I rewrote this poem AGAIN thanks to the wonderful help of PrideIsArrogance.
Disclaimer: I do not own anything of DBZ. It all belongs to Akira Toriyama and others. If you sue me, the only thing you get is a lazy computer and two mean dogs.
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It Was Raining
It was raining when my best friend died
It was raining when he fought his last fight
His name, I will not tell
Nor the reason why he fell
He trained me to be strong
But I was weak and now he's gone
It was raining when my best friend died
It was raining when he fought his last fight
He fought his whole life
And peace was his strife
Nothing else mattered at all
Nothing untill his fall
It was raining when my best friend died
It was raining when he fought his last fight
He died in the rain
Without any fame
You won't know his name
I was the one to blame
It was raining when my best friend died
It was raining when he fought his last fight
Now I'm the one dieing
I say his name, sighing
I see his face up in the sky
And peaceful I die
It is raining now and it will be raining forever
Authore's notes: Hope you liked it. I personally think it's better than the first AND the second but I let you decide.
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