Battles
Hi this here to improve how I write battles. I need to improve on battles for all of my stories. So I will write them then you tell me where my gaps are. This is me trying to write the best I can so some are a lot worse.
Round one: Ghost the Marowak vs. Splash the Vulpix
"In the blue corner we have Ghost the Marowak coming in at level 20 in her first ring fight. Now in the red corner comes Splash the Vulpix level 19 also in her first ring fight," the announcer cried.
The two pokemon stood in their allocated corners. Their trainers whispering strategies to them. Both pokemon walked toward each other growled. "I want a nice clean fight so begin," the referee shouted.
Ghost started off by throwing her bone at Splash's feet trying to trip her up, Splash jumped but got hit in the back when the bone twirled back to Ghost.
Splash fell down but flinching got back up. She quickly launched an ember at Ghost. It was quickly launched so it missed but it did startle Ghost so it gave Splash got a good chance to aim an ember at Ghost. This one hit directly. Ghost staggered back a few steps before regaining balance.
Both readied themselves for attack. Splash blew another ember as Ghost chucked her bone. Both attacks missed and Splash blew a smokescreen. Ghost could see to catch her bone so it hit her in the face. Then Splash hit Ghost with quick attack. Ghost stumbled weakened a lot by the attack.
While Splash was still close Ghost head butted Splash.Splash fell down. Ghost was about to wack down Splash when she breathed another smokescreen. She quick attacked out of there. When the smoke cleared away both stood weakened at opposite corners of the ring.
Ghost threw her bone again. Splash didn't attempt to dodge instead when the bone came near her she crunched down on it. Splash held on tight as the bone tried to get back to its master. Splash threw it away and opened her mouth in a flamethrower. It hit directly.
Ghost staggered around trying to regain her balance but she fell down. The referee went down next to Ghost and yelled, "One… Two… Three you're out. Splash is the winner".
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