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This is my first story written in english. I hope everyone will like it ^^
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Chapter 1: Dark spirit or a light spirit
Melinda closed the door of her red jeep, walked to the door of the antique store and opened it.
"Good morning Andrea." Melinda was coming in her antique shop, walking to Andrea and looking at a box on the counter.
Have you seen any spirits here? Andrea said afraid "I heard here a few minutes ago strange breezes."
Melinda was looking around, but saw nothing then antique.
"Nope," she said tot Andrea. "but whence that box?"
"This is new stuff for the store." She looked seriously to Melinda who wasn't moving by the door.
"Is something wrong here?" Andrea asked.
"O, no." Melinda her brain wasn't in her antique shop but far away from the normal world. She was looking around in the store again, and then she saw a woman and a little boy, who was shouting to the woman. He was around the 9 or 10 years old and he had an angry looking in his eyes. His face was very pale and he had many bloodstains on his chest. Melinda was looking at him, he saw her and then he came noiseless into the store close to Melinda.
"I know you can see me," he whispered cold.
The boy disappeared very loudly and Melinda was looking apprehensive to
the door.
"That wind..." Andrea said scared. "Is this a..."
"It really is." Melinda came to the counter near by Andrea. "Let's see what's in the box."
"A head, and some other antique," Andrea said to Melinda.
"Really?" She said with a big smile on her face.
Melinda was looking at the door of her antique store. She was really confused about the ghost boy. He looked very strong, but he was very weak, Melinda thought.
"I think the ghost boy will come back again."
Melinda was looking back to Andrea, while she said that.
"I think so too." Melinda showed her a weak smile.
Something is wrong with the ghost, Andrea thought. Maybe it isn't a light spirit, but a dark spirit, about what Melinda told me.
"Mel, could it be a dark spirit?" Andrea asked scared again.
"I think he isn't, because he's a little boy around the nine or ten years old." Melinda was looking to the door again, but the woman and the boy were really gone.
"I think I'm going to take my break earlier," Melinda said, with her face facing at the door.
"Okay, be carefully Mel," her friend said a little scared again.
Melinda walked to the door, opened it and walked then to her red jeep. She looked one more time around, but saw nothing then normal people. There were no ghost near by her antique store. She moved happy in her car and fright. The ghost boy was sitting next to her.
"What are you doing here." Melinda whispered to the boy. "You supposed to be going into the light."
"Really?" The boy showed her an evil laugh.
"Yea, really." Melinda was a bit angry on the ghost.
"I STICK TO MY OWN VIEW!" he shouted to her, and then he disappeared loudly again.
Melinda fright. "What does he mean by 'I stick to my own view?' Maybe it's something with the woman."
She moved out op the car, walked to the front door of her antique store 'Same as it never was antique' and thought about what the ghost boy said again. Maybe I should took a break when Andrea took a break too.
"Back again?" Andrea asked when Melinda came in.
"Not really," she answered. "I saw the ghost boy again."
Andrea looked a little scared to Melinda.
"Are you all right?" she asked her.
"I'm fine," Melinda answered. She thought for the third time about what the ghost boy said.
"I think I take a break now," Melinda said a little confused. She looked to Andrea with a scared face, but Andrea was looking at the door.
"Be careful," she said.
Melinda laughed weak a second to Andrea and walked then to her red jeep again.
This was the first chapter of my story. I hope you had like the chapter.
I hope you will review ^^
