Story Title: Girl who had no style
Author: Romance-addictAlso if you can, I would really like to here your review of my story and tell me how good or bad I was. I would like to know what your thought was after reading my stories or chapters. If you can do this Thank you and if not, I'm glad you read my story! )
Summary of "Girl who had no style":
This story takes after "The Wallflower", but only has one guy in this story, which his name is Kyosuke Pak, and he is the nephew of Aunt May, a very wealthy lady. He goes to Korea from Japan to get $500,000 because Aunt May's husband died and he wanted $500,000 to be Kyosuke's. He'll only get the money if he makes Sakuya beautiful in one year. So he goes there thinking he'll just get $500,000 and stay with his girlfriend, Nana Takie. But with Sakuya's attitude towards beauty, she could care less and that's a problem for Kyosuke because he thought it would be easy and now, he's really regretting it. He has only one year to make her look beautiful and she doesn't listen to him at all and does only what she wants to do. Can Kyosuke turn Sakuya into a beautiful lady? Will he fall in love with her or hate her terribly? Read on and see what happens in "Girl who had no style."
Chapter 1: "The beginning of the worst"
The phone rings after two times and a
low voice answers the phone, "Hello," said Kyosuke. "Are you
almost here yet? I'm going to be late for my meeting if you come
here late, you know that right?" said Aunt May. "Yeah, yeah, I'm
almost there, just wait up," says Kyosuke.
Arriving at Aunt May's house, he's very excited and is in awe because of the huge mansion she lives in. It was really beautiful and had many flowers and plants. It also had a garden house that was really big on the side of the backyard. Then after looking around the mansion, Kyosuke walks up the stairs and bangs on the door. Bang, bang! The maid answers, "Hi, are you Mr. Pak?" "Yes, I am," says Kyosuke. Then the maid said, "This way sir." So Kyosuke follows the maid to the living room. The inside of the mansion was really elegant and bright. It was basically painted all peachy and white. It was the most beautiful mansion he has ever seen.
Sitting on the large couch, Aunt May says, "Okay, lets get this started. My nieces name is Sakuya, and I need you to make her beautiful and have manners in one year, then I'll give you $500,000 alright," says Aunt May. "Wait, I have to make a girl look beautiful in one year. Well…since Uncle said that on the letter then, I respect him and I guess I'll do it then. And, how hard can it be? I always make a few girls look beautiful." says Kyosuke. The Aunt smiles in laughter saying, "Deal?" "Okay, deal then, but you have to give me $500,000 and money to give her a make over," says Kyosuke. "Oh don't worry about the money for her, I'll give you money to buy her a whole new wardrobe, cosmetics, accessories, and other things too. So don't worry," says Aunt May. Then she told the maid to get Sakuya. "Here is Sakuya. Sakuya, this is Kyosuke. He'll be helping you out with your looks and your style. So listen to him, okay?" said Aunt May. "Uhhhhhhhhhh…well, we can always cut off the deal. You know? Well as a matter of fact, le..let's cut off the deal right now okay? Bye…" said Kyoske in a tremble and scared voice. "Where do you think your going huh? A deal is a deal, you ain't leaving no where until you 're done with making Sakuya beautiful, you got it? Now, here are a few thousands right now to get started. I'll give you more soon. But you, you better do your job. I got to go now Sakuya," said Aunt May in a mean terribly mean voice. Kyosuke stands there and looks at her, thinking in his mind, "Why did I get involved in this? I mean look at her, she isn't pretty, has no style, has no personality. Look at her hair, it's messy, scrubby, and her bangs are so long the it covers half her face and makes her look even more scary." "Hey, what are you looking at, huh?" said Sakuya in a low and rough voice. "Well, lets, uh, go to the salon and get your hair and nails done first," said Kyosuke. "How bout some other day? I don't really feel like going today," said Sakuya and walked off to her room.
The next day Kyosuke goes to meet up with his girlfriend, Nana Takie. Nana is a very popular girl at school she sings and dances and is good at both. But she's the type of girl who gossips and is mean among the unpopular girls. Nana sees Kyosuke walking towards the school and yells out his name, "Kyosuke!" He smiles and runs to her as fast as he could and hugged her tightly. Nana was very happy and as her friends were coming by, Nana showed Kyosuke to everyone. Then they walked to the park and talked to each other about how much they missed each other. Nana then said, "Oh, we'll get to spend so much time together and we'll see each other everyday now!" "Yeah, I'll be with you and we'll spend time together," said Kyosuke. Then he was thinking in his mind, "Oh shit, I have to make that ugly girl beautiful. Shit!" He then says to her, "Umm, I forgot something." "Okay, go ahead and get it," she said. "No, I mean, I forgot to tell you something," said Kyosuke. "What is it?" said Nana. "Well…well…well…I have business to also take care of, so I won't be able to see you much," said Kyosuke. "WHAT?" said Nana in a rough voice. Then suddenly thinking in her mind, "This is a great way to dump him." "WHY? WHY? Huh?" "Well, it's a business problem okay," said Kyosuke. "I don't believe you. You just want to go and mess around with other girls right?" said Nana. "No, that's not…," said Kyosuke but Nana interferes and says, "You know what? Were through, I don't care anymore, we are through!" "No, Nana, it's not what you think it is. I didn't even explain everything to you yet," said Kyosuke as Nana runs away crying her eyes out. But he thought to himself and decides to just buy her gifts because she always forgiven him by giving her gifts.
Rumors spread fast and now even Sakuya heard about the news. She went to go ask why Nana decided to let go of him. Nana, in a very despicable voice said, "Look, ugly girl, I don't know you, so get away from me. Okay?" But Sakuya wouldn't leave and so she says to Nana, "Look, don't be mad at him and dump him. His uncle the pasted away not too long ago died and writing a letter to make me look beautiful in one year. And so it's not his fault so don't be mad at him. He's a very nice guy and you should respect him because you'll never ever find another guy like him. Also he'll be getting $500,000 for giving me a makeover. So please don't hate him, okay? Also don't tell anybody I told you this unless you want your boyfriend to be put down." Sakuya walks away and Nana laughs and says to herself, "I'm going to be rich! Yes! I guess now I can't flirt anymore. But now, it's even better being with Kyosuke, I'll be also rich too. Nana laughs to herself in such a mean and scary voice.
Kyosuke runs to Nana as he saw her in the park waiting for him because she had called him. Kyosuke said, "Here, I hope you'll like it." He handed over chocolates, roses, and a diamond bracelet. Nana smiles and says, "Thank you Kyosuke, It was very wrong of me to just no here you out. So please tell me your story." Then Kyosuke tells her everything and she said, "I forgive you Kyosuke, lets be with each other again, okay?" Kyosuke was so happy that he hugged her tightly. They were again together. Then as Sakuya looks from afar and smiles with glad that they're back together, she walks home to her mansion.
