My brother remade the whole first chapter, you know what that means. You guessed it, somewhat decent writing! Yep he is going to rewrite all my chapters now, I'm very happy about that! So I don't have to worry about my sucky skills corrupting my own work, cause its my brother! The plot is still of my own creation, but of course having a BROTHER as editor he can help with ideas as well!plus we have a computer so it could be a lot easier. Hope you enjoy!
Here's a link to my brother's page:KnuxJoethetroopa9314 | FanFiction warning he used to write a lot worse.
Aaron & Alexander: prologue
Aaron stoially walked up to the door of the principal Delvin's office almost as stocally turned the doorknob a few seconds later.
Aaron wasn't very fond of showing emotions or sharing opinions,if you did people would notice and judge you.
Aaron wasn't very fond of being judged either.
Aaron cracked the door open and peered inside,the 1st thing he saw was the principle who seemed to be talking to someone. Intrested Aaron cracked the door open wider.
"You might as well just come in Burr, you're not slick."
Aaron opened the door all the way he then realized that Principle Devin had been talking to a fellow student.
"No need to be rude Alex" Said the Principle, Alexanders smug grin became a respectable one in 10 seconds flat.
"Sorry Burr" Said Alex,Burr kept staring at Alex.
"Much better" Remarked Principle Delvin."Aaron this is Alexander, he's new to this school Alex and I decided we would need someone to show him around."
Aaron was annoyed he didn't have time to inform the clueless child of all the ins and outs of the Broadway junior high. Principle Delvin noticed Burr's disgusted expression, Alex did too. "Now Aaron, I promise he won't cause you much trouble,you two may get along"
"Fine" spat Aaron, Aaron turned around, "follow me" he gestured Aaron to Alex. Alex gave Aaron a glare but decided to follow, no need to cause more problems.
They walked through the hallways,both silent. Alex of course got bored of the tension,and started to to talk.
"I think we started on the wrong foot, my name is Alexander Hamilton, What is yours." Alex stuck his hand out, Aaron proceeded to shake hands with Burr. " Aaron Burr" responded Aaron,he then reached in his book bag for something. "Sorry I wasn't in a pleasant mood earlier .." 'still not' he thought.
"Yes it is quite alright,To be honest I wouldn't want to be showing a new kid around either." Alex got his schedule to see his upcoming class. " It appears I have History next, It is quite interesting how history is suppose to be about real events but in each one there is a lot of mysteries yet to be discovered by man-" he was interrupted by Aaron however...
"Oh cool I have to same class as you the same course."
"That's awesome! We can sit next to each other and share are guesses about each mystery we come across on,we may even learn about one today! Maybe one has been solved,like from 2,000 years ago or even last year! I can't Wait for it! T-" He was interrupted by Aaron again
" That's great and all, but here is a little advice. Talk less, smile more! Don't let them know what your against or what your for! Fools who run their mouths end up dead..." Aaron looked at Alex with a grave expression, Alex brushed it off, knowing that's never gonna happen. He has been talking all his life,he never died...yet.
" Sure...anyways lets get some breakfast,I am hungry!"
"We have a good 30 minutes so sure."
After going to breakfast,Alex was fuming.
"WHY IS BREAKFAST SO EXPENSIVE?!" Alex asked, Aaron shrugged not knowing the answer."We have to fix this, no one should be paying 10 dollars for a stale breakfast pizza!" Alex went in his backpack to grab a paper and pen. Aaron shook his head, of course he wouldn't listen to his advice.
"I admire you battling for what you want, But the teachers wouldn't care about us complaining about Lunch prices"
"They should care! There job is to make sure that we get to college,how will we focus without breakfast!'' Alex exclaimed while he sat at his desk next to Aaron's, he started to write.
"How would we know that the teachers and The principal even choose how much breakfast and lunch cost? They could have someone else handle it, like there own Secretary or Treasury?" After Aaron asked that,Alex stopped writing. Aaron knew he never thought of that,Alex balled up his paper.
"Fine smarty pants, I'll ask who the Secretary or Treasury is, then write them a letter, tell em to send the letter. Get lots of students on my side by getting them to sign a paper, Tell him to send that to the Secretary or Treasury. I can then keep sending letter until they respond, if it comes to it talk to them IN PERSON about the stupid prices. See how it goes from there."
He proceeded to do just that.
Him asking! :
"Hey!"
"Oh yes Alexander,what brings you here? Aren't you suppose to be going home?"
"um yeah,but I have a very important Question to ask you. Who is the Schools Secretary or Treasury?"
"Oh,what makes you-''
"answer the question." Alex snarled
The principle hesitates,wondering to answer the boy or not. Looking at Alexander,he knew he was serious and finally answered.
"His name Is Edward Williams, The Treasurer. He is a fine man, Always caring about the children. The founder of this school's Family trusted him with all their hearts-"
"Thanks"
Alex dashed away.
The students:
"Edward Williams you will never see what is coming to you!" Alexander said as sat at his desk in history class. Aaron looked at him confused,before he could speak Alexander turned to him with a smirk. " Hey Aaron-since your my guide, be the first to sign this!" He shoved the paper in Aaron's hand.
Aaron looked at the paper and read it,this is what it says:
Hello fellow students it appears to me we have a problem. You guys will totally agree that the prices for school food is just wrong! Why pay 10.00 for a meal that we are suppose to eat everyday,for a whole week that's $50.00 there. We shouldn't have to do that,this school can do fine with 20 bucks a week. How about the price of $4,now that's better. Would you help me get to that point? Sign below if you (and I know you do) AGREE!
