please review this is my first story and i just wanna know if people have actually read it
Last sacrifice
chapter one
"Abe. Abe. Abe. . what has he gotten me into!" i said talking to myself
"i knew it! i knew i shouldn't have trusted him with being my lawer!" i said again
i wonder how crazy i sound to the guards but yet again i don't really care.
"i didn't do it" she said to the guard he had no idea what it felt like. Ive been down here for
24 hours and i need someone to talk to. i cant talk to the guards they all think i did the
crime.. they think i killed the queen. Everyone who doesn't know the truth is disgusted in me.
The great Rose Hathaway is in jail ready to be is 1 guard in outside my cell and 8
outside of the room guarding the door, and that is how serious this is.
"Guard what is your name" Rose ordered in a confident voice
"if you must know its luke jenoski" he said annoyed he was wearing a blue t-shirt and the
sleeve were cut of he was tan. He had light brown hair and brown eyes. Low voice and somewhat of a
big nose for his face but it fit him.
Rose hesitated.. "has anyone tried to vistit" rose suddenly ordered again.
he said frustrated "yes" he even seemed kind of annoyed with people trying to visit
"the dumphmarus girl 4 times,adrian 6 times, Abe
twice, and guardian dimitri one time but i don't think he came down to ask me a question i think."
dimitri! he might have came to see me? then a thought suddenly popped into my head "guardian demitri?"
"yes." "they decided they can make him into a guardian again, he has been good
and when he fought off all those guardians they knew! he had to be a guardian again."
"and actually hes gunna be taking my place in a few hours." he sounded relieved that he didn't
have to be stuck down here answer questions from me
Dimitri.. i get to see him in a few hours. Then i remembered love fades mine has.
"great" only loud enough for me to hear.
and i found myself falling to sleep.
