Warriors:The lost Warrior
Book one: The unavoidable storm
This is my first story/novel thingee based on Erin Hunters Warriors. I do not claim to own any warriors related ideas. However, the cats names are originally mine, and always will be. Please review, and rate. I hope to be a writer one day. Writing for the children 10+. This could make my dream come true. I need a good critique. Please help!
Allegiances
Ivyclan:
Leader: Petalstar (small pale coloured she-cat with black paws)
Deputy: Moongaze(Silver coloured tom)
Medicine cat: Liontooth(Flame coloured tom with snow white paws) apprentice-Featherpaw
Warriors:
Berrynose(Black tom with a red nose)
Ashbreeze(Grey she-cat) Apprentice: Meadowpaw
Lightningfeather(pale ginger tom with white paws) Apprentice: Shadowpaw
Silentclaw(snow white she-cat with black paws)
Cloverpelt(Light tabby she-cat)
Thistlenose(Dark tabby tom) Apprentice: Heatherpaw
Jayfeather(small grey but lithe tom)Apprentice: Darkpaw
Apprentices:
Meadowpaw:( cream coloured she-cat)
Shadowpaw:(Jet black tom)
Heatherpaw(Dark ginger pelted she-cat)
Darkpaw:( Dark tabby tom)
Featherpaw:(white she-cat)
Queens/kits:
Dawnwhisker(light ginger pelted she-cat):
kits:
Tigerkit(bright ginger tom)
Pinekit(Jet black she-cat)
Elders:
Frostmeadow(gentle white she-cat)
Mintclaw(Rough, short tempered, tabby tom)