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3._
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Aaron was amazed how Alex wanted this so really MUST be important to him! After all the students rolled into class,Alexander began to get inpatient.
"Aaron,how was it." He didn't respond making Alex worry " Was it that bad, I knew it. I went to direct...or something. Maybe I should give this u-"
Aaron finally said something "THIS IS GREAT! This sure would get them! Sorry for doubting you Alexander...maybe this would work."
That made Alexander's Face beam,Aaron had a slight smile on his face. Aaron signed the paper,Alexander snatched it right after.
"Thanks Burr you have been an okay guide for me this whole week, and a great person to have a conversation with. Even if I think your advice is stupid,I would like you to be my *COUGH*, friend." Even if he whispered the last part, Aaron heard it loud and clear.
He actually wants to be MY friend...wow...' Aaron thought
" Okay Students settle down,Lets start our lesson!" said as he passed out paper to everyone in the class "Today we will fill out the blanks in the notes, since we finished Ancient Japan we will be starting-"
Alexander threw up all over the floor, Somehow he saved the paper for the Treasurer. Everyone except the teacher and Aaron ran to one side of the room away from Alexander. They started to talk about him...
"EW, That new kid is nasty!"
"He should have at least tried to hold it in..."
"I bet he at frogs,look ITS ALL GREEN"
" Haha He's a frog eater."
Then they all began to chant
" FROG EATER FROG EATER,NEW KIDS A FROG EATER!"
Aaron had enough,the teacher called the janitor,and Alex hid his face in shame.
Aaron's blood began to fry,it sizzled more than it has ever. This was so childish,They could at least stand away quietly! This was getting his nerves, Then they opened their mouths again.
"I suppose Aaron eats frogs with him!"
"HAHAHA That makes so much se-'
Aaron interrupted them.
" ALL OF YOU ARE OUTTA OF YOUR GOD-DAMN MINDS! ALEXANDER THREW UP AND YOU MAKE FUN OF HIM? WHAT THE HELL! Of all things you should be worried about is if he eats frogs?! What about if he is sick,how would you feel if you threw up and everyone was laughing and making fun of you?"
There was silence,Alex lifted his head up and smiled a little. Aaron took a deep breath while he turned to Alexander,not waiting for a answer from the students.
"Are you okay Alexander?" He asked now very calm,but worried.
"I-I am okay,Just a little light-headed..." Alexander answered quietly while he tried to slowly lifted his head, Aaron pinned his arms down.
" Put your head down Alexander,I will get the nurse and you some water."
Alex nodded, and did just as he was told. Aaron turned to the class and put his index finger over his lips for them to be quiet, The janitor just arrived in the classroom. Aaron then jogged out, not wanting to waste anymore time.
Alexanders POV
Aaron is full of surprises,never would have thought he would stand up to me of all people. I hope this means he is my friend,since he never said anything yet. My head hurts...Hope he hurries up,I feel weird in this darkness. Maybe I could slowly lift my head up again..
No ones POV
Alex slowly lifted his head up,he still felt a little light-headed. The first thing he saw were the students reading books or on there phones, man Aaron did make them shut up. A peer lifted there head and looked at him, they had a look of concern. I did a slight smile hoping they would leave me alone, but they got up and put their phone in their pocket. They walked towards me, and looked me straight into my eyes.
"I apologize for the classes behavior towards you,I didn't have the voice at the time to stop it. As you can see..." They has a slight husky voice,that was quiet and soft. " I have lost my voice...from allergies,...Sorry to bother you...But you should put your head back down. Burr would be upset if he found you like this..." They Gestured to Alexander,He assumed he meant him sitting up. So Alexander slowly nodded,and put his head back down.
A few seconds later Aaron busted in with a water bottle and the nurse,he was huffing and puffing as he walked towards the student and Alex. Aaron had his eyebrows burrowed when he saw the student,and he asked:
"Why are you over here,Shouldn't you be across the room Madison?" Aaron snarled as Madison winced,Before things got further Alex butted in.
"He just came to apologize Aaron,He wasn't part of the Teasing since he lost his voice due to..." Alexander spoke threw his arms,with is head still down. He didn't know if he should say allergies or not though,Madison understood to answer right away.
"Allergies,There was to much pollen outside and I forgot to take my medicine." Madison answered just as soft and gravely as before, Aaron nodded but still was unsure to believe him. The bell rang,class was over and the five minute transmission was starting.
"Okay Alexander,drink some of the water. Then I will check your temperature" The Nurse said as she took the water from Aaron, opened it. Then gave it to Alexander.
Alexander carefully sat up, took the bottle. He then took some sips making sure it won't make him barf again,before drinking lots more. Finishing the water in seconds. Madison,Aaron, and the nurse looked at him in concern,but quickly fixed their expressions. Alex noticed this,but didn't say anything. The nurse got the thermometer, and put a plastic cover over it.
"Okay Alexander, lift your tongue up" said the Nurse as Alex did just that,She then put the thermometer in his mouth. "Now close your mouth" Alex did that half a second later. The thing beeped,The nurse took it out and it read.
98.8
It wasn't the best it could be but,it was pretty good...
So why was he sick?
That is part 1,since I am getting impatient. Hope you enjoyed!
