, maps where spread over a desk to the right, a large bed lay to the back of the tent and the pole that held the tent in the middle up had ropes bound to it. I smiled at that, before turning and coming face to face with Jasper, I gasped; I hadn't heard him come behind me. He grabbed my waist and pulled me closer pushing his lips to mine and hungrily devouring them, I moaned and my hands slid into his hair pulling him closer as I desperately kissed him back. It had been too long. Before it could carry on Jasper pulled back and I could see the man that had trained me, the one that had been so disappointed when I slept with other newborns, and the one that saved my life. "Jazz." I murmured almost too quiet for a vampire to pick up, I ran my fingers through his hair as he watched me with an almost longing look. He pressed his face into my hair before taking a deep breath.
"Bells, it's been too long." He pulled away much to my displeasure. "We have business to discuss." And with that Jazz was gone and the Major was back. I snapped back into military mode also then.
"That we do Major. Now you know that my army has come here as a favour to you, to help rid you of a problem. I just want to remind you, this problem does not affect me, and I doubt it ever will. This means I want my men in their own tent, a nice one like this would do, If they believe that your newborns won't stand against them, what am I talking about of course they wouldn't" Jasper frowned and growled at the statement. I smirked "Correction if they believe that they couldn't at least give a decent fight to them, they will take over training, and I will need all Information about Maria's army passed onto to both me and Zak, and if he deems it not sufficient my boys will running scouting missions. They will not follow your orders unless I say, but they will respect you. They will kill anyone that attempts to harm them outside of training; they will also seriously injure anyone who speaks ill of themselves or me. We may be guests, but both you and I know that my boys could take out this place and not break a sweat. Do I make myself clear?" I didn't raise my voice throughout the entire speech and Jasper stayed thoughtful for a few moments after.
"So basically, you want a nice tent for you and the men. To have rule over training, scouting missions, and information as well as having a complete 'get-out-of-jail' card when it comes to punishment of my newborns?"
"I want a nice tent for my men, I'm staying in your tent Major, it's headquarters is it not?" He nodded and growled slightly at the comment. "Well then that's settled then. Now I want to watch the newborns training." He nodded, smirking and then gestured to the doorway. I smiled and walked out into the sunrise, I was dimly sparkling, when I turned to Jasper, he was frowning at his arms; they too were starting to sparkle.
"Yes, Jasper you sparkle, you have for over 100 years." I chuckled, placing my hands on my hips raising one eyebrow. He scowled at me.
"Thank you Bella, I hadn't noticed, I just hoped that they'd be done training before sunrise, we have humans travel through the area quite often and it's not feeding day yet, I don't feel like changing location again." I pursed my lips that was a con to a newborn army; they had little to no restraint when it came to human blood.
"Well, we better hurry so we can finish this sooner rather than later." He snapped into Major mode and took off to the west of camp. It was barely 500m away, just on the outskirts of the camp, an arena in which I assumed they were teaching war games (simulated battles, in which one side has the upper hand and better ground/more obstacles to hide behind. (Think of a paint ball arena, then picture all the obstacles made from natural materials)) Zak glanced up from his spot across the field and nodded at me, they were good then. Zak probably thought they could be better, but we'd work with what we were given. I watched what was happening, the newborns took one side and my army took the other, my boys were going easy, they were letting the newborns get close. For five minutes everything was going well, that is until a couple of the newborns got into a fight between themselves, A tall blonde male and short red head, began fighting with each other, before anyone could step in the red head and decapitated the blonde, I glanced at Jasper who was furious, his face was hard and he was glaring radiating Pure fury.
"ENOUGH!" he bellowed, the newborns all snapped to attention and submission, heads bowed they quickly formed lines. I nodded at my men to gather behind Zak.
"What have I told you? How many more times will I have to tell you, killing each other will not help us, we have a war to fight soon. You need to learn restraint or your feeding days will be reduced yet again. I have told you over and over again." He was talking in a deadly quite voice pacing in front of them. "Final chance or you all die." I stepped up then, barely touching him on the arm giving him a look, he nodded and stepped back, to stand behind me. I glanced over the newborns still submissive, I stood up straight before speaking.
"I have come here as a favour to the major, I am slightly disappointed in the fact that my men had to hold back to allow you to get the courage to go close. Yes, it is true my men could annihilate you in mere seconds, you are not worth our time, to be honest unless my general could see potential you would all be dust by now, and Lucky for you he does see it. You will be given one hour to calm down regroup and get ready. Zak is now you trainer, you obey him; if he says jump you jump, if he says run you run, if he says fight you fight. Got it? I truly hope you do, he is a cruel trainer, and it works I still haven't lost a single soldier in over a century. We demand respect and will not hesitate to kill for insolence, bad mouthing, threats and harm outside of the training arenas. Fighting among yourselves is stupid and if you start killing each other we will kill you. To put it simply, obey or die." I nodded at Zak to take over. I turned and walked back to Jaspers tent to relax for a while as I left I heard Zak start talking.
"You heard her, one hour then back here. Go." I smiled as I walked past Jasper seeing his pensive face.
Things were about to change.