I do not own death note , This is a fan made version of Death notes detective war between Eraldo Coil and Deneuve and L
Some ideas are based on the game: L The Prologue to Death Note Rasen no Wana
I do not own any of the death note content and this is only fan ficton and ideas
Enjoy the first chapter :)
Ants64
Detective war against the real Eraldo Coil and Deneuve
L Vs Eraldo coil and Deneuve
Chapter 1: UnreaL
L, The world's greatest detective. He had solved countless cases and always won his case.
Then there was Eraldo coil, The world's second best detective, and was easily corrupted
Then came Deneuve , The third best detective this world would ever see.
But how did all these become one? How did L become both Eraldo coil and Deneuve?
This is the story, of L taking his place as world best detective and gaining Eraldo and Deneuve Aliases.
This is the Detective war.
19, may 2001
Drug dealings had increased by a large amount over the following four month at an alarming rate, this was not only seen by L and the police service but the NPA as well had a meeting about such.
"This drug dealing is going to overthrowing Cites with in japan and has to be solved or otherwise we could have a global crisis on are hands" said the UK leader of security and leader of police force.
"-But remember what happened to the 7 Police members we sent into the warehouse connected to the recent drug increase. They was not only gunned down before getting near the entrance but then when a squad team came down they was found to be Traps everywhere" Shouted the Japan's team
"Well then we will have to call in One of the three..."
There was silence, As the three they talked about would be...
L, Coil, and Denenuve
"-But I hear they are all impossible to contact...And is Coil and Deneuve not already involved, We heard they was not attempting such a case ..."
"Then we have no chosen but to call in L..."
Everyone feel silence once more...
L was known to the NPA as the most childish and immature Detective , and only took on the cases he personally though was worthy of his time (If it has less then £100,000 at stake or 100 lives, otherwise L did not take any interest at all).
Suddenly everyone mumbled to their teams, until loud foot step walked down the hallway diminishing the sound from the room for the very last time.
"L is already over look this case" A Deep and secretive voice had spoken, as if he or she had done this a thousand times
A dark looking figure, who went by the name watari Spoke on L's be-half. Watari Placed down a laptop on the front desk and opened it, then an Old font L with a pitch white background popped up, then a voice spoke. So L spoke though a Computer with a synthetic voice effect to protect his identity and had talked to the NPA before with past case he had solved.
"Hello everyone at the NPA, I am L" L always spoke in a non-toned voice...It seemed he lacked emotion to speak with any thought, but then all he would ever speak about is cases, so it seemed L focused only on his work, and nothing but it!
"I'm here today as I hear the dramatic rise in not only black market drugs have risen but also to say that Two detective have gone rogue ,and I'm sure you want me to fill those details in...however i cannot in till the case is solved otherwise things could get worst then they already are...It could blow the whole case out of the water and in to a fire...So to speak. "L waited for a reply, but the NPA was outstand by the information they had all just been given! "W-wait...rogue...Detectives?" Slowly the talking began...then worry and fear hit all of them
L was talking about Eraldo Coil and Denenuve, being the ones who had gone rogue.
Panic hit all the countries police Leaders. "Oh god, There no stopping them" "We can't control this..." "What the hell, how did they turn?" "We should just give in now and let the black market case slip"
"Please be silent! L has not finished!"
"I plan on sending one person to go in to the warehouse and I will guild him though everything needed. Maybe a FBI member"
Raye penber took the stand "We cannot send in are best...sadly they are on a mission already and Making it impossible to -" Raye's words was cut off by L
"We do not need a good agent...No, A rookie maybe would be best!"
Everyone was left wondering what L had in mind...And was left that way
"So it set , America will send a rookie agent with a phone and hand-gun in but first tell them to ,go to the hotel on screen Watari will tell the rookie some...Secret information".
21, may 2001
A rookie agent named Mike Tyson (middle aged, dark brown hair and slim) walked to the "Manapalise Hotel" (A five star of it time hotel) ,and Met up with watari
"uumm...Are you Wa-" his words was cut off as the man grab him and thrower him into the back of a limo and got in the front
"What the hell?" the agent cough a bit from such a sudden move ,then looked up to see a man who was crouched on the seats in front of him. Jet black hair that was a mess and probably un-tangled for months...no Years, Eyes that had bags under them as if the guy had never slept, He wore what was known as "basic clothing" A pair of blue jeans and a long sleeved white shirt with the cuffs done up
The man in front nervously bit his thumb nail and then smiled.
There was everything odd about this man, and to top everything off, he was eating a tray of sweets and luxuries Liqueurs (maybe some of the finest in the world).
"Forgive watari for being so...rude but we had to make sure you were quick and did not talk...The area was bugged and had a spy nearby..." the man spoke and scoffed down a few sweet at the same time.
