Sex, Finally

Hey guys, my first fanfic! Tell me what you think!

"She's leaving?" Zack cried out in disbelief.

"Yes Zack, Maddie is leaving for college," Carrie said.

Zack couldn't believe it. And just when he almost got her! That made him mad. She was finally single, and so was he, and she didn't care about age anymore-

"Ding-dong," said a cheery voice from the kitchen.

"Hi, Maddie," Carrie said.

"Where are Zack and Cody?" She asked. This was partly a lie. She just wanted to see Zack.

"Cody is at Math Camp, but Zack is in their room. Why?" Carrie said.

"Oh, I don't know, I was just wondering if they wanted to play a game or something. London's out shopping, and all my friends are busy." London was shopping, but plenty of her friends weren't busy. But she had to see Zack.

"Oh, okay," Carrie said. This is my chance! Zack thought. Maddie walked in and closed the door.

"How ya doin, sweet thang?" Zack asked.

"Fine," Maddie said. Zack moved towards her. He had grown a lot, and now was as tall as her. He moved closer, and kissed her…

To Zack's surprise, Maddie didn't pull away. Instead, she pressed closer. But then, she jerked away, saying, "I've gotta go. Sorry." As she left, she handed him an envelope.

"Sorry Mrs. Martin, I forgot that I have to study for a test. See you later!" Maddie said.

"Oh, bye Maddie," Carrie said.


Zack opened the envelope. Inside was a cream-colored card with a gold border.

"You are invited to Suite 32 tonight for a fun party with Maddie," he read aloud.

"Dang it! I was hoping it would be more of a alone date, not a party…" he said. But he dealt with it. He wore a nice American Eagle button-up and khakis. Then he went to Suite 32.

When Zack opened the door, the lights were off. Is this a surprise party or something? he thought. He waited a minute, but nothing happened. Finally, he began walking around. He couldn't find a light switch. Finally he came to a door that he thought was the front door. He pulled it open.

Candles were lit around the room. Maddie was lying on the bed in a lacy red and black bra and matching panties. "Hello Zack," she said.

"Heelloo, Maddie," He said. She smiled at him seductively and went over to him. He pushed her back down and began making out with her.

"I love you Maddie," he breathed.

"I love you too," she said as she tore his shirt off. He unclasped her bra and fingered her left nipple. He began sucking on it faster and faster. Maddie let out a sexy groan. Zack sucked on the right one while she tore his shorts and boxers off.

"Goddamn it Zack you have the biggest dick I have ever seen!" she said. He moved toward her underwear and yanked it off. Her pussy was shaved and he began licking it. He licked all over her body. Then he licked her clit. "Goddamn it Zack I'm gonna cum!" She screamed. And she did, all over Zack and into his mouth. It was her first orgasm.

"Your cum is so sweet," Zack said. Maddie lunged toward his dick. She licked it and then sucked on it for a long time until he cummed. Zack instructed Maddie to go in front of him. He put a finger in her ass, then two, and so forth until his fist was in her ass. Then he stuck his dick in and moved it in and out. Maddie groaned sexily. Finally he took it out. She went over to his ass and licked it going inside. He put a finger into her clit and more until she cummed again. Then he inserted his dick into her.

"FUCK ME ZACK FUCK ME!" She screamed. And so he did. This went on for a while until finally they went and took a shower together to save time.

Maddie gave Zack a parting kiss and said, "Maybe we can do this again sometime, when I come to visit."

Zack said, "Yeah, I would like that.

How was that? Don't be too harsh, it's my first sex scene. But tell me what you thought and if I should continue it.