A poem, I guess... The first one I've published here. Tell me what you think in the review section below. Thanks!
Clary
He saw her
A girl, hidden inside a woman, hidden inside a girl
Breast opening like a swan
But closed
Wings spreading like an angel
Flying without knowing it.
Softly outspoken
She was
Lost in a line of comfort and repressed memories
She was
Seeing without understanding
She was
Turning her eyes from the eyes on her.
Head of fire
Gleaming, turning, burning
Taking down her hurdles
Hand of ice
Hard on the cold-blooded
And soft on that which lights her spark
Soul of light
Chiaroscuro
She is
Lost in lines of ichor and resurfacing memories
She is
Learning in her every stroke
She is
Quenching her eyes with the eyes on her.
He sees her.
OOOK then :) Review?