"Oh ok..." Mike slowly got off the limo floor and sat in the seat opposite the man. "May I ask...Who are you?" Mike had cleared his basic training but was only told little about outside stuff like L and the detectives out there.
"Oh please forgive me, I cannot give you my real name but, I am L."
Mike Eye's opened wide "What? Yo-you can't be L? Can you?"
"Well...If im not then why would watari be here? And why would I be hiding in this limo?"
Mike was ...amazed on how L was not how he imagined!
"So how are you feeling towards this Mike?" He spoke almost robotic as a PC voice but, more human-like.
"Umm...How can I answer that with no details? I have not even been told what I'm doing here, So how am I meant to feel!" Mike was getting worried. Raye had said he was doing a big task but never specified the risks. He did not know he had such a heavy task and It would change the world if he failed.
"I had a feeling you would answer my question like that... hence why i hade the liberty of bring this to you" L took out an old VCR caste and inserted it into the Limo's DVD /VCR system and a Tv slowly move out of the celling and folded so the agent could see it.
"This VCR contains the information about most of the black market and as you see on the graph...the data has risen in the last 3 weeks by 4 times its normal amount...From this we can also see the connection of the culprits being terrorists and using the drugs as a cover-up or a way to obtain money so they can produce their goal a lot quicker" L spoke swiftly knowing that they had little time before they set of to solve the case, However if any little detail was missed it could make a bad ending. "We also have received word from the terrorists are self, using a bribe to say that we help them ,However I only care for justice ...not money" There was a pause as L though for a second then grabbed a liqueur from the table and placed it on his tongue, he then slowly withdrew his tongue back into his mouth like a frog had a fly on his tongue, he sucked the sweet into his mouth never to be seen again.
"We have also received word from the corrupted detectives saying We can join them, Or ignore them...But if we intervene, We will pay for it" L looked out the window with a blank expression and then back to Mike who was still taking in all the information.
"Oh...and before we continue , You cannot return as a FBI member Or if you do ,You will not give any details about the case at all...otherwise You will lose your job...!" L needed to be kept a secret with not Face nor name ,or even locations give out to anyone. Nobody needed to make links that L visited Hotels and live always moving, but L did have one base. The wammy's house. L had already planned on going to the wammy house, not just for the kids of the place but to set up an insecure link between L and the FBI, and more importantly Eraldo Coil and Denenuve. L knew ...No L had planned that Eraldo Coil and Denenuve team up and take on L ,So L could have proof he was the best by beating the world second and third greatest detectives of all time.
"detective do you have the blank phone? Or a FBI Phone just in case?" L needed a contact number and so he could gain information on the inside, Could also protect the detective from the outside.
It was a clever move!
L had no link nor trace back to the detective even if he was caught, and could still be saved by L and the NPA or FBI.
Details was given to L and L gave most of the details (Only the needed details) to Mike ,who was still confused with so much information ,but understood the important things!
24, may 2001 7:45 AM
L had made his move picking out the rookie as a pawn in this game and Eraldo Coil and Deneuve turn was up, L wait to see the move they would make.
Watching countless monitors he quickly saw Mike walk into the warehouse and then around a bit.
"Nothing look odd or out of place so why was those police members shot before they could enter?...there nothing here to hide! It's all worthle-" Mike heard a stun gun being turned on then a explosion but before he could turn was shocked till he was out cold.
...
Mike groaned as he woke up...his vision was off, He's gun was stolen and all he had on him was his phone. He also did not feel good and was not in the same spot he had fell from...
He was in what looked like a shabby looking hotel room.
"BEEP BEEP" his phone went off. "oohhh...god...I feel sick, Hey...my phone going off?". He opened the phone and looked at the number, but he could not find out who it was in-till he entered the call...
"A restricted number?" He quickly turned it on and instantly heard a synthetic voice. "Are you Mike tyson?" The voice spoke causally in case he was not or had dialed the wrong number (If he had dialed the wrong number then the problem would worry a innocent by-stander.)
"Y-...yes I am...Who speaking?" The voice on the other end waited a short while then spoke again "L".
"Ok what just happened L? I remember being hit by a shocker but that all..." Mike spoke quickly in case someone was in the next room or if he had been bugged.
"You were shocked yes, and then two armed men Picked you up and threw you into a truck...from that i have no clue where you are as the signal is being untraceable...! The explosion was just a distraction from the main entrance"
L knew it would not be traceable, but he had no need to trace it. He was currently at the Wammy's house, in Winchester, England.
"...s-...so you have no idea where i am?" Mike was worried, He could be anywhere and be locked in or used hostage by the terrorists
"No...I can calculate your location within a few minutes, however it not needed..."
How can it not be needed? Are you saying my life replaceable? How does L not need this?
