Ok, so this is my first story, so be nice! I really like feedback because I like to know what you are thinking about my story. If you just want to chat or give me ideas I would also like that. Thank you! I do not own anything!!! But I wish I did


It was a rainy day in the small town of Forks, Washington – as usual. Renesmee

Cullen put her hoodie over her head and started heading home. "Hey Rennie, wait up!" Bill Husk, Renesmee's best mortal friend hollered as he ran towards her. "Hey Rennie, long time no see." Bill smiled through his clump of braces, "where were you during lunch today?"

Inside Renesmee's mind: Oh Crap! What do I tell him? I can't tell him that I had testing for Juneau Freedom High School in Alaska becaume I grow up really quickly so I need to move out of here - fast! Let's see: Doctor – that "happened" last week. Funeral, that "happened" 5 days ago…. ummmm….

"I had to go to the dentist" Renesmee lied quickly. Bill snorted, "The dentist? It takes way longer to be at the dentist, besides, you have perfect teeth."

"Yeah, I know but I had to go for a quick checkup."

"Yeah right, quick checkup my ass."

"Bill, I'm serious!"

"Fine, fine, whatever you say Rennie" Bill shot back at Renesmee and quickly walked away in the direction of his house.

Inside Renesmee's mind:Phew! At least he gave up, but I think that this time he really doesn't believe me. I have used too many exuses on him, this is bad, he won't believe me again. Oh God, I feel so bad to have made him so mad. Stupid High School Test…

As Renesmee paced slowly towards her house she heard a loud "THUMP" and it wasn't the kind of "THUMP" that you would hear when the sofa crashes into the wall. It was a large sound; a human would say it was the sound of lighting. It wasn't, it was the sound of a fight - a vampire fight. Renesmee dropped her books and bags underneath a willow tree and sprinted towards the noise. When she finally reached a large field, she could see Alice and Emmet approaching. Renesmee turned around and saw two blurry objects crash into each other, "THUMP".

Inside Renesmee's mind: Oh God, this cannot be happening.



Thank you for reading! Sorry that it was so short, but I really didn't know how to start my story. I hope it was ok… please, please, please, gimme your feedback!!! I would really like to know your thoughts and ideas so that I can write the next chapter.