I rewrote this seeing how bad the original was hope you enjoy…..
It was Valentine's Day and at the DWMA the students along with a few teachers were celebrating this day of love as it was meant to be. As Maka sat by herself reading under a tree in DWMA's outdoor cafeteria she began to notice that a lot of people had received Valentines and were now happy couples.
"Hey Maka I GOT A VALENTINE" Tsubaki squealed with delight as she ran and squeezed Maka into a huge hug. As Maka began to read it she could totally tell it was Black Star who wrote it.
Tsubaki
As any star like I would do on Valentine's Day I am just writing to say I Love You and will you go out with me? Meet me in the library before school ends.
Love your secret admirer
"LUCKY! I wish I had a secret admirer..." Maka stated sadly
"I bet you do but he just hasn't put a note in your locker yet" Tsubaki answered
"Yea…If I could have someone to love me that would be amazing…or even better someone to kiss me." Maka added slightly embarrassed as Tsubaki looked up surprised at that comment.
"Wait you have never been kissed?" Tsubaki asked. Before she could respond a huge yes was screamed and as they looked they saw Patty jumping on Soul and kissed him. While watching this scene Maka looked sadly at the two and turned away to get her books when she saw a note sitting on top of her textbooks.
"Maka…is that what I think it is!" Tsubaki squealed with delight and watched as Maka opened the pink colored envelope. While reading Maka's eyes began glittering with delight and a huge smile came across her face.
"An admirer wants to meet me at 8:00 tonight at the basketball courts!" Maka said excitedly hugging her best friend.
"AWW HE WROTE YOU A POEM TOO! Hey I should definitely help you get ready" Tsubaki squealed excitedly.
"Well you better tell me who your admirer is after you meet him" Maka laughed. Meanwhile Tsubaki wasn't the only person enjoying this conversation. On the other side of the tree sat a very happy, symmetrical, gold eyed kid who now knew that his wish of dating Maka might come true.
