AN/ First Fan Fiction that I'm actually going to post. Thought about this in school cuz im a weirdo :3

Chapter 1:

I can't believe it she's gone. My sister is dead. I lay down on my bed sobbing.
I mutter "Rose why did it have to be you?" "It could have been me. Dumb old Hugo" Just after I said that Lily Knocks on the door. "Come in" I say trying to hide the fact that I've been sobbing. Lily is the person who I can tell everything too. Other than Rose and Scorpius. but Rose is gone now and I feel empty inside.
"You okay? You don't seem it" "Rose is dead" I sob again she hugs me and I hug her back. "Who? When? Where?"
"Last Night" I say "Forbidden Forest" "Stupid Death Eaters". "Death Eaters? Lord V- He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named Followers ?" Lily Asks "Yes them..." " We are leaving tonight prepare tell Uncle Ron and Aunt Hermione we are leaving to see if Rose is actually dead" Lily exclaims. I sigh. Laying on the bed

A/N Please help my grammar I'm only in 6th grade so please tell me if you see any grammar mistakes or have any ideas to help make the story better atleast I'm not like My Immortal's Author and that I don't have spell check and I'm too lazy to check google :P