"...Please forgive me, I mean i do not need the location because I know Eraldo Coil and Denenuve have set it up like a game, so please do not fear the moving around the room, however do not touch anything yet!" L had drop the synthetic voice, but still seemed as cold as he normally talked anyway so it did not matter Mike if L still has the synthetic voice on.
"...Ok I deducted that...There nothing to worry about in this room, however i will tell you to stop once you finish searching the room..." L was sure that something in the room was needed otherwise why have the library of picking this room with a door and no other exits.
"Oh so...I'm meant to find something here?" Mike looked around moving pillows, draws and even opened up the bed sheets ...nothing
"You missed something...Is there a TV in the room?" L spoke and mike looked at the TV set
It was an older looking television that was big and bold with in the room, looked like it was unused for years. "Yes there is a TV in here, so...?" Mike could not understand why he wanted to know if a TV was in an old shabby hotel?
"Look around near it or on it for any dust that been removed...or even a sign of tempering with the TV..." Mike looked around careful not to move any of the dust
...!
There was tampering the screws had been completely removed and the TV could if wish been opened! Mike instantly opened it to see a small screwdriver and hammer. "Ok...I found inside a screwdriver and hammer inside the TV, was this all that was meant to be there?"
"Yes, Tools for later on puzzles however I'm sure we missed something...Is there a locked draw or maybe under the bed a locked Box?" L was so sure...had he been there he would have already found all the items and been moving on but Mike was sure he checked everything he could, but he was only a rookie so L did not push no more than what was normal or needed of him.
Mike moved to the draws and checked them again..." No there all unlocked...Now moving towards the bed."
Mike ducked to see under the bed. A spider-web strung at the very back of the bed side towards the wall, and a small jewel box sat in the middle of the floor under the bed. He carefully removed the box from under there and placed it on the table nearby. Of course as L said it would be locked so he used the screw driver to de-lock it and opened the box, inside remained capsule with a red, green, and blue wire running from the top till the bottom of it.
"L I found something...Should i turn on video visual?" mike pushed a small button on his phone to make the camera on the phone give out a video feed as well
...!
L was alarmed by what was on camera
"Quickly Disarm, that thing! It's a bomb!" L shouted down the phone as he watched the video feed-back on his PC which he had linked up with phone to make the synthetic voice easier to use on different systems.
"What?...Ok…ok...I just need to calm down...If I remember electricity flows to the stop-break system if I can cut the wire to the bomb and not the stopping system I should be ok...If I remember..." Mike slightly pinched on each of the wires, then keeping a hold of the red one drawled out the screwdriver and applied pressure to the wire he was holding on to using the screw driver, in till it snapped the cable. The little capsule was disarmed and Mike twisted the outer side of it to open it up and disconnected the wiring completely.
There was a small clip of paper inside, with the wording "Well done from J"
...What?
Mike looked again at the paper and L had to read it twice too!
"Well done from J? What that mean?" Mike was confused but L was mentally cursing.
"They are mocking us...And the, from J is an alias ...It may be Coil but i think this is Deneuve work!" L Gritted his teeth then popped a sugar cube into his mouth whole!
"How can you tell? Have you seen their work before?" Mike just need to know a little more detail about who had planned this sort of work, that way he could find them easier to predict or who at least the puzzle was targeted at Him or L!
"well Deneuve tries to get under the skin of the person he after normal...By teasing or joking, And even going as far to humiliate them, Just to get them to say they are the culprit...However in this case it to stall us from finding the truth out!" L was no laughing at Deneuve little "Joke" but he has found something good about it.
"...check the back Deneuve normal leaves a hidden clue behind or error in some cases, hence why he only the third best! He easily tracked!" L had his own chance to mock him behind his back ,after some of his past work was sloppy and sometimes even left a case unfinished because he could not be bothered.
Of course Deneuve was watching and had cracked a smile
"Hahaha...That one was meant to be solved ,Fool...the clue is worthless and The door is trapped ,If you even try opening it without disarming the trap the door blows and so does the pawn in this little game...L You so gullible, You think you can just walk in and we would not know you had this planned? Or are you just trying to play the game with your own rules?...No matter" Deneuve smirked at the TV monitors in a secret room somewhere in till a giant EC in old font came up, Deneuve quickly placed the headset on.
"What the hell you calling for? Darn it...If this is taped or bugged I'm so blaming your for are capture! What do you want?" Deneuve was a very un-kind person when he was bugged or told what to do. "God sake are you still in the building...We told yo-" His words was cut off but a voice shouting on the over end "I'm not gonna play by your rules...We are a team remember...The terrorists told us to work to both are needs...Not just yours, Coil!"
Eraldo growled down the microphone then cut his connection.
...What a jerk, and how the hell is he better than me if all he does is attack?...
Deneuve went back to looking at monitors for a couple of seconds...then typed a message to Coil.
