Forgiveness is for the Weak.
Son Pan, 21, abandoned in the USA. Her world has been turned upside down since she was left with a cousin who couldn't care less about her. Eventually she leaves and befriends a girl named Ari who seems to be more than she lets on. She helps Pan to be stronger to be more intelligent and at the same time have fun. After 13 years her family makes contact with her and asks her to come back to Japan. What will she do, can she forgive them for what they have done. No. The main question here is, is she willing to forgive them.
Please review this is my first story I really want to know what my writing is like. Thanks so much if you do
Disclaimer: I don't own DBZ (I'm only obsessed with it) trust me if I did I would be swimming in money at the moment.
Forgiveness is for the Weak
Prolong
"Mummy, daddy. Please don't go please" cried a 7 year old Pan as she watched her parents turned to leave. She didn't know what she has done wrong to make them go away, but what ever it was she was sorry for it. She was sorry for everything she has done, for them to leave her like this.
"Panny please you have to stay here, you have to get a good education and live your life to the fullest" said Videl softly
"Pan you know we're doing this for your own good. You are staying with a very nice cousin so off you go" urged Gohan but still Pan held back
"I don't want to go, I don't want a good education if it means being away from you, please take me with please." Pan said as she cried harder.
"No Pan you are staying here. That's the end of the story," said Gohan in a voice that he has never used before and he never wanted to use again.
"Yes Pan I'm sorry but your staying and that is that. We will see you again in a few months when you have settled in "said her mother in the same tone.
"No please don't leave me, don't leave me I'll do anything just take me with you please, please, PLEASE" screamed Pan as she watched her parents walk away from her. "PLEASE, DON'T GO" she screamed even louder. But it was no use they had already disappeared.
Pan's only light from that moment on was the thought that her parents would come back and take her home to Japan where she belonged. Little did she know she wasn't going to see them again for a long time to come and during that time she was going to learn the harshness of life from the most unlikely person.
Thanks for reading please review, I would really appreciate it. Love Jewels
Son Pan, 21, abandoned in the USA. Her world has been turned upside down since she was left with a cousin who couldn't care less about her. Eventually she leaves and befriends a girl named Ari who seems to be more than she lets on. She helps Pan to be stronger to be more intelligent and at the same time have fun. After 13 years her family makes contact with her and asks her to come back to Japan. What will she do, can she forgive them for what they have done. No. The main question here is, is she willing to forgive them.
Please review this is my first story I really want to know what my writing is like. Thanks so much if you do
Disclaimer: I don't own DBZ (I'm only obsessed with it) trust me if I did I would be swimming in money at the moment.
Forgiveness is for the Weak
Prolong
"Mummy, daddy. Please don't go please" cried a 7 year old Pan as she watched her parents turned to leave. She didn't know what she has done wrong to make them go away, but what ever it was she was sorry for it. She was sorry for everything she has done, for them to leave her like this.
"Panny please you have to stay here, you have to get a good education and live your life to the fullest" said Videl softly
"Pan you know we're doing this for your own good. You are staying with a very nice cousin so off you go" urged Gohan but still Pan held back
"I don't want to go, I don't want a good education if it means being away from you, please take me with please." Pan said as she cried harder.
"No Pan you are staying here. That's the end of the story," said Gohan in a voice that he has never used before and he never wanted to use again.
"Yes Pan I'm sorry but your staying and that is that. We will see you again in a few months when you have settled in "said her mother in the same tone.
"No please don't leave me, don't leave me I'll do anything just take me with you please, please, PLEASE" screamed Pan as she watched her parents walk away from her. "PLEASE, DON'T GO" she screamed even louder. But it was no use they had already disappeared.
Pan's only light from that moment on was the thought that her parents would come back and take her home to Japan where she belonged. Little did she know she wasn't going to see them again for a long time to come and during that time she was going to learn the harshness of life from the most unlikely person.
Thanks for reading please review, I would really appreciate it. Love Jewels
