Same story as last time, but just edited, grammar wise and content wise. Enjoy!

Stephanie's POV

I looked out the window of her foster home counselor's black Cadillac. I saw the movie lot as the car pulled up to a gate marked Gate One.

"Go right in, pass on by." The guard there said stupidly. I caught sight of his name tag, and it read Ralph.

Hmm, not so bright are ya? I thought to myself. The car pulled up to a building marked "Psychiatry." The counselor shut off the car. She led me inside and I saw a busty woman in a way- too- small nurse's dress. My counselor introduced herself, introduced me (like I couldn't do that myself), and the busty woman led them to a room marked "Dr. Otto von ScrachandSniff"

Scratchandsniff? This guy better not smell weird. I thought to myself. The woman opened the door and said;

"Dr. ScrachandSniff? Your foster child is here." Her voice was absurdly breathy. A bald man turned around to look at me. He smiled and said,

"You must be Stephanie, ya? I am Dr. Otto von ScratchandSniff, a physiatrist."

"And I'm Stephanie Holt, an orphan." I said, a bit of sarcasm creeping into my voice.

"I'm sorry about her, she's been through a lot" my counselor explained quickly, like I was some revolting, drug abusing preteen, and not some filthy, unwanted, outcast orphan who lost her whole family in a horrific car crash not 2 years ago. Dr. Scratchy, (as I call him) signed some meaningless paperwork, my counselor said,

"If you ever need me, just call me. You know my number." got my bags from her car, and left me with the physiatrist. He turned to me and said,

"I have an appointment in about 10 minutes, so you can stay if you vant."

"For you or for some other person who thinks they're going crazy?" I said the sarcasm coming back into my voice (I have bad habit of doing that).

"No, some kids that live on the lot." I looked at him with a look that clearly read, are you sure you're completely sane? apparently he got the message, because he said,

"it's not vat you think. Ze kids are ze Varner's. The CEO of Varner Bros made me to try and "de- zanatize" zem." Then the boob nurse was back, this time with 3 toon kids.